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- Our Souls Were Always Meant To Be -

One heartfelt feeling touches warmly teardrops The rain glides through the air like an angels cry, a beautiful sight Walking rays on deep sands footprints left behind As two silhouettes in the shadow of two bodies remain Circle of light radiates emotions true Through your deep gaze, if only I knew what I was going to say Falling crystals from the fountain sparkling dewdrops The unfathomable grace and beauty it holds A sun forever rises in your sweet loving gentle smile Tell me that this is real,and it will last forever As the butterfly waltzes within the fields of dreams Idyllic without uphills our love will never fade away A flower breathes nodding in the wind slowly captured Fluttering hope blows warmly kissing petals breathless Heart of a rose you dance on its breeze murmuring sighs Being in your arms I feel safer and stronger than I've ever felt - Unrhymed Couplet - Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) 17.06.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 8/3/2015 7:31:00 PM
Excellent poem. It touched my heart.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/4/2015 8:31:00 AM
- Nayda, thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/6/2015 11:43:00 AM
Excellent beauty of love of two beautiful hearts twinkling in the ecstatic sky filled with romantic sensation. Pure invaluable classic gem beautifully colored. 7++ from me. Loved always, my lovely lovely friend, bl
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Date: 7/6/2015 11:46:00 AM
- Dear friend Bl, a pleasure that you enjoy the poem:- Our Souls Were Always Meant To Be -:) - Many thanks for visit a 7 and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/27/2015 4:10:00 PM
Beautiful write you two. love phyl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/27/2015 5:01:00 PM
- A pleasure to share with you, dear Phyllis - Thank you for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/23/2015 12:01:00 PM
It is a very beautiful poem and you can imagine its beauty while reading along!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/23/2015 12:25:00 PM
- Nikita, thanks for visiting and comments - A pleasure to share with you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/22/2015 8:50:00 AM
This is a romantic poem with profound meanings. The both of you took me there, Anne-Lise! Regards, Christopher
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/22/2015 11:55:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comments, Christopher :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/21/2015 5:11:00 PM
I like the butterfly line...Very good co write...best wishes
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/22/2015 5:34:00 AM
- A pleasure to share, Joseph - Thank you for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/19/2015 1:47:00 PM
Hi, Anne Lise: A beautiful love poem with profound words flowing in each stanza.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2015 6:27:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comments, Ralph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/19/2015 5:05:00 AM
Anne, Awe Shucks. Just clicked on AllState ad again. Had to read your great poem first before I started typing up my three. Jim Horn
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2015 9:11:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comments, Jim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/18/2015 7:35:00 PM
Hits the Heart at Home. Great POD
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Date: 6/19/2015 9:11:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comments, Marilyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/18/2015 4:05:00 PM
Another beautiful and romantic poem, Anne Lise & Liam. Congrats on this being chosen POTD!! All the best. // paul
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2015 9:04:00 AM
- A pleasure to share, Paul :) - Thanks for congratulations and visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/18/2015 3:36:00 PM
Anne-Lise Dear One and Liam Mate!! I figured right on this one with my comment earlier that it looks like you two had another POTD in the waiting. And you do!! Many Congratulations on this honor and for this wonderful unrhymed couplet. Most Excellent!! Best Always, Gary
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2015 9:03:00 AM
- It feels great and I am happy for both of us :) - Thanks for congratulations, dear friend Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/18/2015 3:29:00 PM
Anne-Lise congratulations on poem of the day with this beauty
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2015 3:06:00 AM
- Thanks for congratulations, B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/18/2015 3:24:00 PM
Beautiful and romanticly written, Thanks for your kind feed back on my acoustic poem CLEAN God is just so good, I got baptized 21 June 2004 it was a Sunday and it was fathers day, so in spiritual years ill be 21 tomorrow, my son asked me if I can buy cake bless him, 21 is his and my daughters fave number, we all joke about it.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2015 3:05:00 AM
- Happy birthday :))))) - Of course you have to buy a cake :))) - Thank you for your visit and comment, Diane :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/18/2015 3:16:00 PM
Anne-Lise, beautifully penned by two wonderful poets 7 and thanks for visiting my poem dancing flowers
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2015 3:01:00 AM
- B.W., nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit and a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/18/2015 1:04:00 PM
Anne-lise this is a lovely romantic write! Congrats on POTD! Love, KIm
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Date: 6/18/2015 1:04:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/18/2015 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD!A very beautiful love poem collaboration between the two of you my dearest friends. Well done! So very happy for you both:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 1:07:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/18/2015 12:57:00 PM
popped by anne lise to congratulate you and say your pen sparkled in this write beautiful and to thank you deeply dear pal always with a smile and also thank you everyone for the heartfelt wonderful comments truly appreciated
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 1:03:00 PM
- Congratulations to you Liam, remember that you own 50% of these beautiful lines :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/18/2015 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations.....
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 12:20:00 PM
Thanks.....
Date: 6/18/2015 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. You two write teriffic together:) Alexis
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 11:35:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/18/2015 7:47:00 AM
back to congratulation on Poem of the Day Hugs Eve
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 11:35:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/18/2015 7:21:00 AM
The two of you write beautifully together from the same romantic place! Congrats on being chosen TPOD!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 11:34:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Rhonda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/18/2015 6:02:00 AM
This is so beautiful it's breath taking. You could't find a more romantic tender poem with as much depth and feeling as this one. A all time fav for me. A dream of a write.well done Pete. 7 +.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 11:39:00 AM
- Peter, nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit and a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/18/2015 12:22:00 AM
PLays out like a windchime, Anne-Lise. Lovely, lilting write. Viv x
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 11:38:00 AM
- Viv, nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/17/2015 10:30:00 PM
pretty images. I especially like the line about fluttering hope!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 11:38:00 AM
- Andrea, nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/17/2015 8:32:00 PM
Great colaboration!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 11:37:00 AM
- Richard, nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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