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- The Naked Truth -

We are all brothers and sisters born without hate
Naked we were born to earth with purity and innocence as Lily 

Love has no barriers beyond our earthly grasp 
Right actions coming from the right setting, it starts from within

Sometimes we feel we are living inside a bubble
To live a good life, we must think, speak and act correctly

Destiny paints our divine promise colors a rainbow
Everything's really just small adjustments in your life

The search for the true love with joy and confidence in this world
Let your light shine bright, love inside the heart last forever

Of life our guiding angels a choir heavenly glamor
Angels over flowing universe with its clean and deep strength





Written by Liam Mcdaid & A-L Andresen 11.03.2015 
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Funom Makama Date: 6/8/2015 3:27:00 AM This is adorable and extremely cute. Your soul just diffused into mine to wonderfully correlate with your message. Great work friend and thanks a zillion for visiting my page. I hope to be able to attract more of your attention. Once again this is an awesome piece of creativity. selah! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/8/2015 7:55:00 AM - Glad you enjoy it, Funom :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet Date: 3/27/2015 2:04:00 PM Your words say a lot and convey strong emotions without a lot of window dressing. Nice job. Emile. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/27/2015 2:10:00 PM - Thank you Emile, always a pleasure to receive a visit and comments from you - I wish you a lovely weekend- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 3/25/2015 1:28:00 PM A gem written by both of you. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/25/2015 1:55:00 PM - Glad you enjoy it, Phyllis :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

William Gray Date: 3/24/2015 2:42:00 AM Lovely piece of poetry, well written, enjoyed very much!.- Best Regards! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/24/2015 2:47:00 AM - William, thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak Date: 3/21/2015 8:06:00 AM Stunning collaboration! Such wisdom, beauty and truth in this gem. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/21/2015 12:12:00 PM - Glad you enjoy it, Monterey :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Waldrop Date: 3/16/2015 8:26:00 PM This is perfectly named. I enjoyed Truth I felt in my Heart while reading. Loved it. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2015 4:18:00 AM - Glad you enjoy it, David :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 3/14/2015 5:36:00 PM I was already mentally planning a well done to Anne Lise, till I came to the very end and saw Liam's name! Would not have known it was a co-write, otherwise!! So...well done to the both of you...wise minds working in unison. /x/ paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/15/2015 5:15:00 AM - Thanks for visit and lovely comments, Paul :) - Happy weekend !! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/13/2015 12:39:00 PM a joy to read your enlightening collab.. you light me up, anne... happy Friday and be well.. huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/13/2015 12:56:00 PM - Glad you enjoy it, dear friend Nette :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 3/12/2015 4:17:00 PM Another great co write Anne...beautiful...hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/13/2015 4:00:00 AM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/12/2015 12:11:00 PM Grat collaboration..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by...Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/12/2015 12:49:00 PM - Thanks Sara, for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez Date: 3/12/2015 10:07:00 AM Another write I like. Made me stop, made me smile, made me think for a while. Everything there speaks wisdom. To both of you, Anne-Lise and Liam, 7 :) Kim Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/12/2015 12:49:00 PM - Kim, thanks for visiting, a 7 and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/12/2015 9:53:00 AM Wise perspectives! Hugs Rick. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/12/2015 12:48:00 PM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Richard - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath Date: 3/12/2015 8:38:00 AM Very strong beautiful feeling of your nice heart expressed with beautiful words too. Genius poem. 7++ i feel here. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/12/2015 8:59:00 AM - A pleasure to share with good friends Bl - thank you - I wish you a lovely day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/12/2015 8:30:00 AM The truth may be naked BUT your verses are majestically dressed! Congratulations to both of you, Liam and Anne-Lise, Anne-Lise and Liam! A seven to each! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/12/2015 8:57:00 AM - Thank you my friend Demetrios, always a pleasure to receive a visit and comments from you - I wish you a lovely day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 3/12/2015 5:21:00 AM Hello Liam and Anne- Lise! Very beautiful pens! Another wonderful collaboration from you my dearest friends. Just dazzling!I love it! A huge 7 +++ to each of you! A very inspiring and promising piece about true love dreams hopes friendship life to be held very close to ones heart.smiling. A very beautiful piece with a very positive message. I enjoyed it! Truly mighty golden pens! Wishing you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you always! :) Love n' hugs! xoxox D.^O^ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/12/2015 5:58:00 AM - Glad you enjoy it, dear friend Dorian :) - Thanks for visiting, a huge 7 and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 3/12/2015 12:51:00 AM You and Liam are a wonderful writing duo, Anne Lise! I love these beautiful words from start to end...hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/12/2015 3:45:00 AM - Glad you enjoy it, dear Rhonda :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith Date: 3/11/2015 4:15:00 PM Wonderful collaboration you two....Tim Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/12/2015 3:42:00 AM - Tim, thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 3/11/2015 4:00:00 PM you write in perfect harmony Anne Lise and Liam - brilliant imagery - such a lovely flow to the lines:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/12/2015 3:41:00 AM - Thanks for visiting, a 7 and lovely comments, dear Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid Date: 3/11/2015 3:51:00 PM smiling your pen flowed beautiful anne lise a pleasure writing this with you pal wishing you a blessed beautiful night Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/12/2015 3:37:00 AM - A new poem to our "collection" - Glad you liked the finished result - A pleasure to "share" word with you Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)