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- the Freezing Wind -

Dusk

                                    A glimpse of the sun's rays

                                    the basis of all life on Earth

                                       But, in the back streets

                                             The cold hands

                                               Face to face

                                              Every breath ...

                                               a tired heart

                                               The pale lips

                                             Your mute words

                                      a changing facial expression

                                      I listening to your thoughts

                                                 You strive ...

                                          against freezing wind

                                      One day the journey is over










15/12/2019
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Poem of the Day : 17/12/2019

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Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/15/2020 3:37:00 PM Congratulations on POTD! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/16/2020 6:36:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 12/26/2019 9:48:00 AM Congratulations on your POTD. I love the poem & picture........ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:16:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 12/18/2019 3:39:00 PM My dear dear Anne-Lise, I did answer and congratulate you on your intense poetry and the honour bestowed upon you of POTD - congratulations my dear friend. Somewhere I noticed that I made a mistake someone told me, but can't find that comment. Blessings my friend. I commented immediately. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:16:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 12/18/2019 9:39:00 AM All around is freezing! Just your wonderful poetry warms a reader's heart! Congratulations on your POTD honour, Sunshine Smile! A great pleasure to read! Regards and blessings. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:15:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Besma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael Date: 12/18/2019 7:39:00 AM One day...Congratulation Anne-Lise on POTD Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:15:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 12/17/2019 10:37:00 PM Back sweet lady with congratulations on POTD... Hugs Eve Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:15:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams Date: 12/17/2019 8:21:00 PM Congratulations Anne - Lise , on this poem being honoured on POTD. Very deserving....Maria Hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:14:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin Date: 12/17/2019 6:04:00 PM Congratulations Anne-Lise on POTD with your lovely poem! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:14:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios Date: 12/17/2019 4:59:00 PM Woo-Hoo. Bring out the bubbly! Congrats, dear Anne-Lise. Panagiota Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:14:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Knowlton Date: 12/17/2019 3:34:00 PM Just love your work Sunshine. Another beautiful poem. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:13:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/17/2019 2:50:00 PM Ooh! A tug at the heart, at the sleeve, and at the conscience, Anne-Lise. Congrats on a fittng seasonal POTD write! Peace and Joy, Gershon Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:13:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams Date: 12/17/2019 12:02:00 PM so happy to see this shining as POTD... congratulations Anne- Lise... hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:12:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brandy Nicole Date: 12/17/2019 11:35:00 AM Your thoughts curl gently around my heart. I read this without looking at the photo, and then- as I looked, your words touched my heart even more. This holds so many moments and emotions. Beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Anne-Lise, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:12:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Brandy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter Date: 12/17/2019 10:10:00 AM When I think of Norway, I think of a "freezing wind." (I couldn't find the picture until I pulled up the poem from your own page. Good work, Sunshine. Congratulations! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:12:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll Date: 12/17/2019 8:34:00 AM Congratulations on POID, Anne-Lise. Sending a big warm hug your way. ~ Warren Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:11:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green Date: 12/17/2019 7:06:00 AM Congrats my friend on POTD. Not sure how I missed this one the first time around but so happy I found it honored today. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:11:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 12/17/2019 6:35:00 AM Congrats Anne-Lise on poem of the day--touching write. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:10:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. Date: 12/17/2019 5:56:00 AM Hi Anne-Lise, I'm just coming back to congratulations on getting the poem of day-Alexis Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:10:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 12/17/2019 5:21:00 AM A heartfelt write Anne, Congrats on POTD Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:10:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Na Na Date: 12/17/2019 4:32:00 AM Congrats on your POTD Anne-Lise Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:09:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Greg :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior Date: 12/17/2019 4:13:00 AM A journey we all must partake my dear Anne-Lise...but what awaits us...words can not describe...such an emotive write from your heart my dear friend...Congrats!! on a most deserving POTD!!...may the light within the dark, comfort you...^WW^ :o) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:09:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Na Na Date: 12/17/2019 4:30:00 AM I think you got the wrong person Jennifer this is Jacobs poem

Tom Cunningham Date: 12/17/2019 3:26:00 AM Back with congrats Anne on POTD honours. Tom Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:08:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 12/16/2019 2:48:00 PM A lovely pen this truly is Anne-Lise , so excellently penned. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:07:00 AM - Many thanks Gordon, for your kind visit and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Scott Date: 12/16/2019 11:08:00 AM love your poem davidscott Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/18/2019 8:06:00 AM - Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Lin Lane Date: 12/16/2019 5:28:00 AM Anne-Lise, the photo you chose to accompany your poem is perfect. You begin at dusk, the beginning of darkness. Though the night may be cold and dark, there is light, as in your photo, signifying hope. There is a sense of such sorrow. Take care. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/17/2019 12:52:00 PM - Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Lin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

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