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She battered, and bruised defend against your attacks safe, alone in bed 05.09.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Senryu: 5 - 7 - 5 - https://www.howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 11/2/2017 2:49:00 PM
Jesus this sounds like someone she knows and not a stranger. Thought-provoking.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/2/2017 3:27:00 PM
- It can be anyone, Richard - Thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/13/2017 11:33:00 PM
The aftermath that one has to worry about. I cant even fathom the horror of it all. Excellent write on a touchy subject, Anne-Lise...Maria xxx
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Date: 9/14/2017 1:43:00 AM
- It must feel like a wound which always bleed, Maria - Thoughts that are glued into the brain for all eternity - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/8/2017 2:40:00 PM
Sad of today's world beautifully expressed my dear lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/8/2017 2:42:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/7/2017 8:15:00 AM
Sad and traumatic experience anytime, well said, Anne-lise:)
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Date: 9/8/2017 3:44:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Jo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/7/2017 6:33:00 AM
An awful thing that robs more than just one moment. Good write, Anne-Lise!
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Date: 9/8/2017 3:43:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2017 1:40:00 PM
An expressive take on an abusive subject, Anne-Lise. The inner scar will take much longer to heal than the physical one. ~ Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/7/2017 2:18:00 AM
- Yes, traumatic experience that sets deep marks, Paul - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2017 11:14:00 AM
Excellent, Sunshine, a difficult subject to write or talk about .
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Date: 9/7/2017 2:19:00 AM
- Many thanks Eve, for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2017 8:38:00 AM
WoW! Anne-Lise, This pacts a powerful message on the topic of rape in a few words. Excellent job:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/6/2017 2:51:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Alexis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2017 8:37:00 AM
She will need help to cope. I ca feel her struggle to be free. So very sad. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 9/6/2017 2:42:00 PM
- Anyone who has experienced rape need help, but many do not dare to talk about it - some are threatened to remain silent ... a father, a friend, a teacher, a priest ... it could be anyone, Darlene - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2017 8:29:00 AM
Powerful senryu...
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Date: 9/6/2017 2:45:00 PM
- Scary many who have experienced rape ... both women and men, S.O. - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2017 6:37:00 AM
A profound sadness expressed in a few words! A vicious violation of pursuit of happiness! Outstanding!! Chuck
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Date: 9/6/2017 2:51:00 PM
- A victim of rape has a lot of pain to live with the rest of their lives, Chuck - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2017 4:03:00 AM
Your write is incredible Anne-Lise! It's a sad poem really, with issues that I detest! You have written magnificently poem however, and you got the point across excellently! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/6/2017 2:24:00 PM
- A taboo theme ... but, I think it's important to talk about, Russell - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/5/2017 4:32:00 PM
Awe, one of the worst thing a woman would never properly heal from. Hugs and smiles Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/6/2017 2:23:00 PM
- So true, Akkina - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/5/2017 2:45:00 PM
Very dramatic work..It happens so much more than we know..I could feel the emotion in this one..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/5/2017 2:49:00 PM
- Is that what we call "dark numbers", Sara - There are many who do not dare to say anything ... feel shameful - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/5/2017 1:51:00 PM
So much said with so few words. So many women suffer in silence. Upsetting and needs to stop happening.
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Date: 9/5/2017 2:45:00 PM
You're absolutely right!
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Date: 9/5/2017 2:36:00 PM
- And certainly many boys / men ... we do not know ... because conversation about rape is taboo ... especially among boys / men - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Carol - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/5/2017 1:32:00 PM
Hard hitting subject. No person should infringe on another.
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Date: 9/5/2017 2:27:00 PM
- An abuse that violates another person's rights, Tim - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/5/2017 1:19:00 PM
Powerful subject met head on in this well expressed poem, Anne-Lise. You are a women of courage, and your words resonate as much. Tough issue but your pen capably handled it w/grace and wisdom. Mighty write, my dear friend. Love and joy.
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Date: 9/5/2017 2:09:00 PM
- There are also some men who may be raped, but because there are a large majority of women, I referred to women in this poem Freddie - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/5/2017 11:17:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise , important to talk and write about powerful write my friend :) hugs
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Date: 9/5/2017 2:19:00 PM
- Always intrusive memories that are annoying and painful - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Niall - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/5/2017 9:29:00 AM
A well written truth as to what happens !
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/5/2017 2:16:00 PM
- Very many people have experienced traumatic rape and never talk about it, Heidi - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/5/2017 8:28:00 AM
A story depicted in a few words is a powerful reflection on life--well done Anne-Lise! Good luck for the contest!
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Date: 9/5/2017 2:13:00 PM
- Many never seeks professional help because they feel it is shameful to talk about what has happened, Vijay - Painful feeling to live with - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/5/2017 8:01:00 AM
Very sad but true...very well portrayed Anne-Lise...(((HUGS)))...^WW^
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Date: 9/5/2017 2:04:00 PM
- Many victims feel anxiety, fear and guilt, W.W. - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/5/2017 7:58:00 AM
Love the uncomfortable feeling from these few carefully selected words.
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Date: 9/5/2017 2:00:00 PM
- With the drama that often surrounds a rape, sensational impressions can "get stuck" with an intensity far beyond the usual ... terrible - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Maureen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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