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- Splashing In the Rain -

I hear the rain 
                     ... falling 
                                  down
Falling down
                     ... falling
                                  down


Enjoy the freshness
and get soaking wet

Mother nature comfortable shower
Flooded fields and highways

A cool guy shouts in joy
while others rush for cover

The rain makes pools
they splashing home together


I hear the rain 
                     ... falling
                                  down
Falling down 
                     ... falling
                                  down













03.07.2017
(unrhymed couplets)
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Phyllis Babcock Date: 7/12/2017 10:49:00 AM Love it and send the rain this way we are in a dry spell. Not that much just a little. lol Great write. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/12/2017 11:42:00 AM - I'm sending you a bucket, so you can cool your feet :))) - Thank you very much for comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jay Vee Date: 7/8/2017 10:35:00 AM I love it! I of course would be the cool guy shouting and loving every drop. Good write. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/9/2017 3:02:00 PM - A pleasure to see you on my poem, thank you very much for comments Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser Date: 7/7/2017 8:32:00 PM Now that brings back some fond memories of childhood. Thanks Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/9/2017 3:01:00 PM - A pleasure to see you on my poem, thank you very much for comments M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 7/5/2017 10:33:00 PM A fun write, Anne-lise:) that guy seems to be making the most of the falling rain :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/9/2017 3:00:00 PM - A pleasure to see you on my poem, thank you very much for comments Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 7/5/2017 9:19:00 PM Wonderful write Anne... enjoyed the video as well Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/9/2017 3:00:00 PM - A pleasure to see you on my poem, thank you very much for comments Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams Date: 7/5/2017 12:31:00 AM The fun in this poem sings through Anne-Lise. Its lovely and refreshing to see adults still enjoying the rain, puddles.Childish fun is good...Loved it dear friend...Maria xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/9/2017 3:00:00 PM - A pleasure to see you on my poem, thank you very much for comments Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing Date: 7/4/2017 4:10:00 PM Yeah I'll take a rain check this week please. Lol! It's fun and refreshing, Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/9/2017 2:59:00 PM - A pleasure to see you on my poem, thank you very much for comments Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior Date: 7/4/2017 3:35:00 PM Splish Splash...time to take a bath lol...I love the rain Anne-Lise and you my friend...god bless...^WW^ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/9/2017 2:59:00 PM - A pleasure to see you on my poem, thank you very much for comments W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/4/2017 3:16:00 PM feeling so refreshed dear anne.. let the good times rool.. happy h9uxuggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/5/2017 2:00:00 PM - "h9uxuggs" and thanks, Nette :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith Date: 7/4/2017 2:49:00 PM I sure hope sunshine finds your way. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/5/2017 2:00:00 PM - Thanks, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith Date: 7/4/2017 12:47:00 PM A gentle rain is a celebration of life. Loved your words Anne-Lise, be well... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/4/2017 2:19:00 PM - We all need rain, Charlie ... but, not rain all summer :) - Thanks and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan Date: 7/4/2017 4:22:00 AM So beautifully written Anne... We need some rain badly...I feel the rain at least here. I can smell the rain through your words.... Thanks for sharing this Anne... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/4/2017 2:21:00 PM - I'm happy to share the rain with you, Supraja - Thanks and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 7/3/2017 1:45:00 PM Please, please, please send some rain my way for cannot stand the heat of the day dearest Anne-Lise! Playful writing that had the effect of cooling me down! haha! Lovely my friend! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/3/2017 1:50:00 PM - You can get as much as you want ... I've got way too much :) - Thank you for your friendly visit on a wet summer day, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner Date: 7/3/2017 9:27:00 AM I love me some liquid sunshine:) Fun poem:) Have a great day Anne Lise. A good day to play with puppies:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/3/2017 1:14:00 PM - A good day to play in rainwater, Daniel :) - Thank you for your friendly visit on a wet summer day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 7/3/2017 8:37:00 AM A smile was the reward upon reading this poem... thank you ~* Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/3/2017 1:23:00 PM Thank you Eve, for your friendly visit on a wet summer day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green Date: 7/3/2017 7:48:00 AM I guess if it is going to rain that much, might as well make the best of it. This was fun Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/3/2017 1:23:00 PM - Yes ... that much, Chris !!! - If I could sell rain ... I would have been the richest in the world :))) - Why not ... a creative solution, if we dare :))) - Thank you for your friendly visit on a wet summer day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 7/3/2017 5:40:00 AM Love the poem and the clip is hilarious! Thanks for making me smile Anne lise:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/3/2017 1:32:00 PM - It's better to smile in the rain ... than cry - Creative play, but dangerous - Thank you for your friendly visit on a wet summer day, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/3/2017 5:32:00 AM I love to watch the earth take a bath! A lovely poem Anne-Lise! : ) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/3/2017 1:27:00 PM - Connie, thank you for your friendly visit on a wet summer day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane Date: 7/3/2017 5:22:00 AM Human ingenuity and a good sense of humor...lol Thanks for sharing your words and the video, Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/3/2017 1:35:00 PM - If I was young ... maybe I would try ... this madness, Lin :) - Thank you for your friendly visit on a wet summer day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)