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- Our Souls Were Always Meant To Be -

One heartfelt feeling touches warmly teardrops
The rain glides through the air like an angels cry, a beautiful sight

Walking rays on deep sands footprints left behind
As two silhouettes in the shadow of two bodies remain

Circle of light radiates emotions true 
Through your deep gaze, if only I knew what I was going to say

Falling crystals from the fountain sparkling dewdrops 
The unfathomable grace and beauty it holds

A sun forever rises in your sweet loving gentle smile 
Tell me that this is real,and it will last forever 

As the butterfly waltzes within the fields of dreams 
Idyllic without uphills our love will never fade away

A flower breathes nodding in the wind slowly captured
Fluttering hope blows warmly kissing petals breathless

Heart of a rose you dance on its breeze murmuring sighs 
Being in your arms I feel safer and stronger than I've ever felt






- Unrhymed Couplet -
Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)  17.06.2015 
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Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2015

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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 8/3/2015 7:31:00 PM Excellent poem. It touched my heart. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/4/2015 8:31:00 AM - Nayda, thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath Date: 7/6/2015 11:43:00 AM Excellent beauty of love of two beautiful hearts twinkling in the ecstatic sky filled with romantic sensation. Pure invaluable classic gem beautifully colored. 7++ from me. Loved always, my lovely lovely friend, bl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/6/2015 11:46:00 AM - Dear friend Bl, a pleasure that you enjoy the poem:- Our Souls Were Always Meant To Be -:) - Many thanks for visit a 7 and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 6/27/2015 4:10:00 PM Beautiful write you two. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/27/2015 5:01:00 PM - A pleasure to share with you, dear Phyllis - Thank you for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nikita Anand Date: 6/23/2015 12:01:00 PM It is a very beautiful poem and you can imagine its beauty while reading along! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/23/2015 12:25:00 PM - Nikita, thanks for visiting and comments - A pleasure to share with you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Christopher Vidal Date: 6/22/2015 8:50:00 AM This is a romantic poem with profound meanings. The both of you took me there, Anne-Lise! Regards, Christopher Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/22/2015 11:55:00 AM - Thank you for your visit and comments, Christopher :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 6/21/2015 5:11:00 PM I like the butterfly line...Very good co write...best wishes Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/22/2015 5:34:00 AM - A pleasure to share, Joseph - Thank you for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi Date: 6/19/2015 1:47:00 PM Hi, Anne Lise: A beautiful love poem with profound words flowing in each stanza. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/20/2015 6:27:00 AM - Thank you for your visit and comments, Ralph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Horn Date: 6/19/2015 5:05:00 AM Anne, Awe Shucks. Just clicked on AllState ad again. Had to read your great poem first before I started typing up my three. Jim Horn Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/19/2015 9:11:00 AM - Thank you for your visit and comments, Jim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Marilyn Williams Date: 6/18/2015 7:35:00 PM Hits the Heart at Home. Great POD Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/19/2015 9:11:00 AM - Thank you for your visit and comments, Marilyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 6/18/2015 4:05:00 PM Another beautiful and romantic poem, Anne Lise & Liam. Congrats on this being chosen POTD!! All the best. // paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/19/2015 9:04:00 AM - A pleasure to share, Paul :) - Thanks for congratulations and visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman Date: 6/18/2015 3:36:00 PM Anne-Lise Dear One and Liam Mate!! I figured right on this one with my comment earlier that it looks like you two had another POTD in the waiting. And you do!! Many Congratulations on this honor and for this wonderful unrhymed couplet. Most Excellent!! Best Always, Gary Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/19/2015 9:03:00 AM - It feels great and I am happy for both of us :) - Thanks for congratulations, dear friend Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France Date: 6/18/2015 3:29:00 PM Anne-Lise congratulations on poem of the day with this beauty Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/19/2015 3:06:00 AM - Thanks for congratulations, B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Diane Christian Date: 6/18/2015 3:24:00 PM Beautiful and romanticly written, Thanks for your kind feed back on my acoustic poem CLEAN God is just so good, I got baptized 21 June 2004 it was a Sunday and it was fathers day, so in spiritual years ill be 21 tomorrow, my son asked me if I can buy cake bless him, 21 is his and my daughters fave number, we all joke about it. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/19/2015 3:05:00 AM - Happy birthday :))))) - Of course you have to buy a cake :))) - Thank you for your visit and comment, Diane :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France Date: 6/18/2015 3:16:00 PM Anne-Lise, beautifully penned by two wonderful poets 7 and thanks for visiting my poem dancing flowers Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/19/2015 3:01:00 AM - B.W., nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit and a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman Date: 6/18/2015 1:04:00 PM Anne-lise this is a lovely romantic write! Congrats on POTD! Love, KIm Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/18/2015 1:04:00 PM - Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 6/18/2015 12:57:00 PM Congratulations on POTD!A very beautiful love poem collaboration between the two of you my dearest friends. Well done! So very happy for you both:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/18/2015 1:07:00 PM - Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid Date: 6/18/2015 12:57:00 PM popped by anne lise to congratulate you and say your pen sparkled in this write beautiful and to thank you deeply dear pal always with a smile and also thank you everyone for the heartfelt wonderful comments truly appreciated Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/18/2015 1:03:00 PM - Congratulations to you Liam, remember that you own 50% of these beautiful lines :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Konos Date: 6/18/2015 12:00:00 PM Congratulations..... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/18/2015 12:20:00 PM Thanks.....

Alexis Y. Date: 6/18/2015 11:29:00 AM Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. You two write teriffic together:) Alexis Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/18/2015 11:35:00 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 6/18/2015 7:47:00 AM back to congratulation on Poem of the Day Hugs Eve Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/18/2015 11:35:00 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 6/18/2015 7:21:00 AM The two of you write beautifully together from the same romantic place! Congrats on being chosen TPOD!! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/18/2015 11:34:00 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Rhonda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Dome Date: 6/18/2015 6:02:00 AM This is so beautiful it's breath taking. You could't find a more romantic tender poem with as much depth and feeling as this one. A all time fav for me. A dream of a write.well done Pete. 7 +. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/18/2015 11:39:00 AM - Peter, nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit and a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley Date: 6/18/2015 12:22:00 AM PLays out like a windchime, Anne-Lise. Lovely, lilting write. Viv x Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/18/2015 11:38:00 AM - Viv, nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/17/2015 10:30:00 PM pretty images. I especially like the line about fluttering hope!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/18/2015 11:38:00 AM - Andrea, nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/17/2015 8:32:00 PM Great colaboration! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/18/2015 11:37:00 AM - Richard, nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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