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10.08.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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NO 1235 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

7th place in the contest

^^^^^^ ~~~~~~~ // A L W A Y S \\ //let the //light shin\\ //each day - //each hour \ // Guardian of // the sleepl\\ ///ocean, blessing //// come from //// heaven.Preserve faith ///and be //filled with/// peace,join with you\\\ beautiful/// spirit.Even//// the light of tiny ///fireflies,spell that blazes/// as a beacon.///Glowing, sparkling as //stars. It ///is the hour before/// midnight and the/// night wind turns in/// the sky\ Moon// hiding behind ///sorrowful clouds.//Let light flow in //every cranny, //without fuss.Shine as a golden //sun in dark, mermaids would//never lose their way (/////////////) (/////////////) (/////////////) (their braids) (//woven ///) (/by nymph.)

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Date: 8/15/2023 6:30:00 AM
What a great shape Anne-Lise. So creative! I love the last line. :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 9:25:00 AM
- Linda, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 8/13/2023 11:02:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your contest win, with this lovely poem, Anne-Lise
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 9:25:00 AM
- Thank you for the warm congratulations, Las :) - hugs
Date: 8/12/2023 5:02:00 AM
Anne-Lise, a delightfully creative poem. -hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 9:24:00 AM
- Many thanks Tania, for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 8/11/2023 8:27:00 PM
You are an absolute master of your amazing craft, this is magnificent! A fave, beyond a shadow of a doubt <3
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 9:23:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment and your fave, BJ :) - hugs
Date: 8/10/2023 7:49:00 PM
OMG, what a creative piece! Yeah no doubt a winner for me too :) I feel so excited for you on this one. Just beautifully creative with its meaningful lighting it up…. hug hugs hugs :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 9:23:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Akkina :) - hugs
Date: 8/10/2023 3:56:00 PM
Love the picture, the picture of the poem, and the poem within, beautifully put together: ) hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 9:22:00 AM
- Many thanks Stephan, for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 8/10/2023 3:25:00 PM
Very nicely done, Anne-Lise. A winner for sure.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 9:22:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Vijay :) - hugs
Date: 8/10/2023 2:43:00 PM
Truly, exquisitely crafted. I express my gratitude for the splendid poem, Anne-Lise. Your musings are a sight to behold, masterfully exhibited. A sure winner
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 9:22:00 AM
- Las, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 8/10/2023 2:17:00 PM
so lovely penning, enjoyed your creativity, thanks a lot
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 9:21:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Yann :) - hugs
Date: 8/10/2023 1:46:00 PM
WOW!! What a creative/fun ~ write/picture/shape. Love It. "Good Luck" Looks like to have way toooooo much time on your hands. Hahaha!!!. Hugs... Have a great day.............
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 9:21:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Paula :) - hugs
Date: 8/10/2023 11:19:00 AM
Beatiful thoughts and brilliantly displayed, Anne-Lise! Bob
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/10/2023 1:08:00 PM
- Bob, many thanks for your comment ... fun to make :) - hugs
Date: 8/10/2023 10:23:00 AM
Inspirations lighting a light bulb. Realnice poem,
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/10/2023 1:07:00 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, Jay :) - hugs
Date: 8/10/2023 9:42:00 AM
An excellent read Anne-Lise How you fit your words to draw a light bulb very ingenious!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/10/2023 10:01:00 AM
- We can send words in a bottle ... why not in a light bulb :) - Many thanks for your comment, John :) - hugs

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