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Most people were born with love and concern ~ the real world is more like a nightmare ~ Listening To My Monday Blues ~ we need to turn adversity into opportunity CHANGE ~ before the sun goes down ~ ~ * * * * * * ~ Some have tattoos, others have scars Everyone has the memories Five years after several coordinated terrorist acts shaken Norway on 22 July 2011 The bereaved and survivors still have horrific memories and miss their loved ones who lost their lives ... One human ... ... The air vibrated 25.07.2016 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 8/24/2016 1:43:00 AM
love the poem, to much violence needs to end and more love and compassion to bloom. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/24/2016 6:46:00 AM
- Many thanks, Eve for the pleasant visit and your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/23/2016 7:48:00 PM
...back to Congratulate you on your placement in 'Best new poem's. This one really touched me a lot...bundles of blessings to you :-) lynn
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Date: 8/24/2016 6:45:00 AM
- Lynn, many thanks for the pleasant visit and your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/22/2016 1:26:00 AM
Out of unspeakable violence comes newfound awareness and action so those whom you write so poignantly of did not die in vain. Your poem keeps the "real victims" of this tragedy in the forefront where they belong, so we never forget. Beautifully composed, your heart glows with love as a wonderful call to action.:-) The title is chilling...but devastatingly true. bundles of blessings, lynn
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Date: 8/22/2016 2:13:00 AM
- A very sad event in Norwegian history, many young people were simply "slaughtered" - Many thanks for the pleasant visit and your comments, Lynn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/21/2016 11:57:00 PM
What a terrible tragedy good to keep the memory alive, well written thanks for posting!
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Date: 8/22/2016 2:11:00 AM
- John, many thanks for the pleasant visit and your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/14/2016 12:22:00 PM
i think Anita Moorjani and you both are great philosophers. It's true that until and unless true beauty is felt inner, there can be no outer beauty feeling for any one in this world. Life is precious highly only when universal feeling's felt. If any feeling's matched with such a feeling that's universal then only that's universal surely. Otherwise wasting precious life. A great poem, my favorite too, my lovely lovely friend. A great seven. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
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Date: 8/14/2016 12:58:00 PM
- A beautiful poem/quote, from Anita Moorjani - Thank you for the beautiful words a 7 and fav. on my writing, my friend Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2016 12:35:00 PM
Very well said. Life for some comes with incredible pain. A Fav.
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Date: 7/29/2016 11:27:00 AM
- Glad you liked it, Armand - Many thanks for the pleasant visit a fav. and your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/27/2016 4:50:00 PM
May we never forget the many innocent who die at the hands of heartless people; wounds heal, but the scars will forever remain. We need a better world...we need a change!! Hugs // paul
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Date: 7/29/2016 11:29:00 AM
- Many thanks for the pleasant visit and your comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/27/2016 9:03:00 AM
A terrible moment, indeed. We all ask why these atrocities happen, and the world is seeking answers. But sadly they will come to late, for too many. May the change come soon.
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Date: 7/27/2016 9:45:00 AM
- Agree :) - Scott, many thanks for the pleasant visit and your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/26/2016 6:05:00 PM
way too many horrible events that are like tatooes to the heart, some never heal. Change before the sun goes down... let us keep hoping... hugs xxx
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Date: 7/27/2016 4:34:00 AM
- Will we get an end ? - Casarah, many thanks for the pleasant visit and your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/26/2016 5:43:00 PM
Now it seems it is France's turn. So true that a change must come.
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Date: 7/27/2016 4:31:00 AM
- ....... next time ? .... tomorrow ? .... next week ? ..... nobody knows ..... - Many thanks for the pleasant visit and your comments, Jean - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/26/2016 11:16:00 AM
what a fearless write.. may we have peace, dear anne.. beautiful... happy huggs!
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Date: 7/26/2016 11:40:00 AM
- The horrific events united the Norwegian nation against racism and many memorial events were held all over the country - We will always remember, Nette - Many thanks for the pleasant visit and your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/26/2016 5:43:00 AM
Marvelous writing deep and powerful able to move every heart! I am so sorry for the many young lives lost that horrible day back in 2011 dearest Anne-Lise! A huge seven!
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Date: 7/26/2016 11:37:00 AM
- Norway attacks: at least 92 killed in Oslo and Utøya island ..... many never came home - "Mom, this is not going well! - We're being attacked with automatic weapons!" the last words her mother heard from her daughter .... - Many thanks for the pleasant visit and your comments, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/25/2016 10:47:00 PM
So deep write and most appropriate with the timing...great write dear Sun.
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Date: 7/26/2016 11:22:00 AM
- A very sad event in Norwegian history, many young people were simply "slaughtered" - Many thanks for the pleasant visit and your comments, Nilima - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/25/2016 7:45:00 PM
I so love this A-L...One of your best
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Date: 7/26/2016 11:20:00 AM
- Glad you liked it, Tim - Many thanks for the pleasant visit and your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/25/2016 6:24:00 PM
I like how you kept their memory alive with this lovely poem.
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Date: 7/26/2016 11:18:00 AM
- We never forget, this awful day ..... - Many thanks for the pleasant visit and your comments, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/25/2016 4:06:00 PM
This world is becoming very scary X great words x
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Date: 7/26/2016 11:13:00 AM
- Evil and scary, that's for sure Wendy - Many thanks for the pleasant visit and your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/25/2016 9:29:00 AM
I dread the thought of losing my faculties Anne Lise I think it is a fear many people have:-( hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 7/25/2016 2:27:00 PM
- Jan, many thanks for the pleasant visit a 7 and your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)