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girl, blood, pain, creepy

Her quest for the meaning of her existence and identity It promised rarely good, although everything was laid in fate's hands She thought the pain was supposed, and depression was her everyday life Behind her walls, there is a dark and gloomy world Small tears escaping her bloodshot eyes She has stopped believing in fake dreams, many years back A flash of red streams flowing continuously Is it too late ... silence waiting 03.07.2018 Sun :) A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Eight lines of fate, when you wonder if it is too late Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One 3rd place in the contest

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/21/2018 11:07:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win, Anne-Lise.. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2018 12:53:00 AM

- Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/21/2018 11:02:00 PM

A dark and moving poem, Sunshine. Congrats on your podium finish.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2018 12:52:00 AM

- Line, thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/21/2018 4:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your words convey such a deep pain and hopelessness that is gripping. Some of us have to be given hope, some never beyond reach. Well done!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2018 12:52:00 AM

- Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Curtis Moorman

Date: 7/20/2018 1:49:00 PM

Dear Sweet Anne-Lise, what a sad poem. And so true in today's world. I teach at two addictive behavior centers in my neighborhood and I see so much pain it scares me.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/20/2018 2:16:00 PM

- Sad to hear, Carlie :( - Thank you for your friendly visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 7/20/2018 12:28:00 AM

Congratulations, Anne-Lise on your win. "Is it too late ... silence waiting" .. great expression.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/20/2018 4:13:00 AM

- Subimal, thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/19/2018 2:39:00 PM

Back to say congratulations on your win, no matter how much time you read it, it is the still really beautiful and sad, good luck and have a really nice day

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/19/2018 2:46:00 PM

- Faraz, thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 7/19/2018 7:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/19/2018 7:52:00 AM

- Many thanks for my 3rd place in your contest, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll

Date: 7/12/2018 9:08:00 AM

So sad. I like to believe there is always hope. Brilliant write and the image is perfect. A big hug sent your way // Warren :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/12/2018 9:18:00 AM

- Warren, thank you so much for your very kind comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/6/2018 5:20:00 PM

A sad ending to those who are lost. Nicely written. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/7/2018 1:04:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/4/2018 6:48:00 PM

A gripping heartfelt write Anne-Lise...eight great lines...love & light...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/5/2018 1:38:00 PM

- W.W., thank you so much for your very kind comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 7/4/2018 6:18:00 PM

really, well-done poet, darkness is hard to write about unless you have known it...good luck in the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/5/2018 1:37:00 PM

- Frederic, thank you so much for your very kind comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 7/4/2018 6:02:00 PM

A sad ending as dreams are lost...GL in the contest Anne..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/5/2018 1:37:00 PM

- Thank you Joseph, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 7/4/2018 5:18:00 PM

An introspective moving write.. the essence of our very existence! The who we are! The quest for one's identify! and so many other existential and everyday life issues burning the mind and heart! An amazing write dear Anne-Lise.. the best of luck in the contest! Keep shining and stay blessed always.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/5/2018 1:36:00 PM

- Thank you Besma, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/4/2018 11:14:00 AM

Sadly too late, best wishes with this theme...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/4/2018 2:40:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett

Date: 7/4/2018 10:29:00 AM

Well written Anne-Lise, it’s so sad and more relevant today that fate can play an important role in our lives and leave us in unfortunate dire situations that are out of our control. :((

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/4/2018 2:39:00 PM

- Thank you Roy, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/4/2018 12:24:00 AM

How sad it is when one cannot rise above depression. So many people suffer from it. Thank you for sharing . gl in the contest SS

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/4/2018 2:13:00 PM

- Pixie, thank you so much for your very kind comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lyric Man

Date: 7/4/2018 12:22:00 AM

Hi Sunshine.. Back from a party and wide awake. Need me a few funny, mysterious, interesting, or mellow writes to settle me into a restful state. So glad I came across your poem tonight.. just what I needed! PS.. Thank you so much for commenting on my recent post!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/4/2018 2:13:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, L.M. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 7/3/2018 9:16:00 PM

This is deep and reflective write ... Like it ...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/4/2018 8:53:00 AM

- Probir, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/3/2018 7:16:00 PM

Deep and very sad, Sunshine, I wonder if there is something in the air to make us write sad poems.. :( A very good write , good luck in the contest... Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/4/2018 8:52:00 AM

- Eve, thank you so much for your very kind comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/3/2018 4:59:00 PM

You articulated well Anne-Lise, how some people suffer in gloom and depression taking refuge in tears. Sad, but true..very best to you for a win at the top.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/4/2018 5:57:00 AM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Hagy

Date: 7/3/2018 4:37:00 PM

Very well written Sunshine :)...eerily sad...I like your new avatar pix, so cute!... but miss seeing your sunny smile :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/4/2018 5:57:00 AM

- Thank you Chris, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/3/2018 2:08:00 PM

Sad too sad one to see his life without hope and dreams! Very well written dearest, Anne-Lise! Let us pray things like that never to happen or at least rarely to happen!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/3/2018 3:08:00 PM

- It happens too often, my friend - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/3/2018 2:04:00 PM

It is a really lovely poem and certainly a joy to read, you have written a great poem for the contest and I wish it to do well in it, you see never stop dreaming, no matter how difficult they are to achieve, the first step toward success is always firstly to dream, after that no matter how difficult it is, wait because waiting might be difficult but regretting is worse, again I wish you best of luck in the contest, good luck and have a nice day

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/3/2018 3:07:00 PM

- Thank you Faraz, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/3/2018 12:23:00 PM

A red mood... A hopeless feeling of doom... Well expressed... All the best...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/3/2018 1:32:00 PM

- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/3/2018 10:15:00 AM

You went dark and did so beautifully. Sadness cast poetic webs over your poem where many people have been, are now or will be there on some future days. It hurts. A great poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/3/2018 1:32:00 PM

- Thank you CayCay, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)