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- Raining in Summer -

                              - Summer rain is a passing moment ~
                             which will soon be pierced by sun rays -
                                                quote by poet 


                                      Merry sound of happiness
                                     a little rain satisfies the air
                                    The clouds are the shadows,
                                            after sunny days
                                            Aquarius is wise,
                                     nature painted in watercolor

                                        Countless lyrical drops
                                 crystals sprinkle in the flower bells
                                           Nobody would care,
                               neither bird, flowers nor teasing bees
                                     Can smell the wet substrate
                              and breathe pure thoughts everywhere

                                Collecting dripping drops in a jam jar
                                     with an apostle spoon in silver
                               Summer rain in triumphant symphony
                                      scattered through paradise
                                   With frugality and a lot of profit
                                       - until the soul is satisfied

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Tonye George Date: 6/10/2024 11:32:00 AM Congratulations Anne on your win. Cheers. Login to Reply

Regina Elliott Date: 6/8/2024 5:09:00 AM A big Congratulations, Anne-Lise, on this soulful summer rain beauty. Enjoy your June weekend. Blessings :) Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 6/8/2024 12:23:00 AM Dear anne lise, wow thats a beautiful picture to go with your poem, so fitting. And i love the way youv written “Aquarius is wise, nature painted in watercolor” unique and creative lines. I love this poem although from my phone its difficult when judging to read because of the arrangement of words , i still love it. Thank you for supporting my contest. Its always good to read your interpretations dear anne lise congratulations on your win Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/7/2024 3:51:00 PM Congrats on your winning poem. The picture with it is perfect Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/5/2024 3:00:00 PM Ahh!! Like the animated photo and your work describing it. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/5/2024 10:42:00 AM Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Raining in Summer" write/quote. What a great picture. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away With Your Win........... Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 5/30/2024 11:34:00 AM I hear an orchestra as i read this life like poem and stunning pic. Your talent touches me deep within my soul and its beauty explodes in my heart, a truly magical write, Love and hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Yann Rolland Date: 5/29/2024 10:42:00 PM te rain, will never be the same, after reading you, you made a magical pom here, so beautiful and touching, thanks a lot yann Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 5/29/2024 10:22:00 AM Anne-Lise, this literally is a "symphony" played by summer rain capturing its delight in sounds, scenes and scents! There is a perfume from summer rain that is so distinctive. You put me in that place! Best wishes for the contest! Hugs and blessings! Congratulations on your win in Kim's contest. Very fun with a poignant underlying truth! Login to Reply

Duke Beaufort Date: 5/27/2024 6:12:00 PM Anne-Lise, this weaves together a lot of wonderful things about rain. You give it a bit of magic and make it seem like it is all part of a harmonious relationship that touches many facets of what we can perceive. Login to Reply

Mike Bayles Date: 5/26/2024 9:14:00 AM I like the line, "a little rain satisfies the air." Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 5/25/2024 12:43:00 PM Magical, transforming write. Love it! Login to Reply

Tonye George Date: 5/25/2024 10:06:00 AM The last line" until the soul is satisfied." Lovely one Anne. Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 5/25/2024 3:15:00 AM I agree with Valsa. Summer rain clears the air, cleans the streets and relieves us of hot weather. Loved it. Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 5/24/2024 8:40:00 PM Summer rain is always a joy and comes sparingly. But as the climate has changed globally, here in Kerala- a small state where I live, there is torrential rain now in the peak of summer. A lovely poem. "Countless lyrical drops crystals sprinkle in the flower bells". Love these lines. All the Best dear Anne. Love and hugs! Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 5/24/2024 11:19:00 AM Rain is always good for the garden and the environment. Nice poem and great picture. Do rain drops fall only vertically? Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 5/24/2024 9:13:00 AM Peaceful serene wondrous, your poem captures them all, dear poet Login to Reply

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 5/24/2024 6:23:00 AM Dearest Anne-Lise, What a wonderful and serene picture of nature's beauty after a summer rain. The imagery of raindrops collecting in flower bells and the scent of wet earth evokes such a sense of tranquility and joy. I loved how your words dance with elegance and grace, capturing the essence of a moment in nature. An exquisite piece. - Blessings, Daniel Login to Reply

Hilda Greenhough Date: 5/23/2024 8:48:00 PM Rain in a garden does great good. I enjoy this poem. Good luck with the contest. Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 5/23/2024 7:41:00 PM Anne-Lise your poem is a delight to read its eloquent descriptions and charming use of alliteration. The summer rain echoes in a joyous symphony. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/23/2024 4:57:00 PM crystals sprinkle in the flower bells… Collecting dripping drops in a jam jar with an apostle spoon in silver…Love the prettiness of these lines, dear poet! Hugs ~ Kim Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/24/2024 7:03:00 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Kim :) - hugs