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- Our Souls Were Always Meant To Be -

One heartfelt feeling touches warmly teardrops The rain glides through the air like an angels cry, a beautiful sight Walking rays on deep sands footprints left behind As two silhouettes in the shadow of two bodies remain Circle of light radiates emotions true Through your deep gaze, if only I knew what I was going to say Falling crystals from the fountain sparkling dewdrops The unfathomable grace and beauty it holds A sun forever rises in your sweet loving gentle smile Tell me that this is real,and it will last forever As the butterfly waltzes within the fields of dreams Idyllic without uphills our love will never fade away A flower breathes nodding in the wind slowly captured Fluttering hope blows warmly kissing petals breathless Heart of a rose you dance on its breeze murmuring sighs Being in your arms I feel safer and stronger than I've ever felt - Unrhymed Couplet - Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) 17.06.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 8/3/2015 7:31:00 PM

Excellent poem. It touched my heart.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/4/2015 8:31:00 AM

- Nayda, thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/6/2015 11:43:00 AM

Excellent beauty of love of two beautiful hearts twinkling in the ecstatic sky filled with romantic sensation. Pure invaluable classic gem beautifully colored. 7++ from me. Loved always, my lovely lovely friend, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/6/2015 11:46:00 AM

- Dear friend Bl, a pleasure that you enjoy the poem:- Our Souls Were Always Meant To Be -:) - Many thanks for visit a 7 and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/27/2015 4:10:00 PM

Beautiful write you two. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/27/2015 5:01:00 PM

- A pleasure to share with you, dear Phyllis - Thank you for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nikita Anand

Date: 6/23/2015 12:01:00 PM

It is a very beautiful poem and you can imagine its beauty while reading along!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/23/2015 12:25:00 PM

- Nikita, thanks for visiting and comments - A pleasure to share with you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Christopher Vidal

Date: 6/22/2015 8:50:00 AM

This is a romantic poem with profound meanings. The both of you took me there, Anne-Lise! Regards, Christopher

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/22/2015 11:55:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and comments, Christopher :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/21/2015 5:11:00 PM

I like the butterfly line...Very good co write...best wishes

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/22/2015 5:34:00 AM

- A pleasure to share, Joseph - Thank you for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/19/2015 1:47:00 PM

Hi, Anne Lise: A beautiful love poem with profound words flowing in each stanza.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2015 6:27:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and comments, Ralph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Horn

Date: 6/19/2015 5:05:00 AM

Anne, Awe Shucks. Just clicked on AllState ad again. Had to read your great poem first before I started typing up my three. Jim Horn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2015 9:11:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and comments, Jim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Marilyn Williams

Date: 6/18/2015 7:35:00 PM

Hits the Heart at Home. Great POD

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2015 9:11:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and comments, Marilyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/18/2015 4:05:00 PM

Another beautiful and romantic poem, Anne Lise & Liam. Congrats on this being chosen POTD!! All the best. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2015 9:04:00 AM

- A pleasure to share, Paul :) - Thanks for congratulations and visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/18/2015 3:36:00 PM

Anne-Lise Dear One and Liam Mate!! I figured right on this one with my comment earlier that it looks like you two had another POTD in the waiting. And you do!! Many Congratulations on this honor and for this wonderful unrhymed couplet. Most Excellent!! Best Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2015 9:03:00 AM

- It feels great and I am happy for both of us :) - Thanks for congratulations, dear friend Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 6/18/2015 3:29:00 PM

Anne-Lise congratulations on poem of the day with this beauty

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2015 3:06:00 AM

- Thanks for congratulations, B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Diane Christian

Date: 6/18/2015 3:24:00 PM

Beautiful and romanticly written, Thanks for your kind feed back on my acoustic poem CLEAN God is just so good, I got baptized 21 June 2004 it was a Sunday and it was fathers day, so in spiritual years ill be 21 tomorrow, my son asked me if I can buy cake bless him, 21 is his and my daughters fave number, we all joke about it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2015 3:05:00 AM

- Happy birthday :))))) - Of course you have to buy a cake :))) - Thank you for your visit and comment, Diane :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 6/18/2015 3:16:00 PM

Anne-Lise, beautifully penned by two wonderful poets 7 and thanks for visiting my poem dancing flowers

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2015 3:01:00 AM

- B.W., nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit and a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/18/2015 1:04:00 PM

Anne-lise this is a lovely romantic write! Congrats on POTD! Love, KIm

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 1:04:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/18/2015 12:57:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD!A very beautiful love poem collaboration between the two of you my dearest friends. Well done! So very happy for you both:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 1:07:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 6/18/2015 12:57:00 PM

popped by anne lise to congratulate you and say your pen sparkled in this write beautiful and to thank you deeply dear pal always with a smile and also thank you everyone for the heartfelt wonderful comments truly appreciated

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 1:03:00 PM

- Congratulations to you Liam, remember that you own 50% of these beautiful lines :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Konos

Date: 6/18/2015 12:00:00 PM

Congratulations.....

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 12:20:00 PM

Thanks.....

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/18/2015 11:29:00 AM

Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. You two write teriffic together:) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 11:35:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/18/2015 7:47:00 AM

back to congratulation on Poem of the Day Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 11:35:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/18/2015 7:21:00 AM

The two of you write beautifully together from the same romantic place! Congrats on being chosen TPOD!! Hugs, Rhonda

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 11:34:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Rhonda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Dome

Date: 6/18/2015 6:02:00 AM

This is so beautiful it's breath taking. You could't find a more romantic tender poem with as much depth and feeling as this one. A all time fav for me. A dream of a write.well done Pete. 7 +.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 11:39:00 AM

- Peter, nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit and a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 6/18/2015 12:22:00 AM

PLays out like a windchime, Anne-Lise. Lovely, lilting write. Viv x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 11:38:00 AM

- Viv, nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2015 10:30:00 PM

pretty images. I especially like the line about fluttering hope!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 11:38:00 AM

- Andrea, nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/17/2015 8:32:00 PM

Great colaboration!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 11:37:00 AM

- Richard, nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)