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Magic dust shooting into starlight pearls as the scents begin wafting Around the planet's curve circling warmly embracing on vision Glittering golden gleams sparkle through colours of a promise Kissed green eyes to hide her warm tears open up In the promises we give to others for keeps Rainbows hold until the end enchanting tales Silk buried softly underneath the bouquet a rose grows Not forgetting the inner promises we give unto ourselves Romancing a poem under the pillow no one knows Petals freezing winter moon holding warmly drunken Wrapped up under one star winks cotton white angel holding deeply wings Held upright pleasing the heart pure soul inside the glory of the stars shine Fear and destruction of earthly paradise we live Over and back dancing butterflies waltz freely taken We need beautiful fairy tales and angels songs As the sun rise kisses a gold circle treasures found A man can not be changed by place or time, but of love Memories are born inside where a diamond cut princess dwells Luxurious and delicious feelings ~ enveloped softly in your wing A Collaborated Poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 15.12.2016 (unrhymed couplets) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 1/13/2017 1:59:00 AM
Really a great and inspiring poem!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/13/2017 5:28:00 AM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Jagdish :) - hugs :)
Date: 1/9/2017 2:01:00 AM
Such a great poem! Thank you for sharing, Sunshine. God bless!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/9/2017 2:50:00 AM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poems Estela - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments :) - hugs :)
Date: 1/5/2017 9:40:00 AM
WONDERFUL POEM MY FRIEND. I just posted a romantic poem about my earthly angel this morn! Your verses sing magnificently to me!A7
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2017 11:46:00 AM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, and a 7, Robert :) - hugs :)
Date: 1/3/2017 8:44:00 AM
Waltzing butterflies nice write
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2017 11:45:00 AM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Edward :) - hugs :)
Date: 12/26/2016 1:07:00 AM
You and Liam always write a stunning collaboration my dear friend! Thumbs up on this excellent masterpiece! A super 7. Thank you so much for sharing. I wish you both all the best on this wonderful Christmas Season! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/26/2016 2:27:00 PM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, and a super 7, Leonora :) - hugs :)
Date: 12/18/2016 9:03:00 PM
You two romance a poem well... :) fantasy or reality.....the lines speak of both. Hugs to you both....
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/19/2016 3:28:00 AM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem, Eileen :) - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments :) - hugs :)
Date: 12/17/2016 8:52:00 PM
You two get my favorite response, the one I use when I'm totally awed: WOW WOW WOW - Love it to the moon - it is sheer beauty - absolutely sheer beauty ... CayCay (maybe law should require you collaborate more!)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/18/2016 8:10:00 AM
- Always a pleasure to mix ink with my friend Liam, CayCay :) - We greatly appreciate your comments :) - hugs :)
Date: 12/17/2016 11:54:00 AM
A very special holiday collab offering, Anne-Lise and Liam. Pixie dust poem has a magical allure. Gorgeous imagery showcased. You two work well together like a glove in hand. Love the poem too. Much love to you, dear lady.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/17/2016 12:53:00 PM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Freddie :) - hugs :)
Date: 12/17/2016 8:57:00 AM
Another dazzling collaboration crowned by incomparable beauty! A seven to each of you! dear Anne-Lise and dear, Liam!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/17/2016 12:53:00 PM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Demetrios :) - hugs :)
Date: 12/17/2016 7:59:00 AM
What a lovely title and a beautiful collaboration Anne... Really beautiful... A big 7...
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Date: 12/17/2016 12:52:00 PM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Supraja :) - hugs :)
Date: 12/16/2016 11:21:00 PM
A crafty couplet from a great couple...beautifully executed...god bless...^WW^
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/17/2016 7:48:00 AM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, W.W. :) - hugs :)
Date: 12/16/2016 9:37:00 AM
Good one dear
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2016 1:13:00 PM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, S. Poet :) - hugs :)
Date: 12/16/2016 7:48:00 AM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise!! A wondrous, powerful, and imagery-laden masterpiece by you and Liam. Each one of the ten couplets created a word picture-portrait of their own. This one's a TR and a FAV of mine!! Best Christmas Wishes from Ingrid and me!! Gary
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2016 1:23:00 PM
- Very pleased you really enjoyed our poem, Gary :) - Many thanks for the pleasant visit "tr.+ fav:" on "When The Soul Is Clean" - We greatly appreciate your comments :) - hugs and Christmas wishes // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/16/2016 2:44:00 AM
(Hey wait a minute - "When The Soul Is Clean" - am I even allowed to read this?" ; ) This is an incredibly rich poem, the chain of actions, the verbs used - they all wash over the reader, a big 'Wow!'
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2016 3:42:00 AM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Doug :) - hugs :)
Date: 12/15/2016 5:56:00 PM
your pen anne lise ran pure sunlight through this a pleasure sharing ink with you this sings in a beautiful song reading it again wishing you a blessing of a day pal
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/17/2016 11:51:00 AM
Beautiful imagery encased in this golden ink poem, Liam and Anne-Lise. Wonderful collab. You two have special chemistry. Love and joy to you both.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2016 3:44:00 AM
- Always a pleasure, Liam - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/15/2016 4:23:00 PM
another jewel from you and liam--- wonderful work, anne!..happy huggs!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2016 3:42:00 AM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Nette :) - hugs :)
Date: 12/15/2016 10:49:00 AM
Very very Beautiful Anne, A brilliant collaboration!! Enjoyed every word Best wishes to you both Kevin
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2016 3:42:00 AM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Kevin :) - hugs :)
Date: 12/15/2016 9:59:00 AM
This is tops in so many ways. Every couplet a gem! Congrats to both authors on this great collaboration....
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2016 3:41:00 AM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Robert :) - hugs :)
Date: 12/15/2016 9:52:00 AM
Wonderful! When the soul is clean, every thing or matter around is neat and clean.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2016 3:41:00 AM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Abdullah :) - hugs :)
Date: 12/15/2016 9:48:00 AM
Another wonderful collaboration from You and Liam. That final couplet, is the icing on another sweet write, Anne Lise:)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2016 3:40:00 AM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Daniel :) - hugs :)
Date: 12/15/2016 9:04:00 AM
Wowsa! I feel like I'm wrapped in a big hug. Thanks! Very berry loverly guys. huggaflitters ~ john
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2016 3:40:00 AM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, John :) - hugs :)
Date: 12/15/2016 7:41:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam !:))Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2016 3:38:00 AM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Dorian :) - hugs :)

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