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-cloacked-

encompassed in ivory rhapsody she craves affection from mankind's transgressions though she's hidden, she's protected from life's perpetual spasms of disregard ~ cloaked in sheets of exaggerated obscurity ~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 12.23.19 -luloo

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John Lawless

Date: 12/23/2019 3:44:00 PM

I sense a little metaphoric minefield here.. My mind is playing dodge ball with its thoughts

Lu Loo
Date: 12/25/2019 8:53:00 AM

you are right! I tried anyways, lol - thank you so much for stopping by dear John, I appreciate it...Merry Christmas dear man! Be blessed, x:-)-luloo

Lu Loo
Date: 12/25/2019 8:53:00 AM

you are right! I tried anyways, lol - thank you so much for stopping by dear John, I appreciate it...Merry Christmas dear man! Be blessed, x:-)-luloo

John Lawless
Date: 12/23/2019 3:45:00 PM

OH, I missed the warning....you chose metaphor as one of the little lures....nicely done