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Fairy Tale Art By Viola Sado

My thoughts whirring When life freezes the blood Actions that burn in hell A fire that burns forever Terror - their empire of hate Fearless, they control our destiny Terrible destruction done by weak and miserable people They mark their strength as animals, with deposition of urine "Hell on Earth" these demons will inflict upon mankind Of human destruction and evil, woe and shame How likely we can find "The Earth's Paradise" I look far around, but not close We want to live in butterfly harmony From wing to wing - of their joy and dance 29 - 05 - 2017 (unrhymed couplets) Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 6/5/2017 3:58:00 PM
God is there, no doubt and no way to doubt that. He has already designed appropriate destination of all us. i believe that at last soul gets release from all bondage of illusory relationship. Like deed like heaven. Someone feels heaven as hell and vise versa. Beautiful poem filled with heartfelt emotion my dear lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/6/2017 3:55:00 AM
- Thanks for meaningful comment and friendly visit, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/31/2017 4:52:00 PM
Must nip those demons in the bud and bring in those beautiful butterflies. love phyl
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Date: 6/1/2017 1:55:00 AM
- Use chainsaw, take all at once Phyllis :) - Thank you for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/31/2017 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations for a well-deserved PotD Anne-Lise. Those demons give us little reprieve these days and can so easily shatter our frail butterfly wings :) Amitiés
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Date: 6/1/2017 1:57:00 AM
- Many thanks for your congratulations and your friendly support , Anne-Marie:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/31/2017 12:06:00 AM
Very lovely Anne-Lise. Your ending inspires! 7 ; )
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Date: 5/31/2017 1:59:00 AM
- Thank you for visiting and congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/31/2017 12:07:00 AM
Heck...I meant to congratulate you on having this poem honored with POTD! : )
Date: 5/30/2017 9:30:00 PM
So wonderful to see you recognized with POTD honors, congratulations Anne-Lise...
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Date: 5/31/2017 1:59:00 AM
- Thank you for visiting and congratulations, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2017 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD,Sunshine, well done~*
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Date: 5/31/2017 1:58:00 AM
- Thank you for visiting and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2017 3:26:00 PM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise, I just noticed your poem here this evening. Congratulations on POTD!! This one is a very marvelous couplet for sure. Yes, we must keep these demons from blossoming. One of mankind's many challenges among others. Balance, harmony, awareness, and justice are very important in helping us to combat this force of negativity. Superb Work!! TR/FAV in my book!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 5/31/2017 1:58:00 AM
- Hallo my friend Gary, many thanks for your congratulations and your friendly support ... + a great comments and a "fav." :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2017 2:38:00 PM
very nice writing. Beautiful. congratulations. :)
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Date: 5/30/2017 2:51:00 PM
- Thank you for visiting and congratulations, Bella :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2017 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations for POTD, Anne-Lise!! Very deserving of such a poem calling for mankind to discard negativity and replace it by the joy of harmony. Those demons have to be nipped in the bud...! Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/30/2017 2:23:00 PM
- Never safe ... in a moment a bomb ... killing innocent people ... cruel demons without heart, Paul - Many thanks for your congratulations and your friendly support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2017 1:31:00 PM
wonderful
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Date: 5/30/2017 1:58:00 PM
- Thank you for visiting and comments, Semih :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2017 1:21:00 PM
Hello Anne. This is marvelous. How perfect your ending thought as is the rest. Congratulations on the entry being chosen POTD. Well expressed throughout. May man and mankind see the paradise. Have a wonderful night.
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Date: 5/30/2017 2:11:00 PM
- Lisa, many thanks for your congratulations and your friendly support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2017 11:59:00 AM
Intimidators know no about harmony.... Awesome write dear Annelise
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Date: 5/30/2017 2:10:00 PM
- Thank you for visiting and lovely comments, Anand :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2017 11:16:00 AM
We want peace and love they want hate.. well expressed Anne, Congrats on PotD
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Date: 5/30/2017 2:08:00 PM
- True, Joseph - Many thanks for your congratulations and your friendly support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2017 9:36:00 AM
The demons blossom black, Anne-Lise and won't win. Then the earth will know that butterfly harmony - what a beautiful description! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/30/2017 2:08:00 PM
- Many thanks for your congratulations and your friendly support, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2017 9:04:00 AM
A great choice for POTD Anne-Lise. Congratulations. This is a powerful piece. It invokes a sense of the desperate and plenty of "ticked-off" in me. - Dean
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Date: 5/30/2017 2:07:00 PM
- Glad you liked it, Dean :) - Many thanks for your congratulations and your friendly support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2017 8:35:00 AM
The relinquishing metaphor serves to place the narrator squarely in a vulnerable position. In this piece it works and continues to work throughout. Your phrases follow the sentiment of utter helplessness, the colour of which is very much sensed by the butterfly imagery at the close. Very powerful write.
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Date: 5/30/2017 2:05:00 PM
- Many thanks for your congratulations and your friendly support ... a great comment, Robert - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2017 8:29:00 AM
Hi Anne- Lise, I enjoyed the last two lines and the message with in them. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved: -).Alexis
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Date: 5/30/2017 2:03:00 PM
- Many thanks for your congratulations and your friendly support, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2017 5:42:00 AM
Congrat Sun for the POTD with this great composition. :)
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Date: 5/30/2017 2:03:00 PM
- Many thanks for your congratulations and your friendly support, Sunita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2017 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Anne-Lise, hopefully one day everything on Earth will live in harmony, well written. :))
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Date: 5/30/2017 2:01:00 PM
- Many thanks for your congratulations and your friendly support, Roy - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2017 5:10:00 AM
What beauty this world would be if we can all do live in harmony... bless you Anne-Lise for a beautiful write :) hugs
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Date: 5/30/2017 7:17:00 AM
- Thanks for your visit and support is greatly appreciated, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2017 1:29:00 AM
A wonderful poem dear Anne-Lise, truer words were never spoken, If only people could learn to live in Harmony. Oh I see it has got POTD,Congrats, so well deserved.Maria xx
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Date: 5/30/2017 3:14:00 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and great news, Maria .... wooow; p.o.t.d. .. a great honor :) - Thank you for your congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/29/2017 7:44:00 PM
Another butterfly will tell you... well done.
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Date: 5/30/2017 2:54:00 AM
- Thanks Pashang, your visit and support is greatly appreciated :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/29/2017 2:19:00 PM
ohh anne, your spirit always seeks love and unity...a work splendidly brought forth .. happy huggs
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Date: 5/29/2017 2:23:00 PM
- Yes, dear Nette my spirit always seeks love and unity ... that is why we share this earth :) - Thank you for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/29/2017 2:16:00 PM
butterfly harmony sounds perfect Anne Lise - maybe one day we can achieve this ... wouldn't that be wonderful:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/29/2017 2:20:00 PM
- To live without fear, sounds delicious, Jan :) - Thank you for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/29/2017 2:02:00 PM
Yes, we strive for harmony...terrific A-L
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Date: 5/29/2017 2:14:00 PM
- The harmony of happiness and peace on earth - Thank you for visiting and lovely comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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