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In a moment of silence
The winter's crystals are filled
in a snowglobe with you

A window without curtains
Like two sparrows in the country of love
We escape from problems in line
and money that burns

To get away from Christmas and stress
This is one of the most magical places on earth
So close, cheek to cheek

We sit on this branch and shine
in our common air and landscape
Christmas is time for peace,
love and reflection

Take care of those around you
Christmas is a period of the year
it's hardest to be lonely







04.12.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 1/9/2019 2:19:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, yes it is hard to be alone on Christmas Day. Yet many people send Christmas alone. Sad but true. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/11/2019 8:53:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, I like tvist your site. i enjoy your poetry.
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Date: 1/11/2019 4:57:00 AM
- Many thanks Darlene, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/7/2019 7:34:00 AM
I cannot resist passing this pretty pink contagious smiley face without saying hello. Togetherness with a loved one beats everything else in this world. Be blessed dear friend. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/11/2019 4:57:00 AM
- Many thanks Jennifer, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/1/2019 11:52:00 PM
Nicely done, Sunshine, :) A fresh new year with hopes and blessing to appear. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/2/2019 12:01:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, dear Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/29/2018 3:03:00 PM
Beautifully written, Anne-Lise. Imagery is lovely. Love snowglobes, love your verse.
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Date: 12/30/2018 2:29:00 PM
- Many thanks Sandra, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/21/2018 3:07:00 PM
very clever and inventive poem..loved it ..merry christmas from the u.s.
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Date: 12/22/2018 12:29:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and friendly Christmas greetings, Jim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/20/2018 10:07:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, another excellent write from your pen. Your words do gently take one within the snowglobe and such joy is felt when reading. I love the heartfelt feelings, the whole content of this piece. I love Christmas. Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise. Have a wonderful Christmas season. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 12/22/2018 12:28:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and friendly Christmas greetings, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/13/2018 7:34:00 PM
Beautiful Anne-Lise Good luck in the contest :) hugs...Charlie
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Date: 12/14/2018 3:17:00 AM
- Many thanks Charlie, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/12/2018 5:26:00 AM
Anne-Lise, this poem is so beautifully penned and I love it, best of luck in the contest, well done !
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Date: 12/12/2018 12:38:00 PM
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Date: 12/12/2018 5:26:00 AM
Anne-Lise, this poem is so beautifully penned and I love it, best of luck in the contest, well done !
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Date: 12/12/2018 12:38:00 PM
Many thanks for lovely comment, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/10/2018 3:36:00 PM
I really felt I was in that snow globe, really great poem my new friend!
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Date: 12/12/2018 12:33:00 PM
- Thank you, Bobby (always nice with new friends :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/9/2018 1:54:00 AM
Excellent imagery created for this lovely poem. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 12/10/2018 12:46:00 AM
- Many thanks Ravi, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/7/2018 6:30:00 AM
And yet, there are some who refuse to enjoy it. The sharing's more fun though. Well penned.
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Date: 12/10/2018 12:47:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/7/2018 12:09:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, It seems climate is changing due to global warming - last Christmas we went to the Kruger Park and it was sweltering at 40 degrees, but we got back to Johannesburg and it dropped to 23 degrees. I love Christmas and love visiting London at Christmas, one year we escaped from our relations for a long week end in Scotland - so peaceful, and serene. However in Johannesburg we also get 4 seasons in one day also. Best regards, Jennifer
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Date: 12/10/2018 12:47:00 AM
- Many thanks Jennifer, for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/6/2018 3:40:00 PM
Wow, This is so unique Anne-Lise, so positive, love it...
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Date: 12/10/2018 12:45:00 AM
- Many thanks Harry, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/5/2018 2:15:00 PM
Christmas is for sharing, Anne-Lise; sharing brings joy, love and a feel-good feeling that lasts a long time. I love your uplifting poem! I hope lonely people, especially the elderly, will receive a lovely surprise visit on Christmas day! Hugs // paul
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Date: 12/10/2018 12:45:00 AM
- Many thanks Paul, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/5/2018 8:46:00 AM
What a lovely image you created for this lovely poem Anne- Lise xxoo
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Date: 12/10/2018 12:44:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/5/2018 8:30:00 AM
Very Nice Anne-lise. :)
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Date: 12/10/2018 12:44:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/5/2018 6:06:00 AM
Lovely write Anne-Lise...your writing always shines with a Sunshine smile...ready for a big win!..love & light...^WW^
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Date: 12/10/2018 12:43:00 AM
- Many thanks W.W., for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/4/2018 4:07:00 PM
Great concept and delivery, but from what I see on AFV, Christmas is best spent alone rather than among ungrateful family and friends! Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 12/10/2018 12:43:00 AM
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Date: 12/4/2018 3:55:00 PM
Lovely verse Sunshine, how sad that many will spend Christmas alone. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 12/5/2018 11:49:00 AM
- Tom, many thanks for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/4/2018 3:52:00 PM
I hear the message of love and family..splendid ending stanza, Anne-Lise. My very best to you for a win.
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Date: 12/5/2018 11:48:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/4/2018 3:35:00 PM
A tender message of caring and love wrapped within the magic of Christmas by your artful pen dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx Good luck!
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Date: 12/5/2018 11:48:00 AM
- Many thanks Demetrios, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/4/2018 3:04:00 PM
Beautifully done my friend and the final stanza says it all.
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Date: 12/5/2018 11:47:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/4/2018 2:41:00 PM
that's the way i love the true essence of christmas... i am moved, anne... you are a greeat poet... keep the love glowing and happy huggs
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Date: 12/5/2018 1:56:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/4/2018 2:24:00 PM
Absolutely charming Anne-Lise -I especially love the second stanza but the final stanza hits home hard as its not a happy time for many:-( adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/5/2018 1:55:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit, comment and a fave, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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