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You're a maiden so hot burning thoughts whom melts ice inside deep waves salted unfolding ocean swells kissing your feet For once spoke those hot lips the truth shining Sunshine pleasing warm beholding to one's eye golden crowned jewel beauty rainbow luster coloring pearl treasure It's giving off their beauty pure free that does not require something in return A lady whom pleases the heart warm Princess cut with deep class sparkling pure utopia's adorable sun rise How the body is heated and hear her echoing heart beat in the chambers Shining a future path dreaming ore every single moment precious links each one spent with you falling under spell Love is like pure sparkling magic gem unpredictable true and marvelous Magic silk covers batting eyelids enchanting soft lovingly flowers beautiful petals held within the shell Let the rose live forever and the sun shines always endless times glistening gold Written by Liam Mcdaid and Anne- Lise Andresen a co write in a 9/10 syllable count Copyright © All Rights Reserved - Thank you my friend Liam !

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Date: 12/10/2014 7:46:00 PM
Like it...both melodically enchanting and mildly erotic
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/11/2014 2:42:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem, Anthony :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/1/2014 3:48:00 AM
a great pen by you both Anne Lise this poem sparkles Liam is a great pal of mine from way before either of us joined soup you will both learn much from each other hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2014 4:05:00 AM
- An "old" friend of you Shadow - Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/24/2014 9:30:00 AM
Great collaboration! The ending is absolutely perfect.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2014 10:25:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem, Monterey :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/23/2014 11:55:00 AM
this one shines. it is golden!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/23/2014 1:14:00 PM
- Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem, Andrea :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/23/2014 4:35:00 AM
This is a very lovely poem! Full of charm and elegance. :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/23/2014 4:37:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem, John :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2014 1:32:00 PM
"Love is like pure sparkling magic gem unpredictable true and marvelous"...These are soul of the poem...I remember its forever...Best wishes to you...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2014 1:46:00 PM
- Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem, Sandip :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2014 12:10:00 PM
a sparkling re-read this early sunday morning, anne.. still lovely!.. huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2014 1:10:00 PM
- Huggs 2 U !!!!
Date: 11/22/2014 9:16:00 AM
Congrats my lovely lovely friend... just from my side "7". Loved always,bl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2014 10:57:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats and 7, dear Bl :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2014 9:12:00 AM
Wow! a genius poem depicted sensational ways of true heart and nothing else, i feel here. All the lines are linked philosophically about what lies in lovely heart depicted as "It's giving off their beauty pure free that does not require something in return"........................................... "Love is like pure sparkling magic gem unpredictable true and marvelous" along with last lines. I am happy with Poetrysoup along with you the genius. Loved always, my lovely lovely friend,bl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2014 10:55:00 AM
- Thank you for a real and lovely comments on our poem my friend Bl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2014 12:14:00 AM
Congratulations my friends...woohoo :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2014 5:05:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Tim :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2014 8:34:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this beautiful collab again...congrats on being chosen TPOD!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2014 5:04:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Rhonda :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2014 7:02:00 PM
What fun you must have had composing this unique poem. Imagery is delightful!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2014 5:04:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Victoria :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2014 6:36:00 PM
Congratulations on poem of the day, beautiful Poem :) blessings eve
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2014 5:03:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Eve :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2014 6:19:00 PM
Such a beauty this is sweet lady and good friend Liam.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2014 5:03:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Charmaine :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2014 6:07:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise and Liam: A dazzling collaborative work. Well done. Lovely read. Congratulations on achieving the POTD. All the best then, Leon.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2014 5:02:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Leon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2014 3:38:00 PM
Hello Anne Lise...I've been away for some time...what a lovely way to start my evening...you two did an amazing work of art here...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/21/2014 3:56:00 PM
- I missed you, Donna! - Nice to see you back :) - Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2014 2:15:00 PM
ohhh, applause for the POTD, anne.. huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/21/2014 2:31:00 PM
- Thanks for the applause and visit, Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2014 1:55:00 PM
A very lovely piece of work. :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/21/2014 2:30:00 PM
- Thanks for the lovely visit and comments on our poem John :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2014 12:44:00 PM
Congrats Anne-Lise. Love XXXX RAJAT
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/21/2014 1:42:00 PM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Rajat :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2014 12:42:00 PM
Anne-Lise and Liam, Best Congratulations on Poem of the Day!! Most Excellent!! Best Always, Gary
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/21/2014 1:41:00 PM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Gary :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2014 12:30:00 PM
Excellent, congratulations to you both, a great choice for poem of the day.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/21/2014 1:41:00 PM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Maurice :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2014 10:14:00 AM
Fantastic, congratulations to you both!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/21/2014 11:30:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Richard :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2014 9:59:00 AM
Congrats, you two! :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/21/2014 11:29:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Eileen :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2014 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations to you my dear friend Anne Lise and Liam for been poet of the day. This is a very beautiful romantic poem you two have penned here together. You two more than deserve this honor. Congrats Liam! Enjoy the day! And have a great weekend! A 7 for each of you! And keep the golden pens writing! :) love and hugs! Xxxx D.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/21/2014 11:29:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats and lovely comments, Dorian :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2014 9:27:00 AM
You all rock the love!! Congrats!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/21/2014 11:28:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, David :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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