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When the wind blows cold a brittle crust is left behind on the wound that never heals Punctured - on the verge of shedding a tear 02.01.2023 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 1/17/2023 7:06:00 AM
Your verse speaks volumes my friend, someone who has lost him or herself - "on the verge of shedding a tear". Love it! Hugs blessings - Poetry Sis.
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Date: 1/11/2023 1:33:00 PM
Very powerful and touching on this poem my friend. love phyl
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Date: 1/9/2023 4:46:00 AM
A touching poem, my friend. The forming of an icicle is a metaphor. Loved this. You have a gift for creating such huge meaning with so few words.
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Date: 1/4/2023 10:42:00 AM
Such a deep verse. I picture so many young souls like this; lost to the world. May your year be full of blessings.
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Date: 1/3/2023 5:45:00 PM
Powerfully..versed, touching and a FAv. Respect and love, Pangie
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Date: 1/3/2023 6:56:00 AM
Hi Sunshine…..Full of emotion and touching…just lovely! Debx
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Date: 1/3/2023 4:46:00 AM
So sad.... emotive. A powerful write, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 1/3/2023 2:30:00 AM
So precise a description. Beautiful verse. Hugs.
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Date: 1/2/2023 6:38:00 PM
So graphically and poignantly penned, Anne-Lise. The best of 2023 to you, Gershon
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