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Never was meant to be an angel. . . 'I've been called cold and heartless. But that's only because somebody took my heart and broke it.' - Nikky-:

Escape from a world of unhappiness and sorrow Days and weeks pass and I realize that I despise this cold hole Let me be ... Trapped not only within those four dark walls, but with the elements in time and place Let me be ... Tears that makes you feel completely empty and useless plastic Stop thinking, collaborating with false emotion Let me be ... When will you understand, you do not own my thoughts I know I should be strong, but it is so painful Let me be ... Slowly draining my throat, I scream for water and air While the morning sun lazily crawling along the purple river Let me be here forever ... 13.03.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) (unrhymed couplets) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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James Inman

Date: 9/28/2022 8:24:00 PM

Looking back at the poems I fav'd of yours. I still like this one the most.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2022 5:30:00 AM

- Thank you very much, James :) - hugs

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 4/11/2017 3:19:00 AM

An emotionally deep write. Congratulations and a seven.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2017 6:58:00 AM

- Many thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Elizabeth :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carole Duet

Date: 4/6/2017 11:34:00 PM

This poem sounds like one written by someone imprisoned...perhaps imprisoned by despair. So sad. Hope comes with the dawn though as each day is a new chance to live. Great poem Sunny. And, congrats on making the "Best New Poems" list.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/7/2017 3:29:00 AM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Carole :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 4/6/2017 5:37:00 PM

I just discovered this poem. You always write beautifully, but this is really gripping.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/7/2017 3:28:00 AM

- Happy you liked it, Sunlite :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Street Cries

Date: 3/31/2017 4:10:00 PM

Strong ink

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/1/2017 12:49:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits, S.C. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Bell

Date: 3/26/2017 2:07:00 PM

Quite emotional, almost endless, yet there is hope upon sunrise, well written Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2017 3:31:00 AM

Michael Bell

Date: 3/26/2017 2:04:00 PM

Quite emotional, almost endless, yet there is hope upon sunrise, well written Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2017 3:31:00 AM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Michael :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Bell

Date: 3/26/2017 1:54:00 PM

Quite emotional, almost endless, yet there is hope upon sunrise, well written Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2017 3:31:00 AM

James Inman

Date: 3/25/2017 7:37:00 AM

Exceptional write Anne-Lise, perhaps my favorite of yours. An extremely personal write. I feel as if I am in your mind with you, feeling your emotions. I see another side of you here.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2017 9:38:00 AM

- Happy you liked it, James :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 3/21/2017 10:21:00 AM

Ah, truth lingers where it may.... A great voyage into the dark of human emotion, something we can all symphasize with from time to time; a little bit of love, a little bit of time, a little bit of understanding and things will work out. Deep write Anne-Lise, enjoyed your sincerity. Many hugs:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2017 3:15:00 PM

- Thank you for your meaningful and great comments, Keith - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 3/18/2017 3:48:00 PM

Beautifully expressive poem, Anne-Lise. The emotions that course through this poem is riveting. Very powerful write. I loved it. A double 7 for this deep offering ... and a fave too. Love and more love to you and yours.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2017 3:52:00 PM

- I appreciate that very much, Freddie :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/17/2017 4:05:00 PM

A 7 for this chilling, dark write, Anne. Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2017 1:52:00 PM

- Janice, many thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/17/2017 7:08:00 AM

I see that you deep and dark writes exceptionally well my friend! Solid 7 and a fav....

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/17/2017 7:53:00 AM

- Many thanks for friendly visits a 7 + fav. and lovely comments, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/17/2017 12:28:00 AM

Wow excellent couplets, Anne Lise! I'm not used to dark writes from you, but I love it...so beautifully expressed! Hugs, Rhonda

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/17/2017 3:13:00 AM

- Happy you liked it, Rhonda :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Manmath Dalei

Date: 3/16/2017 9:50:00 AM

Ur every deep thought is well depicted. Well penned...........//hugs//Manmath.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/16/2017 2:14:00 PM

- Manmath, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kevin Leake

Date: 3/16/2017 5:13:00 AM

Very well written Anne, A very dark place to be!!! Keep smiling and looking forward, Good things are always on the horizon Best Wishes Kevin

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/16/2017 5:15:00 AM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Kevin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/15/2017 6:04:00 PM

Welcome to the dark side Anne-Lise !! :) This was so melancholic and beautiful!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/16/2017 4:22:00 AM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/15/2017 5:19:00 PM

Wonderful imagery and depth to this piece. Your thoughts come alive and breathe within your words. Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/16/2017 4:21:00 AM

- Emile, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2017 3:25:00 PM

Love the great imagery you put into this one, sweetie! SEVEN

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/15/2017 3:29:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Andrea :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 3/15/2017 3:08:00 PM

Fantastic poem well-done x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/15/2017 3:11:00 PM

- Happy you liked this, Wendy :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/15/2017 2:33:00 PM

Very dramatic work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/15/2017 2:36:00 PM

- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 3/15/2017 1:57:00 PM

I love how this evolved, Anne-Lise! An expressive transition from pain and sadness to light and the promise of better things to come. #7 Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/15/2017 2:25:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Paul :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/15/2017 12:52:00 PM

Spring will come Anne-Lise, maybe not a minute too soon... Well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/15/2017 2:26:00 PM

- Many thanks Charlie, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/15/2017 7:22:00 AM

Good Morning Anne. Hello. First the title itself is a million dollar title and expression. Those words are hauntingly true. Your words in the theme are so expressive and deliver much strength with the repetitive line of "Let me be" which in my eyes was appropriately utilized and executed. Well done throughout. Have a wonderful day.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/15/2017 2:25:00 PM

- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Lisa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/15/2017 3:22:00 AM

I agree, love is the answer, peace is the path! Very lovely! ; ) 7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/15/2017 5:03:00 AM

- Many thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Connie :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)