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Changing Seasons

The freedom to love is threatened
                              Is it possible to goes for happiness
                                   in a world of deep injustice?

                           There is a gray shutter on the mountain
                          before the sun suddenly lights up the day
                                Smiling, whistling and soft tones
                        The delightful taste of autumn's sweet fruits

                             Autumn does not regret its short time
                                  The "Scream" that was spun 
                                         by colorful leaves
                                Sip on a hot Blackcurrant toddy
                                Autumn closed the door quietly
                             and leaves the ice key on the stairs

                                    Death, with its kiss of fire
                                   When the angels of heaven
                                  sprinkle sugar on the ground
                               Winter drives through your dream
                                Feel the silence and the absence,
                                      appreciate the presence





                                             25.10.2020
                                     Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                                 Poem of the Day 26.10.2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 11/25/2020 10:13:00 PM
Such an intriguing poem of pastoral beauty, Anne-Lise! It's spiritual depth of wisdom is a joy to read. Kudos on POTD! Love and best wishes for the holiday season.
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Date: 11/27/2020 2:29:00 AM
- Many thanks for visit, comment and the congratulations, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/24/2020 1:31:00 PM
Well Done
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Date: 11/25/2020 11:46:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Sierra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/23/2020 8:32:00 AM
Anne=Lise, this poem is brilliantly beautiful. I love the "ice key". When it is time, you can use it to open the doors of Spring. In the meantime I'm sending many warm hugs your way~ Warren
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Date: 11/24/2020 11:53:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and comments, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/29/2020 7:59:00 PM
Anne-Lise, This poem is absolutely gorgeous in every aspect, from the color of the season to the color of emotions, it resonates deep in the soul. This creation is one of your very best my friend and I am so happy to see it honored with POTD! Forgive my late response. This is going straight into my faves. Congratulations on your deserving honor. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 10/30/2020 2:53:00 AM
- Like I said to Jenny ... better late than never, Connie :) - Appreciate your words and especially your "fave" ... thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)  
Date: 10/29/2020 12:34:00 PM
Congrats on a much deserved POTD!
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Date: 10/30/2020 2:50:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/29/2020 4:03:00 AM
Sunshine Smile forgive me, you know I love you but have business pressures this side also, Congratulations my dear friend on your spectacular POTD - I hope you enjoyed your day. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/30/2020 2:50:00 AM
- Better late than never ... :))) - Many thanks for visit and the congratulations, dear sister Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/28/2020 6:52:00 AM
Love the way you express yourself...Congratulations Anne-Lise on POTD...
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Date: 10/28/2020 7:20:00 AM
- Many thanks for visit and the congratulations, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2020 4:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your Poem of the Day win. A "Beautiful" write and picture. I love your line, "sprinkle sugar on the ground." Yes, powered sugar on the ground. Enjoy your win with a hug.............
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Date: 10/28/2020 2:19:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2020 5:29:00 PM
"Feel the silence and the absence, appreciate the presence" Of course. :) Each season wraps around me in some way. The beauty, the moments. You paint such vivid images with your words. Congratulations Anne- Lise, on Poem of the Day. Keep smiling my dear friend. :) Brandy
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Date: 10/28/2020 2:19:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Brandy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2020 4:30:00 PM
Simply wonderful Anne-Lise. Visual, textured, moving seamlessly from one season to the next. Congratulations on your POTD, my smiling friend!
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Date: 10/28/2020 2:18:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Sam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2020 9:45:00 AM
Just back with congrats on POTD...
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Date: 10/28/2020 2:18:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2020 8:52:00 AM
Back with a big Congratulations on POTD, well deserved. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/28/2020 2:17:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2020 8:22:00 AM
Lovely Anne-Lise, congratulations...
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Date: 10/28/2020 2:17:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2020 7:59:00 AM
Hi Anne- Lise, Lovely imagery and good content. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was as well deserved. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/28/2020 2:17:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2020 7:09:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Anne-Lise... though I have to confess that I sure hope 'winter doesn't come driving through my dream for a while yet! Happy Monday! :) gw
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Date: 10/28/2020 2:16:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2020 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Anne Lise, so deserving. ~~
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Date: 10/28/2020 2:16:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2020 5:54:00 AM
This is just beautiful Anne-Lise. A solitary reflection. Elegantly penned. Congratulations on POTD! hugs {} Linda
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Date: 10/28/2020 2:15:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Linda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2020 5:51:00 AM
Simply beautiful, Anne-Lise! I see; I hear; I touch; I feel!!
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Date: 10/28/2020 2:15:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2020 5:18:00 AM
BIG congrats on poem of the day Anne-Lise. Wonderful images.
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Date: 10/28/2020 2:14:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2020 4:29:00 AM
Great imagery, what a beautiful poem! Congratulations on POTD!!
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Date: 10/28/2020 2:14:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2020 4:07:00 AM
Congratulations or POTD! Enjoy! :)
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Date: 10/28/2020 2:13:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2020 3:43:00 AM
Congrats on POTD dear friend... your last two lines too good... 'Feel the silence and the absence, appreciate the presence'. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 10/28/2020 2:13:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2020 1:30:00 AM
what exquisite description and imagery Anne-Lise i especially love 'Autumn closed the door quietly' and leaves the ice key on the stairs' and 'When the angels of heaven sprinkle sugar on the ground' many congrats on POTD adding thhis gem to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/26/2020 3:36:00 AM
- Many thanks for visit, congratulations and your fave, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2020 1:01:00 AM
Back with congrats Anne on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 10/26/2020 3:35:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2020 12:30:00 AM
Anne-Lise, congrats on the POTD honors for your poetic and lovely imagery of autumn's transition to winter (is that a reference to Munch's painting 'The Scream'?). A pleasure to read! ~ John
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Date: 10/26/2020 3:29:00 AM
- Yes, E. Munch's painting "The Scream" which is painted in the colors of autumn, John :) - Many thanks for the congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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