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27.02.2025
Anne-Lise Andresen
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- The Rose And The Dandelion -


    A spectrum of colors
    adorned the garden of love
    Heavenly beauty,
    the rose has a timeless allure
    Tiny petals whispered
    romance in the garden

    A yellow flower,
    not from a noble family
    He focuses on
    a newly sprouted beauty
    She didn't misread the signals
    He was attractive,
    different from the others
    Humble and simple, 
    symbol of the sun
    The other roses turned away their heads,
    gave him a sense of insufficiency

    Love is much stronger than fear, 
    sometimes you must lose to understand
    Regardless of the outcome,
    the flirtation itself was a golden moment
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Date: 3/12/2025 8:05:00 AM
Anne-Lise, you have a very interesting perspective on relationships and some of the potential outcomes of interactions with others. Very smart you are in this regard...smiles!!!
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Date: 3/2/2025 3:52:00 PM
Ah, a great golden moment between the dandelion and the rose!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/3/2025 1:57:00 AM
- Thanks for your comment, David :) - hugs
Date: 3/1/2025 5:05:00 AM
A beautiful poem with a very beautiful image. Your selection of images are always unmatched. Wish you all the best dear Anne. Love and hugs.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/1/2025 9:34:00 AM
- Thanks for your comment, Valsa :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Date: 3/1/2025 5:01:00 AM
Anne-Lise, beautifully penned, best of luck in the contest. -hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/1/2025 9:33:00 AM
- Tania, thanks for your comment :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Date: 2/28/2025 6:35:00 PM
All beauties all alluring but only one can be the right one. well said.. Blessings my friend
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Date: 3/1/2025 9:33:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Eve :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Date: 2/28/2025 7:53:00 AM
Gorgeous write, Anne-Lise! A yellow flower, not from a noble family…Regardless of the outcome, the flirtation itself was a golden moment
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/28/2025 9:58:00 AM
- Kim, thanks for your comment :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Date: 2/28/2025 5:57:00 AM
Flower symbolism to explore themes of love,social acceptance,individuality and beauty of authentic experiences....very nice
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/28/2025 6:27:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Akham :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Date: 2/28/2025 4:32:00 AM
Hello Anne-Lise, besides the lovely imagery and sensual beauty of this poem, I envy your free verse form which I have never been to accomplish very well. Well done and best of luck in the contest. Kudos, Terrell
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/28/2025 5:11:00 AM
- Terrell, a pleasure to see you on my poem, thank you very much :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Date: 2/28/2025 12:14:00 AM
So very beautiful poem!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/28/2025 5:10:00 AM
- Abdullah, thanks for your comment :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Date: 2/27/2025 7:04:00 PM
Anne-Lise, you have painted a stunning image with your lovely poetry. I hope you do well in the contest.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/28/2025 5:09:00 AM
- Thanks for your comment, Las :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Date: 2/27/2025 6:38:00 PM
Beautiful poem with a beautiful picture Anne-Lise. Good luck with the contest.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/28/2025 5:08:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Oliver :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Date: 2/27/2025 2:11:00 PM
Beautiful flowers they are too Anne Lise, roll on spring. Tom
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Date: 2/28/2025 5:07:00 AM
- I love roses ... and dandelions too ... beautiful in their own way :) - Have a lovely weekend, Tom :) - hugs
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