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Goodbye to soaking wet summer Moist bumblebees - unable to fly The swimsuit changed to beaver fur Unspoken expectations died A covered veil, in short moments Who is the director of fall ? I have some hot spices to add 06/09/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved FAREWELL, SUMMER Poetry Contest Sponsored by: nette onclaud 7 lines - 8 syllables per line 4th place in the contest

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Heidi Sands

Date: 9/12/2019 8:34:00 PM

Congratulations for your great win :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2019 4:06:00 AM

- Thanks for the congratulations, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2019 5:08:00 PM

I remember this one and HOw much I liked it the first time as well. Congrats on the winner list

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2019 4:05:00 AM

- Thanks for the congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 9/12/2019 1:19:00 PM

Always delighted to see your name on the winner's list, Anne Lise! Beautiful verse and the foto accompanying it is precious! Bob

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/12/2019 1:22:00 PM

- Always delighted to see your comments on my poems, Bob :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/12/2019 12:13:00 PM

you knocked me off my socks, anne.. this is so amazing.. sweet congrats with thanks for joining...huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/12/2019 1:18:00 PM

- Thank you for my placement on your winners list, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/12/2019 5:39:00 AM

Anne-Lise back to congratulate you on your win!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/12/2019 1:17:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/10/2019 2:53:00 AM

This line made me laugh. " The swimsuit changed to beaver fur" Love your poem, Sunshine!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2019 2:58:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/9/2019 3:42:00 PM

Fun poem, Sunshine. Well penned.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2019 2:58:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/9/2019 10:04:00 AM

Anne-lise what a fine piece for the contest! Loved it! Good luck!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2019 2:08:00 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/8/2019 1:46:00 AM

I love the line - 'i have some hot spices to add' - i am sure your husband is looking forward to Autumn. We are now entering spring but they say our summer will be unbearable. Hugs dear soul sister, Jenny.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/8/2019 6:21:00 AM

- Spring is my favorite time, Jenny ... I wish it was spring that knocked on the door :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/7/2019 10:26:00 AM

I like very much the original way you covered summer's ending!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2019 11:07:00 AM

- Many thanks for visit and the great comment, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Rees

Date: 9/7/2019 6:58:00 AM

So many thoughts and images expressed so succinctly. Really enjoyed this. Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2019 11:07:00 AM

- Many thanks for visit and the great comment, Peter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/6/2019 11:54:00 PM

OOOH hot spices and fall, what a lovely combo S.S xo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2019 11:02:00 AM

- A little spice in everyday life ... good for your health, Pixie :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/6/2019 10:11:00 PM

only in Norway can you change from bathing suits to a fur coat in a single season...really like this poem...good luck

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2019 11:00:00 AM

- That's really true, Frederic :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/6/2019 8:04:00 PM

You have hit a home run with this brief but magnificently crafted piece my friend. A fav and also an awesome example of poetic craftsmanship.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2019 10:59:00 AM

- Many thanks for the FAVE and lovely comment, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/6/2019 6:44:00 PM

What spices will you add to the mixture in the fall? Summer is gone now - now it is football season and Halloween and the Jewish high holidays. Stimulating verse. Peace & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2019 10:58:00 AM

- Football season ... hurray ! - I never understand why adult men in knee socks run after one ball ... - My spice is secret :) - Many thanks for visit and comment, Matthew :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 9/6/2019 6:24:00 PM

A delightful and witty verse, Anne Lise and a sure winner - good luck in the contest. Many thanks for your kind comment re my entry in the contest. Best to you - BoB

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2019 10:52:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Bob :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/6/2019 3:34:00 PM

Great one! I love the ending about the hot spices to add :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2019 3:37:00 PM

- We need it ... after a wet summer, Heidi :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/6/2019 3:11:00 PM

I love both the poem and the photo. One need not do a video production to get the point across. I am one who hungers for a poets very words. That's what Pietry means to me, Music and images are other art fields. Your poetry is poetry and meets top standards. Love~ Panagiota.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2019 3:17:00 PM

- I agree, music and images are other art fields (some poems drown ... when it is too much +++) ... even though I like pictures for my poems :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)