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There are times you have no choice To infinite unity, the tide comes as determined You are part of the earth, the sun, the moon, the wind and the rain I do not care who you are, I drink of the other fountain Your jaws tighten your smile gets glued Leeches bite to suck blood on your skin, by their own greed // Act like a man of flesh and blood Your card must be played, an ace or a joker Ace has a higher value and joker is a substitute, but this is not poker // An obsession that wins over common sense The power of judgment disappears a power higher than yourself Use your energy to get out of the dark abyss He stamps his brown paper bag and makes his choice Open a bottle of vodka, alcohol's embrace 26.09.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Poem of the Day; 28.09.2017

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/25/2017 8:46:00 PM

I like the last verse the best. have a nice evening my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/20/2018 1:02:00 PM

- Darlene, many thanks for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lord R. E. Taylor

Date: 10/11/2017 8:07:00 AM

I truly loved this. Thank you for sharing it!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/20/2018 1:01:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, R.e. :) - hugs // Anne-Lis

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/1/2017 3:57:00 AM

A truly powerful poem that is very deserving of POTD! Congratulations! : )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/1/2017 5:09:00 AM

- Thank you Connie, for your friendly visit and congratulations :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 9/30/2017 2:37:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, Congratulations on the POTD honor here!! Very Well-Done and A FAVE!! The imagery and build out of the metaphor are most excellent. Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/30/2017 4:00:00 PM

- Thanks so much for the comment, a fave and congratulations Gary :) - I really appreciate it :) - P.O.T.D. always a nice surprise :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/28/2017 4:25:00 PM

Awesome write, Sunshine, congratulations on POTD ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2017 2:13:00 AM

- Thanks so much for the comment and congratulations, Eve :) - I really appreciate it :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Swartz

Date: 9/28/2017 3:36:00 PM

Congratulations! This is a prefectly written poem. I love the flow and the words and tuft imagery. Great great job a

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2017 2:10:00 AM

- Thanks so much James, for the comment and congratulations - I really appreciate it :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett

Date: 9/28/2017 3:32:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD Anne-Lise, I feel so sorry for people that find themselves under the control of any addiction, this is so well written.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2017 2:10:00 AM

- Thank you Roy, for your friendly visit and congratulations :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/28/2017 12:08:00 PM

Returning with congrats Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 12:19:00 PM

- Thanks for returning back with congratulations, Vijay :) - I really appreciate it :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Loughman

Date: 9/28/2017 11:55:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD! Well done!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 12:19:00 PM

- Thanks so much Donna, for the comment and congratulations - I really appreciate it :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/28/2017 9:54:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Anne Lise:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 12:17:00 PM

- Thanks for dropping back with congratulations, Jan :) - I really appreciate it :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/28/2017 9:43:00 AM

this encouraging poem lifts me up, anne... congrats on your POTD citation... let's toast to the wonder of life!...happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 12:16:00 PM

- hugs :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/28/2017 9:42:00 AM

this encouraging poem lifts me up, anne... congrats on your POTD citation... let's toast to the wonder of life!...happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 12:15:00 PM

- Thank you Nette, for your friendly visit and congratulations :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Gondolf

Date: 9/28/2017 9:41:00 AM

Congrats on having the POTD, Anne-Lise. This poem rings home to me, my father was an alcoholic and it was a struggle for our family.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 12:14:00 PM

- Sad memories that will always leave a trace - Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, John :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/28/2017 9:36:00 AM

You have done a superb poem. Read by the right person, it could change a life. I wish I could say more. Congratulations!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 12:12:00 PM

- Thanks so much Sunlite, for the comment and congratulations - I really appreciate it :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/28/2017 9:27:00 AM

Your venture to the dark side was very well done my dear, congratulations for POTD honors...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 12:11:00 PM

- Thanks so much for the comment and congratulations, Charlie :) - I really appreciate it :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White

Date: 9/28/2017 9:04:00 AM

Wonderful Anne-Lise, great PotD. Congratulations :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 12:05:00 PM

- Thank you Darren, for your friendly visit and congratulations :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Craig Hawkins

Date: 9/28/2017 8:47:00 AM

Congratulations on the POTD, it's a pleasure to read..:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 12:05:00 PM

- Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, Craig :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 9/28/2017 7:59:00 AM

Stopping back with my congratulations ...I knew this write was special

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 8:03:00 AM

- Thank you for your congratulations and your faith in my writing, Tim :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/28/2017 7:28:00 AM

Strong poem about addiction, Anne-Lise - congrats on your POTD. I am sorry for all who are affected by alcoholism.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 7:38:00 AM

- Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, Agnes :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 9/28/2017 7:02:00 AM

true

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 7:24:00 AM

- Thanks, Muhammad - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/28/2017 6:57:00 AM

Sad truth that prevails much in these last days, Anne-lise, congratulations on your POTD:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 7:25:00 AM

- Terribly sad, Jo - Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 9/28/2017 6:57:00 AM

So well penned Anne-Lise, am one acquainted with this dance, a brown fog indeed. congratulations on potd with hugs and love :) xomo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 7:22:00 AM

- Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, Maureen :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 9/28/2017 6:51:00 AM

Congrats on POTD.... Dark and deep... What happened to the Anne Lise that we know?

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 7:20:00 AM

:))) ... maybe you do not know her at all, S.O. :) - Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, my friend :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

Date: 9/28/2017 6:03:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD Anne Lise. So well deserved. An amazing write...Maria xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 6:13:00 AM

- Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, my friend Maria :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/28/2017 5:33:00 AM

What else can I say dearest, Ann-Lise but congratulations! hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 5:58:00 AM

- Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)