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Do you remember Carl ?

My poem : "- Snow, No Thanks -"

https://www.behance.net/gallery/29507119/Beach-memories

 

 He has found his sweetheart                          animated-heart-image-0455





Carl is still in Rio
He is hooked on the casino
Sweet love in moonlight
Cherry musk all night
His libido is like a volcano













01.03.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
6-8-5 -5 -10 syllables
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Date: 3/7/2018 2:35:00 PM
Tehehehe - what an enjoyable Limerick! You had me cracking up with your wit! The imagery is wonderful! Well done as always. Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
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Date: 3/8/2018 3:07:00 AM
- Many thanks for visit, your smile and comment Pandita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/6/2018 7:09:00 PM
Haha, Carl seems to be doing well it seems, good to see he found his love. Cherry Musk all the way.Great limerick Anne-Lise, thoroughly enjoyed....Maria xxx
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Date: 3/7/2018 2:04:00 AM
- Many thanks for visit, smile and comment Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/5/2018 10:09:00 AM
Had me chuckling with this one.. glad he found his sweetie pie. lol Just getting over another flu been down for 10 days. love phyl
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Date: 3/5/2018 12:01:00 PM
- Sad to hear ... hope you feel better, dear Phyllis - The flu is tough and long lasting this year - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/5/2018 2:30:00 AM
Cute couple...must go read the first story. Lol
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Date: 3/5/2018 2:36:00 AM
- Leanne, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/4/2018 12:53:00 PM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise, I see that Carl's situation has improved somewhat from the last time I read another poem you had written about him. "Rio" -- eh?? I'm glad he's found his sweetheart!! Enjoyed this one!! Best Always . . . Gary
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Date: 3/4/2018 12:57:00 PM
- Carl do not waste the time in Rio ........ he lives 110% :))) - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/3/2018 2:34:00 PM
I can't believe he's a hot eruption...Only goes to show that appearance can be deceiving...Maybe it's the Cherry musk...All the best Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/3/2018 2:41:00 PM
- The cherry musk and his charm, Arturo :) - Thank you very much for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/2/2018 3:33:00 PM
This poem is sooo Smiley good, Anne-Lise! Smoking hot poetry, dear. Mighty fine penning. Love and smile and laughter always.
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Date: 3/3/2018 11:39:00 AM
- Many thanks for visit, smile and comment Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/2/2018 3:13:00 PM
Awesome limerick my dear friend,Annelise. I like it. Thanks for sharing and the smiles:) Thanks also for dropping by. Have a great weekend and best wishes. Hugs back at you. love lots, Leonora
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Date: 3/2/2018 3:15:00 PM
- A pleasure to see you, my friend Leonora :) - Thank you very much for your visit and comment :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/2/2018 2:36:00 PM
A fun write Anne...enjoyed...
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Date: 3/2/2018 2:51:00 PM
- Thank you very much for your visit and comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/2/2018 11:43:00 AM
This made me smile, Anne-Lise:) Carl is quite a character, and I think it is now time to get to know his sweetheart even better! Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/2/2018 11:47:00 AM
- I will discuss it with Carl :))) - Thank you very much for your visit and comment, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/2/2018 11:32:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, love the limerick. This form i just can't do. I have tried but iy just doesn't work. I have enjoyed reading so many Limericks these days and your Limerick is no exception. I love it and i got the giggles while reading. Now, this has been my laugh for the day. This one goes with the rest of my Limericks. This one goes into my faves. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 3/2/2018 11:41:00 AM
- I'm not good with limerick .... think I spent four hours to write the first one: "As I was Walking in the Snow" ... :)))... this number two was a bit easier :))) - Many thanks for visiting and a fav ,, my friend Mike :) - hugs and lovely weekend // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/2/2018 6:07:00 AM
So much in your brief poem! Loveliness and fun relished with your words. Cherry musk!
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Date: 3/2/2018 11:41:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and comment, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/1/2018 4:59:00 PM
You've started something now Sunshine, you'll have to keep the story of Carl going .
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Date: 3/2/2018 4:07:00 AM
- I'm not so good at writing limerick, Tom :) - ... and I have to have Carls permission ... that's his life :) - Many thanks for your visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/1/2018 4:32:00 PM
Like to go to Rio - have you ever been there? Been to a number of casinos - sometimes have come out ahead! Fun ode! PEACE & LOVE MATTHEW aNISH
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Date: 3/2/2018 3:58:00 AM
- No, I've never been to Rio and never been to the casino Matthew :) - Many thanks for your visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/1/2018 4:30:00 PM
This is so cute Sun :)... I don't remember Carl, but those cartoons are adorably hilarious and your limerick to match them is perfect! Have a a "sunny" day :)
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Date: 3/2/2018 5:41:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/1/2018 11:23:00 AM
Haha... great haiku
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Date: 3/2/2018 4:08:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/1/2018 8:13:00 AM
Lol Anne like a great followup poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/2/2018 4:08:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/1/2018 8:07:00 AM
Hilarious, you never fail to deliver sister, I always enjoy your wit and charm;-)
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Date: 3/2/2018 5:40:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit, Keith :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/1/2018 7:59:00 AM
Funny Anne-Lise. Thanks for the laugh today :)
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Date: 3/2/2018 5:40:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/1/2018 7:09:00 AM
A fun read, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 3/1/2018 7:45:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/1/2018 5:18:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise ,,,lol ,,, love the pics :::)))) hugs
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Date: 3/1/2018 7:44:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit, Niall - hugs // Anne-Lise :)