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07.03.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Spring Sonata Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jcb Brul

3rd place in the contest

                                      Muted spring tunes, in blush
                                       Glides softly on the strings
                                           between the seasons
                              Nickel-plated steel springs become soft
                                       A lush, colorful atmosphere
                                         whirls around your head
                               Feminine details are being unpacked
                                        channeling eternal muses

                                  Freshly labels, touring relentlessly
                                         With impressive powers, 
                                 snowdrops break through the snow
                              Spring is obviously ready and ambitious
                                        Musics universe is infinite
                                    the listener is free to interpret
                                            Play orchestra, play

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Regina Elliott

Date: 3/29/2024 5:38:00 PM

How beauteous an emerging spring poem. A very worthy contest entry. My very best wishes for the contest. Have a blessed Easter. ~

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/16/2024 1:47:00 AM

Simply stunning. To create a symphony from snowdrops, is breathtaking. Love this .

Jay Narain

Date: 3/8/2024 10:49:00 AM

Nice picture from Nordic kingdoms. Poem captures the theme of spring with happy spirit.

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/8/2024 8:00:00 AM

" Nickel-plated steel springs become soft A lush, colorful atmosphere whirls around your head Feminine details are being unpacked channeling eternal muses" -- Magnificent poetry. I can see your love for music, in particular you knowledge of strings. The heart like strings...love like strings...with fond time and dear play will be stretched tunefully into infinity. Love your poem. A Strong FAV!

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/8/2024 6:39:00 AM

The captivating picture beautifully captures the essence of your spring poem, Anne-Lise, emanating a vibrant and enthusiastic spirit. I concur that spring appears to be eagerly prepared and filled with aspirations.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/8/2024 6:00:00 AM

So nice. I love that. Play orchestra, play! Hugs :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/8/2024 5:59:00 AM

Awesome photo--much enjoyed your spring poem, exuding exuberance, Anne-Lise.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/8/2024 5:41:00 AM

Anne-Lise, I usually don’t get excited about formatting, but what you did here enhances the joy felt while reading. Really cool!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/8/2024 2:58:00 AM

Those snowdrops like crocus amaze me. I guess they do their best in colder climates than here though. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K