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The scent of humble flowers which graced the day Moments that have stuck reality written on stone Experience is learning The joy of nature's miracles - trapped, some might say The sky colored gold the rays don't heat anymore But still: a little piece of one's golden heart - saturated with pollen dust 23.05.2023 Anne-Lise Andresen Copyright © All Rights Reserved Inspired by: "Before the sun goes down" written by : Demetrios Trifiatis 23 May 2023

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/24/2023 11:59:00 AM

Hello Sunshine Smile , when the sun goes down it is beautiful. to to see the golden rays light up the river. To see to see the golden color in the water reflect. Hugs /Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/24/2023 4:06:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile oh thank you for sharing this wirh me. I would enjoy that sunset. Hugs. /Darlene/

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/24/2023 12:06:00 PM

- In this minute I have a beautiful sunset outside my window ... I would like to share this moment with you, Darlene :) - The sun sets in the sea :) - Thank you very much for your words :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/24/2023 5:10:00 AM

I like the line, "moments that have stuck". Sometimes those are lovely moments in our lives that live on. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/24/2023 12:07:00 PM

- Memories that never go away, Sara :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/24/2023 2:47:00 AM

A marvel of a poem. The real poetry for me is seen between the lines, my dearest friend of eleven years, Anne-Lise. Thank you. Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/24/2023 3:00:00 AM

- Your wisdom, the joy of nature, flowers ... and words of truth ("written on stone") ... glad you liked it, my friend :) - 11 years ... and more will come :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/24/2023 2:06:00 AM

Give me sunset every night. I love it. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/24/2023 2:42:00 AM

- Victor, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/24/2023 12:59:00 AM

i love sunset, what a graceful scenery thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/24/2023 2:41:00 AM

- Every sunset is unique, thank you for your kindness Yann :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 5/23/2023 5:48:00 PM

Nice poem. Sunset is always scenic. Love the end couplet,

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/24/2023 2:40:00 AM

- Many thanks for the kind comment, Jay :) - hugs

Frederic Parker

Date: 5/23/2023 12:29:00 PM

Really nice poem, you can tell by my avatar I really like sunsets dear poet

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/23/2023 1:15:00 PM

- I hardly ever see sunrises... way too early for me, Frederic :))) - But, I enjoy every sunset - Many thanks for your comment ... always nice to see you :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/23/2023 12:13:00 PM

I loved being transported to this blissful sunset scene, and especially enjoyed the final two lines, Anne-Lise. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/23/2023 1:20:00 PM

- Sunset makes me humble ... very aware that everything has its time in this life and everything has an end - Many thanks, Evelyn :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/23/2023 10:38:00 AM

Nature never stops to stimulate our muse, Anne-Lise. Fantastic, interesting lines throughout your poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/23/2023 10:52:00 AM

- That's true, Las ... many thanks for your comment :) - hugs