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31.01.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Quagmire, Quest, Quiescent -
  Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

3st place in the contest

                                    When the blinds fall away
                                      unveiling of the cocoon
                                             A light flutter
                                            dust sprinkles
                                         Careful wing beats
                                         a slight movement
                                     An artistic creative force
                                         fleeting, transitory
                                          and fragmentary
                                        Soul prophetic power
                                   even by its insignificant place
                                             in the cosmos
                                          Purple lilac aroma
                                       butterfly transformation

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Date: 2/14/2024 9:42:00 AM
Very impressive winning work. Way to go.Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Congratulations. Sara K
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Date: 2/14/2024 5:46:00 AM
Anne-Lise, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, love your image, hugs, Constance
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Date: 2/13/2024 1:28:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Hugs... Enjoy your day with your win....................
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Date: 2/2/2024 2:10:00 PM
I know you have not heard from me in a while, but i am back. This piece was beautifully written. Anne-Lise Your work is stunning as always.
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Date: 2/1/2024 8:23:00 AM
Your poem can easily be described as an artistic creative force. So beautifully written. Hugs.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2024 8:52:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs
Date: 1/31/2024 3:18:00 PM
Good luck on the contest. I think this would be my favourite one to be chosen. Lovely and thoughtful. A jewel to be saved. Thank you for sharing your wisdom all the time. My dear Anne have the best eveningxxxFav+ for me
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2024 2:24:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your fave, Maria :) - hugs
Date: 1/31/2024 1:11:00 PM
So soft and gentle are your lovely words Sunshine….beautiful!! Debx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2024 2:23:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Deb :) - hugs
Date: 1/31/2024 10:09:00 AM
Stunning way of Butterfly transformation. Nice poem. GL in contest.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2024 2:23:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Jay :) - hugs
Date: 1/31/2024 9:51:00 AM
I love how your poem offers a poignant meditation on transformation, beauty, and the interconnectedness of all living beings. Through its rich imagery and evocative language, the poem invites readers to contemplate the profound significance of even the smallest moments of beauty and renewal in the natural world...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2024 2:23:00 AM
- Thank you very much, S.O. :) - hugs
Date: 1/31/2024 9:18:00 AM
What a wonderful write/great ending/lovely picture. I really enjoyed reading this one. Good Luck in the contest. We both did this one. Hugs... Have a wonderful day writing away.........
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2024 2:23:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs
Date: 1/31/2024 7:07:00 AM
Wow, my friend so stunning. Love the photo. hugs and many blessings to you
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2024 2:22:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Eve :) - hugs
Date: 1/31/2024 6:40:00 AM
An artistic creative force-- fleeting, transitory-- and fragmentary--fabulous writing, Anne-Lise. A winner for me!
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Date: 2/1/2024 2:22:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs
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