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21.03.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Wind, Rain, Snow, Thunder or Sun -
Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

3rd place in the contest

I am drying the dews of dawn in glittering luster Crystalline clarity A golden sapphire splendor that makes you impressed The midday sun, a brilliant blaze where the UV index is at its highest Attempt to avoid me at the most intense hours Watch my nightgown, feminine lace exquisite colorful embroideries Always a warm smile I bringing love to every heart

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/16/2024 10:31:00 AM

Anne-Lise, what wonderful and fresh imagery surrounding each phase of the sun throughout the day! What a delightful, and very unique, way to express the personality of the sun! Each stanza speaks to the rich and life giving essence of the sun in the sun's own words! Congratulations on your win! Hugs and blessings as your days grow longer and hopefully the sun is returning!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/7/2024 10:03:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this lovely "Sun" write again. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away...........

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/5/2024 4:55:00 PM

Anne-Lise, a charming poem, love the last stanza, congratulations on your winning placement. -Hugs

Valsa George

Date: 3/26/2024 2:44:00 AM

We feel the power of the mid-day sun. With global warming, summer is becoming so very intolerable in our region. We feel the might of the sun. The beauty of the sun's nightgown is the only thing that gives us some joy these days! Great personification where the sun himself warns of the ultraviolet rays that come down with the beams. Love and Hugs dear Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2024 2:46:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Valsa :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/23/2024 4:03:00 AM

Personification at its best Anne-Lise. Even a warning tucked in there for good measure amid all the wonderful attributes the sun tells of herself. So well done. A lovely poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2024 2:46:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, S.V. :) - hugs

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/22/2024 1:16:00 PM

Oh wow! This is beautifully written! Loving too. A Fave for me. Hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2024 2:47:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment and the fave, Heidi :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/22/2024 4:10:00 AM

And we accept your love so ready. A wonderful poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2024 2:47:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Victor :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/21/2024 7:21:00 PM

An amazing poem, Anne-Lise. I especially love the final verse, and its vividly lovely images. Good luck in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2024 2:47:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Evelyn :) - hugs

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/21/2024 5:52:00 PM

Sweet phase of the sun, bright and sunny. I like this poem of toasty warmth and summer days. Beautiful.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2024 2:48:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Hilda :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/21/2024 5:39:00 PM

outstanding, Anne-Lise. I felt like I was in a room somewhere and was having a conversation with the sun...that was brilliant. Your imagery was captivating. I especially liked this alliterative line/image: "drying the dews of dawn." A fabulous contest entry. Best wishes with the contest, hugs Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2024 2:48:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Sara :) - hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 3/21/2024 4:47:00 PM

beautiful imagery and feeling. bless you my friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2024 2:48:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Eve :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/21/2024 1:12:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this lovely "Sun" write. Pretty picture with a wonderful ending. "Good Luck" Hugs... Have blessed day writing away.................

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2024 2:49:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Paula :) - hugs

Silent One

Date: 3/21/2024 12:59:00 PM

It was like the sun was talking to me... excellent take on the contest and nice choice...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2024 2:49:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, S.O. :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 3/21/2024 11:05:00 AM

nice personification and the picture. A spirited sunshine poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2024 2:49:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Jay :) - hugs

Frederic Parker

Date: 3/21/2024 8:16:00 AM

I can tell that your spirit is filled with sunlight, dear poet

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2024 2:50:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Frederic :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/21/2024 6:38:00 AM

It certainly warns us up and raises our spirits. Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise. Hope you are well. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2024 6:55:00 AM

- Nice to see you, Tom - Everything is fine here, I hope the same with you :) - Many thanks for your comment and good wishes :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/21/2024 6:35:00 AM

This is so very beautiful, Anne-Lise.-- A golden sapphire splendor--Lovely!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2024 6:56:00 AM

- No life without the sun, Vijay - Many thanks for your kind comment :) - hugs

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 3/21/2024 6:31:00 AM

Hi there Ms. Poetess from the North, I felt the sun's radiance in this one and it certainly seems she's a feminine sun. Best of luck in the contest. It's always a pleasure to have you visit my page as well. Blessings to you..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2024 6:58:00 AM

- I only wish it shone a little more often... today it is grey, wet and windy - Many thanks for your comment, Nancy :) - hugs

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/21/2024 6:03:00 AM

Anne-Lise, I am thinking about how lucky we are to have our shining star. It empowers everything we have. It's remarkable to think about and not take it for granted. Many thanks for this one and for the focus on our biggest cheerleader and supporter.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2024 7:02:00 AM

- Duke, much appreciate you ... many thanks for all the poems you have read on my site today ... always a pleasure to read your words ... you really are a supporter :) - hugs