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-eyelashes - the Side Effect-

two taxis pursue vying for my attention eyelashes flutter all I hear is metal screeching hurriedly I left the scene *Some truth to this write apart from the eyelashes part, this actually happened last week :) * Missy Nikko's body part of choice "eyelashes" 17/04/2011

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/12/2011 7:31:00 AM

Am replying to your mold poem here, crazy me--ok, are you talking about my chocolate mold? I thought you were sending me those chocolate molds?? Where are they? Seriously, that poem is really sweet, Wilma...and my ponderings still stand--and I read your comments-- you are going cryptic on me?? what do you mean? Sorry I am clueless now-- thanking me for what & why?? sorry my mind's out the window?? eep. hugs to you :D

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2011 5:44:00 PM

Hi, Wilma! hi! hi! how are you... miss you & all here... and i so love what we women can cause with eyelash flirtations... or fluttery... enjoyed... hope you did not get yelled at..lol.. i once wrecked my car... for staring at some hot looking guy..lol... his cute face was _ the side effect... take care..p.d.

Timothy Brumley

Date: 4/19/2011 8:03:00 AM

The law of cause and effect! Jeepers creepers, careful with those peepers! And, congratulations on your lifetime membership Wilma:)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/18/2011 4:32:00 AM

haha see me lying low out the window! wow & that was just because of your eyelashes fluttering! wow! tsk tsk better wear a sign that says "warning, my beauty is hazardous to your health" heehee ;) missy hazardous, have you figured out the next body part?? I am sticking to eyes-- haha-- EYEBAGS O_o!! & Hahaha I love Sydney's comment, aww that is just the sweetest thing! :D Chris, oh Chris, where are you?? :D noticed Carolyn mentioned heart-- that's so cool- heart & eyebags in one poem! write! :)

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 4/18/2011 3:58:00 AM

Never thought of it that way, Wilma.... yup your right..lots of power there! Another nuance of life. Enjoyed

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/17/2011 6:06:00 PM

The site of a beautiful woman so creative ..I can understand the taxi dilemma Wilma.. am sure those lovely eyelashes caused quite a scene.. oh btw.. your name is now corrected luv.. enjoy a happy blessed week my friend.. batting my eyelashes ..can u see??

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 4/17/2011 11:36:00 AM

It was me trying to run over Chris, But I missed it was those eyelashes that melted me :-)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/17/2011 10:04:00 AM

Awesome, Wilma! I can see and hear this so vividly though your words. Now here's my challenge -- bodypart: heart! You and Nikko are having so much fun with this. Love, Carolyn