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Do not hurry:

 
     * ... (Noah is pissed, tired and wet; MOVE ON ... HURRY UP !)

A terrible storm in wait Caught by a laughing flood While his beard grows Several laborious hours For the animals a floating rescue A journey to a new adventure Take your time Time measured, analyzed and split 17.03.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) (unrhymed couplets) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/30/2017 11:31:00 AM

Had me smiling on Noah waiting for the snails to board. love phyl

Sunshine Smile
Date: 3/30/2017 12:33:00 PM

- A funny picture, Phyllis - - Thank you for friendly visits and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 3/21/2017 4:52:00 PM

Nice take on the biblical story! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sunshine Smile
Date: 3/30/2017 12:32:00 PM

- Thank you for friendly visits and your lovely comments, Matthew :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett

Date: 3/21/2017 8:34:00 AM

Brilliant Anne-Lise, all comes to those who wait as long as they don't wait to long, great poem and picture, Roy, :))

Sunshine Smile
Date: 3/21/2017 8:37:00 AM

- Roy many thanks, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

Date: 3/20/2017 4:00:00 AM

Haha , this is a funny one Anne-Lise. and I love the picture.

Sunshine Smile
Date: 3/21/2017 8:37:00 AM

- Many thanks Maria, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nilima Deb

Date: 3/19/2017 8:54:00 AM

good quote to be noted ...great and witty dear

Sunshine Smile
Date: 3/19/2017 9:27:00 AM

- Many thanks Nilima, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/19/2017 2:13:00 AM

Excellent advise to all. So hurry up. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it.

Sunshine Smile
Date: 3/19/2017 8:58:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and your lovely comments, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 3/18/2017 3:53:00 PM

Wow! A terrific poem, Anne-Lise. Not only is it funny (pic makes the words breathe laughter) but it is very existential in thought. Excellent deep thought poetry. Love and hugs for you.

Sunshine Smile
Date: 3/19/2017 8:53:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and your lovely comments, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 3/18/2017 10:46:00 AM

A fabulous fun write with a great picture to go with it :)

Sunshine Smile
Date: 3/18/2017 2:04:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Elizabeth :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/18/2017 9:27:00 AM

Hilarious my dear and witty! A seven dear, Anne-Lise!

Sunshine Smile
Date: 3/18/2017 2:03:00 PM

- Many thanks my friend Demetrios, for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 3/18/2017 4:52:00 AM

Ha ha... A fun write Anne...You made me smile... Thanks for sharing...A big 7...

Sunshine Smile
Date: 3/18/2017 2:03:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/17/2017 11:14:00 PM

Was this when patience became a virtue? Funny Anne-Lise...

Sunshine Smile
Date: 3/18/2017 2:00:00 PM

- Yes that's right :))) - Many thanks Charlie, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/17/2017 5:51:00 PM

...your funny bone is in overdrive Anne-Lise :-) ...this is fantastic! blessings, lynn ..enjoy a very happy weekend :-)

Sunshine Smile
Date: 3/18/2017 1:58:00 PM

- Lynn, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/17/2017 5:14:00 PM

Good advise to all. I enjoyed your poem.Sunshine Smile. Love.

Sunshine Smile
Date: 3/18/2017 1:57:00 PM

- Many thanks Darlene, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 3/17/2017 4:55:00 PM

Lol...cracked me up

Sunshine Smile
Date: 3/18/2017 1:53:00 PM

- Tim, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)