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- Sparkling Oceans Apart -

You're a maiden so hot burning thoughts 
whom melts ice inside deep waves salted 
unfolding ocean swells kissing your feet 
For once spoke those hot lips the truth shining 

Sunshine pleasing warm beholding to 
one's eye golden crowned jewel beauty 
rainbow luster coloring pearl treasure 

It's giving off their beauty pure free 
that does not require something in return 

A lady whom pleases the heart warm 
Princess cut with deep class sparkling pure 
utopia's adorable sun rise 

How the body is heated and hear 
her echoing heart beat in the chambers 

Shining a future path dreaming ore 
every single moment precious links 
each one spent with you falling under spell 

Love is like pure sparkling magic gem 
unpredictable true and marvelous 


Magic silk covers batting eyelids 
enchanting soft lovingly flowers 
beautiful petals held within the shell 
Let the rose live forever and the sun 
shines always endless times glistening gold 





Written by Liam Mcdaid and Anne- Lise Andresen 
a co write in a 9/10 syllable count
Copyright © All Rights Reserved 



 - Thank you my friend Liam !

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2014

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Anthony Beesley Date: 12/10/2014 7:46:00 PM Like it...both melodically enchanting and mildly erotic Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/11/2014 2:42:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem, Anthony :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton Date: 12/1/2014 3:48:00 AM a great pen by you both Anne Lise this poem sparkles Liam is a great pal of mine from way before either of us joined soup you will both learn much from each other hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/1/2014 4:05:00 AM - An "old" friend of you Shadow - Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak Date: 11/24/2014 9:30:00 AM Great collaboration! The ending is absolutely perfect. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/24/2014 10:25:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem, Monterey :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/23/2014 11:55:00 AM this one shines. it is golden!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/23/2014 1:14:00 PM - Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem, Andrea :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Fleming Date: 11/23/2014 4:35:00 AM This is a very lovely poem! Full of charm and elegance. :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/23/2014 4:37:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem, John :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandip Goswami Date: 11/22/2014 1:32:00 PM "Love is like pure sparkling magic gem unpredictable true and marvelous"...These are soul of the poem...I remember its forever...Best wishes to you... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/22/2014 1:46:00 PM - Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem, Sandip :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/22/2014 12:10:00 PM a sparkling re-read this early sunday morning, anne.. still lovely!.. huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/22/2014 1:10:00 PM - Huggs 2 U !!!!

Bl Devnath Date: 11/22/2014 9:16:00 AM Congrats my lovely lovely friend... just from my side "7". Loved always,bl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/22/2014 10:57:00 AM - Thanks for the congrats and 7, dear Bl :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath Date: 11/22/2014 9:12:00 AM Wow! a genius poem depicted sensational ways of true heart and nothing else, i feel here. All the lines are linked philosophically about what lies in lovely heart depicted as "It's giving off their beauty pure free that does not require something in return"........................................... "Love is like pure sparkling magic gem unpredictable true and marvelous" along with last lines. I am happy with Poetrysoup along with you the genius. Loved always, my lovely lovely friend,bl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/22/2014 10:55:00 AM - Thank you for a real and lovely comments on our poem my friend Bl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith Date: 11/22/2014 12:14:00 AM Congratulations my friends...woohoo :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/22/2014 5:05:00 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Tim :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 11/21/2014 8:34:00 PM I enjoyed reading this beautiful collab again...congrats on being chosen TPOD!! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/22/2014 5:04:00 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Rhonda :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Victoria Anderson-Throop Date: 11/21/2014 7:02:00 PM What fun you must have had composing this unique poem. Imagery is delightful! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/22/2014 5:04:00 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Victoria :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 11/21/2014 6:36:00 PM Congratulations on poem of the day, beautiful Poem :) blessings eve Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/22/2014 5:03:00 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Eve :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/21/2014 6:19:00 PM Such a beauty this is sweet lady and good friend Liam. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/22/2014 5:03:00 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Charmaine :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Leon Enriquez Date: 11/21/2014 6:07:00 PM Dear Anne-Lise and Liam: A dazzling collaborative work. Well done. Lovely read. Congratulations on achieving the POTD. All the best then, Leon. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/22/2014 5:02:00 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Leon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones Date: 11/21/2014 3:38:00 PM Hello Anne Lise...I've been away for some time...what a lovely way to start my evening...you two did an amazing work of art here... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/21/2014 3:56:00 PM - I missed you, Donna! - Nice to see you back :) - Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/21/2014 2:15:00 PM ohhh, applause for the POTD, anne.. huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/21/2014 2:31:00 PM - Thanks for the applause and visit, Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Fleming Date: 11/21/2014 1:55:00 PM A very lovely piece of work. :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/21/2014 2:30:00 PM - Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem John :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 11/21/2014 12:44:00 PM Congrats Anne-Lise. Love XXXX RAJAT Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/21/2014 1:42:00 PM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Rajat :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman Date: 11/21/2014 12:42:00 PM Anne-Lise and Liam, Best Congratulations on Poem of the Day!! Most Excellent!! Best Always, Gary Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/21/2014 1:41:00 PM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Gary :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/21/2014 12:30:00 PM Excellent, congratulations to you both, a great choice for poem of the day. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/21/2014 1:41:00 PM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Maurice :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/21/2014 10:14:00 AM Fantastic, congratulations to you both! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/21/2014 11:30:00 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Richard :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian Date: 11/21/2014 9:59:00 AM Congrats, you two! :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/21/2014 11:29:00 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Eileen :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 11/21/2014 9:41:00 AM Congratulations to you my dear friend Anne Lise and Liam for been poet of the day. This is a very beautiful romantic poem you two have penned here together. You two more than deserve this honor. Congrats Liam! Enjoy the day! And have a great weekend! A 7 for each of you! And keep the golden pens writing! :) love and hugs! Xxxx D. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/21/2014 11:29:00 AM - Thanks for the congrats and lovely comments, Dorian :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

David Meade Date: 11/21/2014 9:27:00 AM You all rock the love!! Congrats!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/21/2014 11:28:00 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, David :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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