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- When Words Are Not Enough -

When a heaven cracks and stars go to sleep 
  Morning so incredibly quiet - 
  A peaceful morning - the sun's rays meet my gaze 
  I listen to the peace - to its eternal rest - and I think 
  that this moment must forever be in my heart 


  My eyes filled with clear and clean blue sky 
  So beautiful quiet morning - a fjord bright as a mirror 
  . . . I'm missing my words 
  Happiness rustling through the blood 
  and awakens my senses 
  I float among the clouds and angels 
  picks diamonds like they were candy 
  The sun glows in all its glory 
  The words are no longer in my power





  24.04.2014
  A-L Andresen :)

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Eric Ashford Date: 2/16/2020 1:04:00 PM I get such a happy yet peaceful vibe from the Anne-Lise. Lovely lines. Thank you I needed this today. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/16/2020 1:06:00 PM - Glad you liked it, thank you very much Eric :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Red Barchettadrive Date: 10/20/2015 12:43:00 PM So beautiful! The poetry is not so bad either! :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/20/2015 2:22:00 PM - Red, thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Schneiter Date: 11/18/2014 8:59:00 AM This is lovely, Anne Lise. I savored every line. Thank you for creating a beautiful, image-rich poem. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/18/2014 12:00:00 PM - Paul, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dave Timperley Date: 7/27/2014 5:05:00 AM Hi Anna-Lise, You are dreaming! What a wonderful way to remember. I love this little poem, it talks to me. God Bless. Dave. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/27/2014 5:10:00 AM - Dave, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Schneiter Date: 7/6/2014 2:30:00 PM This poem takes us—with magnificent imagery— to a place we would like to go. The opening line is one I wish I had written (not to mention other lines). "When Words Are Not Enough" is, through and through, a delight. Anne Lise has a lovely poetic voice. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/6/2014 2:43:00 PM - Hi Paul, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Emer Capate Date: 7/5/2014 9:25:00 AM though snow is doesnt happen here in my place your vivid presentation makes me close my eyes and imagine the scene.... thanks for this.. Emer Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/5/2014 11:33:00 AM - Happy that you found a poem you like :) - Thanks Emer, for the nice visit and comments on my poem : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 5/26/2014 2:08:00 PM A very beautiful poem Anne Lise. I could just picture it. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/14/2014 5:42:00 AM - Lucilla, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andy Richards Date: 5/26/2014 1:26:00 PM really like this... nice... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/26/2014 1:28:00 PM - Andy, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Saba Khan Date: 5/23/2014 12:04:00 AM That's really nice :) Wishes--- Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/23/2014 12:09:00 PM - Saba, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Living Faith Date: 5/20/2014 1:30:00 AM Thank you for your welcome on my first poem ! I'm looking forward to reading through some of yours. This here is lovely. xx Faith Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/20/2014 2:31:00 AM - Hi Faith, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maryellen Gozzo Date: 5/18/2014 4:56:00 PM Thanks for commenting on my poetry. I love this poem because of the emotion and gripping relation to readers. Well done. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/19/2014 7:09:00 AM - MaryEllen, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Orma Sullivan Date: 5/15/2014 12:27:00 PM Hi Anne Lise: Thanks for commenting on my poetry. Beautiful imagery in your poem. Keep writing. Be well. Orma Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/15/2014 12:53:00 PM - Hi Orma, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi Date: 5/13/2014 6:54:00 PM Hi Anne Lise: An appropriate title . Words are not enough the way you described Morning's breath. Great Write! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/14/2014 3:08:00 AM - Ralph, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner Date: 5/13/2014 4:46:00 PM Oooooo.... sounds like Divine Inspiration Anne! " Happiness rustling through the blood..." Awesome line my friend!!! That opening line stimulates my soul vision. This is a Writer's ecstacy. J.A.B. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/14/2014 3:07:00 AM - Experiences in nature and beauty images can take your breath and words.....- Justin, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Jackson Date: 5/13/2014 4:06:00 PM wonderful imagery. I like " I float among the clouds". Best wishes Linda x Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/14/2014 3:05:00 AM - Linda, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 5/9/2014 7:39:00 AM Oh the fjords must be magical on a cool, clear morning. You've made me want to experience this magnificent view. Thanks for my new wish. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/9/2014 12:01:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem,Scott : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Andrew Lyle Date: 5/8/2014 8:45:00 AM From the stars above to the depths of a beautiful fjord what a sensual journey. Thank you for sharing. great work. Andy Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/8/2014 8:51:00 AM - Robert, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn Date: 5/7/2014 5:57:00 PM Wow you have hit the high mark of perfection in this write of elegance, simply put it's beautiful my friend. cheri Thank you also for your comments but my answer is know i don't write short stories poetry is my love, in life and i thing it will always be, i've been asked to write short stories tho, I've been working on a book of poetry for four years now, i have a few lol 649 that's not to many you think lol take care of yourself, cheri Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/8/2014 4:07:00 AM - Wooow .... 649 .... yes, a lot - hope there will be 649 more in the future :)) - Cherl, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jamesp Kail Date: 5/7/2014 7:15:00 AM Bravo!!!!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/7/2014 7:56:00 AM - Jamesp, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley Date: 5/6/2014 9:02:00 PM Words fail me to describe how much that sent me into a deeper understanding. Clear water washed my eyes and you descended from a gentle sky... At least in my mind you did! Bravo to an inspiring presentation! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/7/2014 7:56:00 AM - Robert, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Neelam Sangwai Date: 5/6/2014 12:29:00 PM Powerful words. This delightful poem is one of good morning affirmations.......Thanks. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/6/2014 12:37:00 PM - Neelam, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/6/2014 12:23:00 PM heard you were on a a trip, anne... enjoy and huggs!.. lovely tuesday to you!.. huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/6/2014 12:35:00 PM - Back in business, my dear friend Nette !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 5/6/2014 9:46:00 AM Hi Anne-Lise! Good to have you back again:) This is such a lovely poem. You express the morning wonder so well...even though the words are no longer in your power!! [I wrote a song once, called "Words are not enough"; here's a link to it...if interested in hearing it: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zJ0PbOTcOwA&feature=player_detailpage // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 5/6/2014 12:42:00 PM Thank you Anne Lise...but we are all talented in our own ways...and so are YOU :) // paul Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/6/2014 11:49:00 AM - Wooow, Paul !!!- Words Are Not Enough - Malta Song 2010 Final eurovision feast eurovision party - A beautiful song and you have really written it - AMAZING PAUL!! - Yes, I've seen the vidios - you impress me greatly!! - (I am just a small "mosquito" .... and you a very talented poet!!) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda Date: 5/6/2014 6:27:00 AM Hi Anne-Lise . Happy you are back from your leave... hopefully see more of your beautiful gems in May-- like this one. Beautiful imagery. Thanks for visiting my recent post. Xx~Xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/6/2014 6:38:00 AM - Hi Kim, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem : - When words are not enough - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda Date: 5/6/2014 6:17:00 AM Hi Anne-Lise . Happy you are back from your leave... hopefully see more of your beautiful gems in May-- like this one. Beautiful imagery. Thanks for visiting my recent post. Xx~Xx Login to Reply Cynthia Ferguson Date: 5/6/2014 6:20:00 AM you write very pretty, I am just a rhymer, I never had school or any type of education writing poetry, so I don't know what a lot of the definitions mean, and I to to stay away from contests as I don't always know what they are asking for, and my poem gets rejected, so I feel it to, I have been writing about three years , I got a way to go yet, I just like to write for fun, and I hope I can share a feeling or have someone say I know just how that feels, and I can give someone an emotion, I hope I like it here, last place I was trying started good but the same , once in contests and running into college kids who pick at every comma and capital letter, and your gramma is off, just take all my fun away, school was long ago, thank you again for your kind reception to a new writer, I just hope I make someone happy or even cry from something I wrote, even if one person was moved it was all worth it, :)

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