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-belly Button Madness-

his fingers map out 
subtle areas all over-- 
my belly button 
no exception, impious 
outlines, his goal to stir me…


*another "challenge"
from Missy Nikko* 
:)  


11/04/2011

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James Fraser Date: 4/28/2011 12:47:00 PM Ooo I want to be a cartographer and re-draw this undulating map. All contours covered and sized. Terrific Tanka Wilma....:) Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 4/12/2011 1:17:00 PM Really stirring write!It is almost 2AM of 13th here!! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/12/2011 5:19:00 AM hot and steamy .. Wilma.. on fire in my mind with fantastic playful lines.. that Missy Nikko is something else and a sweet friend too..luv. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/11/2011 6:16:00 PM Create lovely sensual feelings, Wilma Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/11/2011 3:37:00 PM Wilma, I have to tell you about my belly button sometime! This is really cool. WIsh I had time to check out what all this is about with challenges but I am rushing off as usual. LUv, andrea Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 4/11/2011 3:09:00 PM Cold Shower even if I lived in Alaska after this read....Lucky fingers , with a heated write... LOvely warm feeling my dear Wilma..love Michael ps Might have to get in on these writes lol Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 4/11/2011 2:39:00 PM a great piece of creative work Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/11/2011 2:17:00 PM hmmm, enjoying the word challenge here with nikks, wilma.... outrageously divine! ;) hugggs, nette Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/11/2011 8:35:00 AM What a warm romantic poem, Wilma. My belly button is ticklish, though, and it would eliminate any feelings of passion. Really enjoyed this one, dear. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 4/11/2011 5:40:00 AM yup, I had to think of something that would be a bit cold for your hotties-- the nose, knows, righty?? ok ok get back to work-- & I mean REAL work!! haha see you later when I get back--you better have a nose write missy ;) kidding! & yup, insanity's my middle name & I think so is yours lol ;) Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 4/11/2011 5:32:00 AM thank you--you are too kind! & hmm are you up for more madness? haha I should be judging lol and what am I doing here?! ok keep yourself busy-- soup might get too hot & burn--I would have to go skip, skip over the other juicy parts though and go straight to and Pick the -------------------->NOSE!!! hahaha!! Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 4/11/2011 5:11:00 AM gosh you sure are stepping up to the plate Missy with this hottie! I think I better call you Missy Hottie :p-- my feet poem sucks! pales, pales, pales to yours! Whew!!! gosh are you ready for another challenge?? Login to Reply