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- October In Gray -

October thunderclouds looming in the horizon

                        The eyes open bravely through a mist of tears

                        In reverence I pray - let the fall play the violin







03/10/2019
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Alexis Y. Date: 10/6/2019 1:06:00 PM Hi Anne-Lise, In a few words you penned a written piece. I found it be creative as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your weekend:-) Alexis Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/6/2019 1:11:00 PM - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 10/6/2019 11:47:00 AM Another gem dear friend - all the best in the contest. Hugs and Blessings Anne-Lise, Jennifer. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/6/2019 12:17:00 PM - Many thanks my friend Jenny, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 10/4/2019 5:11:00 PM Very nicely penned Anne...hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/6/2019 12:16:00 PM - Many thanks Joseph, for your friendly visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/4/2019 2:23:00 PM We have a lot of lightning and thunder here and I appreciate the bravery you display when darkness looms on the horizon. Best wishes in the contest, Sunshine! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/4/2019 2:44:00 PM - I'm not so brave, in thunderstorms ... really huge natural forces - We have a lot of thunder in the fall, Carolyn - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France Date: 10/4/2019 2:08:00 PM Anne-Lise you have penned beauty in a few wonderful words ! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/4/2019 2:45:00 PM - Many thanks for the beautiful comment, glad you enjoyed it D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams Date: 10/3/2019 6:46:00 PM This is an amazing write my friend...i have just seen what you speak of so this one danced off the pages at me! Well done Anne-Lise :) hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/4/2019 8:45:00 AM - Many thanks Sandra, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 10/3/2019 4:50:00 PM A lovely piece excellently penned Anne-Lise, such wise choice of words. Poetry hugs, Gordon Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/4/2019 8:44:00 AM - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Gordon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball Date: 10/3/2019 3:28:00 PM WoW! Love this picture. October does seem stormy in some places. For sure it's a windy month. My birthday is this month but 72 sounds so old so I turned it around and I'm turning 27 again on the 14th. lol Nicely done Anne-Lise God Bless, JB Login to Reply Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/4/2019 2:24:00 PM Yes, Judy, it would be great if we could change the numbers when it comes to our age. Had to laugh!! Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/4/2019 8:43:00 AM - 27 is a nice age, Judy :))) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/3/2019 2:26:00 PM Beautiful-so well written, Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/4/2019 8:42:00 AM - Many thanks Vijay, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ts Poetry Date: 10/3/2019 1:53:00 PM Powerful A-L and I adore the pic Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/4/2019 8:42:00 AM - TS., many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green Date: 10/3/2019 1:49:00 PM This was very deep my friend. There is something that really touched about this piece. I think this is magnificent. Best wishes in the contest. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/4/2019 8:41:00 AM - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)