- To Be In Love -

                        
                                   A love affair between a snail 
                                         and a tape dispenser
                                        His tiger gaze is blurry -

                                        Honey, I love your body
                                        and your natural curves ...
                                we complement each other perfectly
                                  Your scent makes mine hips move
                                         with particular charisma

                                          Glued :  ...  - L O V E
                                                    makes 
                                                            blind  -

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Rowena Velasco

Date: 7/29/2025 4:40:00 AM

This is both quirky and oddly romantic—I never knew a snail and a tape dispenser could have such chemistry! The imagery is playful but surprisingly tender. That last line—'Glued: love makes blind'—is clever and funny. Loved it!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/20/2025 11:46:00 AM

I read two very serious poems of yours, so I needed this feel-equalizer that is so hysterically funny, I called my love over to share it with him. Oh, my, Anne-Lise, from humor to somber, you are the complete poetry package ... CayCay