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The Earth Has Music For Those Who Listen

November, sucked up by darkness The change of nature takes place Against the silence, over the brown carpet The silence of existence in timeless winter coat made of thick brocade Cold, white as marble to knees, in the snow The lamp posts ... the flame of hope glows 29/10/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 11/6/2019 4:21:00 AM

Beautifully atmospheric and evocative, Anne Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2019 4:22:00 AM

- Many thanks Geoffrey, for your kind visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/4/2019 12:15:00 PM

This is such a magnificently creative poem Sunshine Smile I can feel the snow made of thick brocade and I can almost see myself standing knee deep with the lamp posts - love it. Hugs and blessings my friend, back after a two week absence. Hugs and blessings, Jenny

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/4/2019 12:18:00 PM

- Fortunately, we haven't got snow yet my friend :) - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/1/2019 2:27:00 PM

Oh, I bet you get to see the beautiful snowfall every winter, Sunshine. It looks "dreamy" in the photo and your words are beautifully chosen to create exquisite imagery. One of your best and a fave for me, Hon. Hugs, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/1/2019 3:46:00 PM

- There is less snow over the years, Carolyn ... but, a little snow every winter ... it melts away quickly ... I really appreciate your friendly visit and your fave of this poem :) - hugs // Anne- Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/30/2019 9:08:00 AM

You expressed this so well. I felt my body shiver. Hugs Rick.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2019 3:01:00 PM

- Many thanks Richard, for your kind visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/30/2019 8:26:00 AM

Lovely said Anne-Lise...but your smile brings us warmth lol...poetry hugs...^WW^ :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2019 8:44:00 AM

- Many thanks W.W., for your kind visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/30/2019 6:41:00 AM

That scenery feels so serene and pleasant..no wonder hope glows there--lovely poem, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2019 7:45:00 AM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/29/2019 8:09:00 PM

Nice ending! Soon the winter will arrive here in NYC. Change of seasons makes life more stimulating. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2019 4:03:00 AM

- Many thanks Matthew, for your kind visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/29/2019 7:23:00 PM

Oh, very nice! I like the flame of hope grows. Thanks for sharing. Nice to read tonight :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2019 4:02:00 AM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ts Poetry

Date: 10/29/2019 7:08:00 PM

I want the first snow, to brighten things up, but then again I want the nice weather to hold on.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2019 4:02:00 AM

- TS, many thanks for your kind visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/29/2019 6:38:00 PM

a lovely poem, anne-lise! you've captured the mood so well and the picture is a perfect accompaniment...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2019 4:01:00 AM

- Many thanks Ilene, for your kind visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball

Date: 10/29/2019 5:28:00 PM

Oh nicely done. Love the pic. It really added to the poem. Loved it. God Bless, JB

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2019 4:01:00 AM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/29/2019 4:43:00 PM

A fine write Anna-Lise, really capturing the moment that's about to corner us soon. Poetry hugs, Gordon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2019 4:00:00 AM

- Many thanks Gordon, for your kind visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/29/2019 3:38:00 PM

A beautiful poem with a beautiful picture. I can feel the cold and snow as I walk down the path.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2019 3:59:00 AM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)