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- Sun -

                                 I am drying the dews of dawn
                                        in glittering luster
                                        Crystalline clarity
                                  A golden sapphire splendor
                                  that makes you impressed

                                The midday sun, a brilliant blaze
                              where the UV index is at its highest
                       Attempt to avoid me at the most intense hours

                               Watch my nightgown, feminine lace
                                  exquisite colorful embroideries
                                        Always a warm smile
                                  I bringing love to every heart

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2024

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Sam Kauffman Date: 4/16/2024 10:31:00 AM Anne-Lise, what wonderful and fresh imagery surrounding each phase of the sun throughout the day! What a delightful, and very unique, way to express the personality of the sun! Each stanza speaks to the rich and life giving essence of the sun in the sun's own words! Congratulations on your win! Hugs and blessings as your days grow longer and hopefully the sun is returning! Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/7/2024 10:03:00 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this lovely "Sun" write again. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away........... Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 4/5/2024 4:55:00 PM Anne-Lise, a charming poem, love the last stanza, congratulations on your winning placement. -Hugs Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 3/26/2024 2:44:00 AM We feel the power of the mid-day sun. With global warming, summer is becoming so very intolerable in our region. We feel the might of the sun. The beauty of the sun's nightgown is the only thing that gives us some joy these days! Great personification where the sun himself warns of the ultraviolet rays that come down with the beams. Love and Hugs dear Anne Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2024 2:46:00 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Valsa :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes Date: 3/23/2024 4:03:00 AM Personification at its best Anne-Lise. Even a warning tucked in there for good measure amid all the wonderful attributes the sun tells of herself. So well done. A lovely poem. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2024 2:46:00 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, S.V. :) - hugs

Heidi Sands Date: 3/22/2024 1:16:00 PM Oh wow! This is beautifully written! Loving too. A Fave for me. Hugs :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2024 2:47:00 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment and the fave, Heidi :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/22/2024 4:10:00 AM And we accept your love so ready. A wonderful poem. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2024 2:47:00 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Victor :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 3/21/2024 7:21:00 PM An amazing poem, Anne-Lise. I especially love the final verse, and its vividly lovely images. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2024 2:47:00 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Evelyn :) - hugs

Hilda Greenhough Date: 3/21/2024 5:52:00 PM Sweet phase of the sun, bright and sunny. I like this poem of toasty warmth and summer days. Beautiful. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2024 2:48:00 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Hilda :) - hugs

Eve Roper Date: 3/21/2024 4:47:00 PM beautiful imagery and feeling. bless you my friend Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2024 2:48:00 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Eve :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/21/2024 1:12:00 PM I enjoyed reading this lovely "Sun" write. Pretty picture with a wonderful ending. "Good Luck" Hugs... Have blessed day writing away................. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2024 2:49:00 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Paula :) - hugs

Silent One Date: 3/21/2024 12:59:00 PM It was like the sun was talking to me... excellent take on the contest and nice choice... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2024 2:49:00 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, S.O. :) - hugs

Jay Narain Date: 3/21/2024 11:05:00 AM nice personification and the picture. A spirited sunshine poem. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2024 2:49:00 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Jay :) - hugs

Frederic Parker Date: 3/21/2024 8:16:00 AM I can tell that your spirit is filled with sunlight, dear poet Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2024 2:50:00 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Frederic :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/21/2024 6:38:00 AM It certainly warns us up and raises our spirits. Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise. Hope you are well. Tom Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/21/2024 6:55:00 AM - Nice to see you, Tom - Everything is fine here, I hope the same with you :) - Many thanks for your comment and good wishes :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/21/2024 6:35:00 AM This is so very beautiful, Anne-Lise.-- A golden sapphire splendor--Lovely!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/21/2024 6:56:00 AM - No life without the sun, Vijay - Many thanks for your kind comment :) - hugs

Nancy Kaufman Date: 3/21/2024 6:31:00 AM Hi there Ms. Poetess from the North, I felt the sun's radiance in this one and it certainly seems she's a feminine sun. Best of luck in the contest. It's always a pleasure to have you visit my page as well. Blessings to you.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/21/2024 6:58:00 AM - I only wish it shone a little more often... today it is grey, wet and windy - Many thanks for your comment, Nancy :) - hugs

Duke Beaufort Date: 3/21/2024 6:03:00 AM Anne-Lise, I am thinking about how lucky we are to have our shining star. It empowers everything we have. It's remarkable to think about and not take it for granted. Many thanks for this one and for the focus on our biggest cheerleader and supporter. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/21/2024 7:02:00 AM - Duke, much appreciate you ... many thanks for all the poems you have read on my site today ... always a pleasure to read your words ... you really are a supporter :) - hugs