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Do not hurry:

 

 
     * ... (Noah is pissed, tired and wet; MOVE ON ... HURRY UP !)


A terrible storm in wait Caught by a laughing flood While his beard grows Several laborious hours For the animals a floating rescue A journey to a new adventure Take your time Time measured, analyzed and split 17.03.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) (unrhymed couplets) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 3/30/2017 11:31:00 AM
Had me smiling on Noah waiting for the snails to board. love phyl
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Date: 3/30/2017 12:33:00 PM
- A funny picture, Phyllis - - Thank you for friendly visits and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/21/2017 4:52:00 PM
Nice take on the biblical story! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/30/2017 12:32:00 PM
- Thank you for friendly visits and your lovely comments, Matthew :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/21/2017 8:34:00 AM
Brilliant Anne-Lise, all comes to those who wait as long as they don't wait to long, great poem and picture, Roy, :))
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Date: 3/21/2017 8:37:00 AM
- Roy many thanks, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2017 4:00:00 AM
Haha , this is a funny one Anne-Lise. and I love the picture.
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Date: 3/21/2017 8:37:00 AM
- Many thanks Maria, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2017 8:54:00 AM
good quote to be noted ...great and witty dear
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Date: 3/19/2017 9:27:00 AM
- Many thanks Nilima, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2017 2:13:00 AM
Excellent advise to all. So hurry up. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 3/19/2017 8:58:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and your lovely comments, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/18/2017 3:53:00 PM
Wow! A terrific poem, Anne-Lise. Not only is it funny (pic makes the words breathe laughter) but it is very existential in thought. Excellent deep thought poetry. Love and hugs for you.
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Date: 3/19/2017 8:53:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and your lovely comments, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/18/2017 10:46:00 AM
A fabulous fun write with a great picture to go with it :)
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Date: 3/18/2017 2:04:00 PM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Elizabeth :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/18/2017 9:27:00 AM
Hilarious my dear and witty! A seven dear, Anne-Lise!
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Date: 3/18/2017 2:03:00 PM
- Many thanks my friend Demetrios, for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/18/2017 4:52:00 AM
Ha ha... A fun write Anne...You made me smile... Thanks for sharing...A big 7...
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Date: 3/18/2017 2:03:00 PM
- Many thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/17/2017 11:14:00 PM
Was this when patience became a virtue? Funny Anne-Lise...
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Date: 3/18/2017 2:00:00 PM
- Yes that's right :))) - Many thanks Charlie, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/17/2017 5:51:00 PM
...your funny bone is in overdrive Anne-Lise :-) ...this is fantastic! blessings, lynn ..enjoy a very happy weekend :-)
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Date: 3/18/2017 1:58:00 PM
- Lynn, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/17/2017 5:14:00 PM
Good advise to all. I enjoyed your poem.Sunshine Smile. Love.
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Date: 3/18/2017 1:57:00 PM
- Many thanks Darlene, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/17/2017 4:55:00 PM
Lol...cracked me up
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Date: 3/18/2017 1:53:00 PM
- Tim, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)