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- To Deal With Demons -

Wake up in my real world
Forever condemned in dark shadows
Release the power of demons
No light ... a black nothing, bats enjoying the place
Their fangs are the tools of their lust for human flesh and blood
The demons have chosen me to give birth to their children
It is not love
Brutal rape
Chained in their power
Inferno of fire, blood, death and hell
My days are numbered
Whoever betrays the demons get to taste the whip
A nightmare twenty four hours a day
Even in my dreams, they haunt my soul
Attacked of demons I am
My psyche is completely collapsed
Find myself in a pure terror condition
I would rather want to die as soon as possible,
than to fight the demons
The animal is the Devil himself









15.03.2016
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Teddy Kimathi Date: 5/18/2016 8:13:00 AM That picture reminds me of white walkers in "Game of Thrones." Congrats Anne Lise, for your placement in the contest!! ;-) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/18/2016 12:15:00 PM - Teddy, thanks for visiting and congrats on my poem : - To Deal With Demons - :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight Date: 5/16/2016 9:24:00 AM Anne-Lise, a very dark and thought- provoking poem. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/16/2016 9:55:00 AM - Thanks for visiting and congrats on my poem, Sandra - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Weston Gregory Date: 3/28/2016 9:46:00 AM Your piece speak of being a pawn has now vast amount of us are. I think you did well in painting such a vivid image. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/28/2016 11:36:00 AM - Thankfully only imagination, Weston :) - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman Date: 3/23/2016 7:01:00 AM Interesting challenge that you've met quite well. You have to place yourself in a dark place to write truly dark poetry. Don't dwell there. It's a labyrinth that's easy to get lost in. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/23/2016 7:26:00 AM - I prefer happy poems, James :))) - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort Date: 3/19/2016 3:28:00 PM Well they say there is a dark side. No doubt. We do have animal tendencies that come from somewhere. We only hope that our civility and society can keep us in check. The irony is having you (the sweetest blonde poetess) go there! The things happening on this earth are sometimes very frightening, yet there is a slow march to goodness. Long live solar energy and wind power!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/19/2016 3:46:00 PM - ..... :)))))) .............. nobody knows what hides behind "the sweetest blonde poetess " :)))) - Duke, thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn Date: 3/19/2016 1:49:00 PM Dear Anne Lise A different type then I'm use two from you my friend, but I totally loved it alot, it has a wonderful dark sided feeling to it, it captured my darker side, truly awesome, cheri Login to Reply Vera Duggan Date: 3/24/2016 12:27:00 AM I agree with Cheryl, it's not like you to write something like this it is more her style of writing but it just goes to show how creative you are, well done.......Vera Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/19/2016 2:36:00 PM - Cherl, thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray Date: 3/18/2016 6:43:00 PM Wonderful terror. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/19/2016 5:56:00 AM - Thank you for visits and comments, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brian Mcclain Date: 3/18/2016 5:07:00 PM Hi Anne, Dang--that's wild. Awesome poem, well-written! I need me a 50-foot-tall crucifix and a 50-pound sack of garlic after reading this. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/19/2016 5:56:00 AM :))))) - Brian, thank you for visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/18/2016 10:03:00 AM wow, a very powerful, raw write, anne.. i am enjoying this other side of you.. happy friday and huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/19/2016 5:55:00 AM - Thank you for visits and comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Whatley Date: 3/18/2016 8:27:00 AM Dark, melancholic write, Anne - such is the frighteningly selfish and primitive nature of the real world - well expressed indeed. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/18/2016 9:52:00 AM - Thank you for visits and comments, Michael :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France Date: 3/17/2016 5:57:00 PM Anne Lise, wow, what an incredible write, and what an awesome image, I am loving this 7 for sure ~ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/18/2016 4:13:00 AM - B.W., thank you for the comments a 7 and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jim Meissner Date: 3/17/2016 3:08:00 PM Emotionally evoking fear. Love it. Deep, Dark, Hopeless...Encompasses and expresses real fear. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2016 3:49:00 PM - I prefer angels, love, smile and nature poems Jim :) - There is so much dark and sad in the world ...... I need to brighten up your day with my writing :) - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner Date: 3/17/2016 7:19:00 AM My goodness Anne-Lise, did you eat something that upset your stomach before bed. I believe in expansion of ones boundaries but this just doesn't sound like you. Very very dark and a little twisted. I hope you've gotten it all out. Looking for your smile. Peace my dear:) Well written just not my genre. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2016 9:24:00 AM - There will come many more smiles in the future, Daniel :) Daniel Turner Date: 3/17/2016 8:56:00 AM I suppose in reality, all can go there, but when I think of you...it's a stretch. It is well written but I ,personally, prefer the bubbly friendly you and the smiles:):) Peace my kind friend:):) Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2016 8:46:00 AM - You need not be concerned Daniel, this is a writing that is not my style ..... - A "proof" that I "can" go deep and dark ..... very dark :)))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish Date: 3/16/2016 8:28:00 PM Seems like a song by Black Sabbath. Nice and mysterious. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2016 9:21:00 AM - Never liked Black Sabbath music, Matthew - Thank you for the comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/16/2016 5:36:00 PM it's an angel day, anne.. hope you are fine!..huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2016 8:48:00 AM - Everything is fine, Nette :)))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jasper Matthews Date: 3/16/2016 12:54:00 PM Wow I .....excellent flow of words keep it coming because enough is never enough a flowing 8 for me Login to Reply Jasper Matthews Date: 3/17/2016 12:32:00 PM and hey I got a new poem on deck Jasper Matthews Date: 3/17/2016 12:31:00 PM yes I loved it actually Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2016 9:19:00 AM - Nice you like this, Jasper - Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath Date: 3/16/2016 12:46:00 PM It's very hard to fight with inner and out demons both but we can try to come out from such devilish hell with the grace of God. Very deeply penned. Lovely 7. Beautifully done my lovely lovely friend, bl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2016 9:13:00 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior Date: 3/16/2016 8:51:00 AM You talk about the Dark Ones...for they are always hungering for our souls...I like this side of you Anne Lise...in a way it is a good thing to bring out both sides...one can not experience true light until they visit the darkest dark...with a dark hug lol...^WW^ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2016 9:17:00 AM - I prefer the light Winged :))) - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/16/2016 8:13:00 AM That is a terrible state of mind..Reads like one in hell..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2016 8:28:00 AM - lol .... yes dear Sara, I think it's hell - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 3/16/2016 2:44:00 AM Very unusual write from you but I like it. Good poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it my friend. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2016 4:41:00 AM - Not my style at all Ravi, a challenge - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Walter T. Ashe Date: 3/15/2016 9:01:00 PM You most definitely met your challenge! Dissipate the dark with that shining bright light of yours!...for you are "Light!" :-) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2016 4:37:00 AM - I prefer angels, love, smile and nature :) - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Walter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shaunda Lindsay Date: 3/15/2016 4:30:00 PM I like this. A lot. So you know, my husband plays in a thrash metal band and I really believe you could be a lyricist for any metal band. Good one dear. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2016 12:30:00 PM - Is there "big" money to earn, so maybe I am considering it :))))) Shaunda Lindsay Date: 3/16/2016 8:25:00 AM lolol Well, If you ever need work.. Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2016 4:30:00 AM - :)))) ...... Not exactly my music - Nice you like this - thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Shaunda - hugs // Anne-Lise :)