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- No Thanks I Do Not Want This Dance -

This is not a ballroom There is no dance for you tonight I'm not looking for love I'm looking for pleasure reading poetry Sharing my thoughts and words Listening and reading your words Wipe your tears and clean your wounds Share, the sun, the moon, the stars and the heaven Gives a bit of myself to you who are suffering It costs so little to me I give you comfort Behind the dark clouds the sky is always blue No orchestra plays for a dance My ball shoes are old and the dress too small Dance while you're young ... By the way... I will choose my own dance partner And I like to dance barefoot..... :) 26.10.2013 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Information note: Some believe PoetrySoup is a dating site. * Register for free to meet new people! www.datingdirect.com

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Date: 12/20/2013 6:00:00 PM
May I have the next danc? :) Love this. Have a great evening xo Jon
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Date: 12/21/2013 6:58:00 AM
:)))) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Jon - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/30/2013 2:38:00 PM
WOW!!!! THIS IS EXCELLENT......
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Date: 11/30/2013 2:42:00 PM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Latarsha. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/8/2013 5:22:00 PM
Is that called a Norwegian jig? No shoes but a laughing joyful heart sung with a poet's flair. Allan
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Date: 11/8/2013 5:27:00 PM
:)))) - Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Allan. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/8/2013 7:48:00 AM
Wow... i like esp where u say you choose your own partner and dance barefoot.... such elegance yet simplicity in this piece.... thank u fr sharing... Shaz
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Date: 11/8/2013 11:33:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Shaz. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/4/2013 6:37:00 AM
Wistful mood and treasured sentiments expressed. I suspect this is the real you that speaks. Lovely.
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Date: 11/4/2013 7:03:00 AM
- Yes, it is true that some misunderstand this page .... sadly for those :((( .....:))) - Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Mark. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/31/2013 8:22:00 AM
Hahaha!!! This made me laugh Anne! We're here to express and that maybe one of the reasons why others thought that they might find love here on Soup. They just fall out of love because of the expressive words we're sharing them. Great expressionism! You are such a poet, Anne! Thanks for giving time reading my pieces! Bless you my Souper-Friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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Date: 10/31/2013 8:46:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Arden. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/29/2013 1:57:00 PM
In our Islamic culture dating aint allowd so i dont tink datin is allowd. Just nice to b gud n kind n friendly with all. So yor poem is nice n adorable. Fond thnx 4 d win info anne.
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Date: 10/29/2013 2:00:00 PM
- Friends are really nice to have, I agree with you. - Thanks for reading my poem - nice with feedback from you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/29/2013 10:00:00 AM
WOW AnneLise! This is really a great poem. No dance for you tonight. I like that. Sharing our words and thoughts with people that apprechiate them brings pleasure to both the reader and the writer. I was never much of a dancer.Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 10/29/2013 12:20:00 PM
- Thanks for reading my poem - nice with feedback from you my friend Lucilla. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/29/2013 9:14:00 AM
I'm not a very good dancer when it comes to the traditional forms, but then I think your ideas about the dance are far more interesting. A dating site? Well, good luck to them all, and I'm glad it isn't me... Jack
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Date: 10/29/2013 9:21:00 AM
- Hey Jack, I stopped dating a long time ago .... that time is past, thankfully :)))) - Thanks for reading my poem - nice with feedback from you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/28/2013 7:10:00 PM
Hi sweet Annalise..So someone on the soup tried to dance : )..Maybe that would tickle arnild to dedicate a love dancimg poem to his wife : ). You are so sweet.Arnild was your hubby s name right?Dnt want to mistaken the name and create chaos..big smiles
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Date: 10/29/2013 4:39:00 AM
- Almost right : Arild . - - Thanks for reading my poem - nice with feedback from you friend Charmaine. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/28/2013 5:58:00 PM
Wonderful poem Anne Lise...and you do share your wonderful encouraging words every day..thank you.....dating site? Weird...bet that would change if they could see the flannel PJs some of us are wearing!!!! :-) :-) :-)
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Date: 10/29/2013 4:38:00 AM
- .... no makeup .. no dress or high heels   shoes ..... :)))) - Thanks for reading my poem - nice with feedback from you friend Donna. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/28/2013 4:27:00 PM
I enjoyed this scolding but delightful poem. Sometimes it's difficult to tell if someone is just being friendly or a little too flirty. Very creative and original. I hope I will always still be young enough to keep dancing !
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Date: 10/28/2013 4:41:00 PM
.... I will also dance .... but, I will choose my own dance partner !!! - Thanks for reading my poem - nice with feedback from you Karen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/28/2013 3:43:00 PM
And I always find pleasure and happiness reading your lovely works honey. This is wonderful! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/28/2013 3:48:00 PM
- Thanks for reading my poem - nice with feedback from you friend Sharon. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/28/2013 2:48:00 PM
Really? I did not know that. Too funny! Enjoyed your write, Anne Lise :). Have a great week!
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Date: 10/28/2013 2:52:00 PM
- Thanks for reading my poem - nice with feedback from you friend Toquyen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/28/2013 12:23:00 PM
A good reminder to Soupers. We share words, we share time......we appreciate each with sombre cherishment... we pursue our poetic dreams, pleasure without.....encrothing into another's liberty, interests! Others' "ball shoes are old and the dress now too small" for their bust. Thanks for being bold. You're a true champion for a silent lot. Friend, JM
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Date: 10/28/2013 12:26:00 PM
- Thanks for reading my poem - nice with feedback from you friend Joseph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/28/2013 10:54:00 AM
yesss, i danced this weekend, anne... hope you are doing fine!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/28/2013 12:06:00 PM
-.......I did not :)))))
Date: 10/28/2013 10:47:00 AM
simple to the point and being honest that is what I like about women.
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Date: 10/28/2013 12:05:00 PM
- Thanks for reading my poem - nice with feedback from you Arturo. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/28/2013 1:39:00 AM
THE POINT IS CLEAR ,GOOD JOB
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Date: 10/28/2013 3:28:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my poem - nice with feedback from you Mohamed. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/28/2013 12:27:00 AM
In the youthful dance of life, my gown was white and lovely, now it is tatters rements of a shades pasted day. But in the imagination the waltz still plays on and the melody sounds just as sweet. Cheri and thanks for your comments on my write.
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Date: 10/28/2013 3:28:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my poem - nice with feedback from you Cherl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2013 4:15:00 PM
hi Anne Lise I like the message written here well done great pen Shadow x smile
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Date: 10/27/2013 4:17:00 PM
- Thanks for reading my poem - nice with feedback from you Shadow. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2013 3:43:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this piece, Anne. You have a very healing spirit--I love your visits and the cheer you bring with each word. This verse in particular shows just how sweet you are. Haha That's right you tell them Anne. You have lovely humor. Always, Laura
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Date: 10/27/2013 3:46:00 PM
- Thanks for reading my poem - nice with feedback from you Laura. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2013 2:11:00 PM
lovely write, my friend - and, yes, some do seem to think this is a dating site, lol
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Date: 10/27/2013 2:12:00 PM
- Thanks for reading my poem - nice with feedback from you Jack. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2013 1:47:00 PM
Lovely poem Anne I don't dance two left feet. great words and advice to those on this site
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Date: 10/27/2013 1:51:00 PM
- Thanks for reading my poem - nice with feedback from you Michael. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2013 1:32:00 PM
Hi Anne, wonderful write telling it like it is! lol Well done.. Ken
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Date: 10/27/2013 1:38:00 PM
- Thanks for reading my poem - nice with feedback from you Ken. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2013 1:31:00 PM
HI IT'S MAHIMA IT'S JUST WOW!!!! TO READ YOUR POEM IT'S REALLY TOO GOOD
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Date: 10/27/2013 1:38:00 PM
- Thanks for reading my poem - nice with feedback from you Mahima. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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