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There you like the tree

(Invisibility)
      In a busy time, we forget to see "the human and beautiful nature"
      forget to breathe ... 
      We follow the "red arrows" ... and "the power of money"
      Live and die of stress and loneliness -
      It doesn't matter if it's day or night -
      No one sees you ...




                              Like dust grains in dumbness
                          Don't be afraid to go into taciturnity
                It will create depth in the relationship with yourself
                       Hush, hush ... listen ... time of harmony
                         Seek and allow for pearls of muteness
                             Some brief moments of stillness
                          Busy people and orchids still breathe
                            Blessed pockets that provide power,
                               strength and muscle relaxation
                     When reusing the colors from the last sunset
                           The eyes of the cube quietly closed
                         No ransom requirement, or red arrows







13/10/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 9/2/2020 3:59:00 AM
Beautiful photo and amazing description. I liked the inner thoughts and wisdom shared. A outstanding poem.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2020 5:14:00 AM
- Many thanks John, for visiting and commenting :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/31/2020 10:43:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, Anne -Lise I am not glued to the mobile phone. I never have been because i do not have one. Hugs Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/1/2020 11:34:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile that is right I have not got a cell phone. Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/31/2020 3:29:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, no cell phone. Your welcome. Hugs Darlene
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/31/2020 10:46:00 AM
... no phone, Darlene ? ... - Many thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/15/2019 12:20:00 AM
Thank God, for poets like you Anne-Lise. after reading this, my thoughts were of today and how virtually, everyone walks around with a phone never to witness what is around them. Is this the future?? i wonder.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/15/2019 3:55:00 AM
- We are glued to this mobile phone, Harry ... super glue ... yes, this is the future ... try to put the mobile phone away ... 24 hours ... some had got servere anxiety attacks - Many thanks for visiting and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/14/2019 2:42:00 PM
pearls of muteness , I love that line, It speaks volumes, your poetry flares beauty from every corner, xo
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/15/2019 3:40:00 AM
- Many thanks Pixie, for visiting and commenting :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/14/2019 1:06:00 PM
Hi Sunshine Smile, we don't have time to stop and smell the roses, how ridiculous, life is so short and all we do is try to keep up with it - we should practice as you so correctly say, taciturnity and begin to form a closer to nature attitude within ourselves. Hugs and blessings, Jenny.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/15/2019 3:48:00 AM
- Our mobile phone gets a lot of attention, dear Jenny ... we quickly pass "the people and the orchid" ... no smile ... no hello - Many thanks for visiting and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/14/2019 8:11:00 AM
Beautifully written Anne-Lise...enjoyed reading my friend...^WW^ :o)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/15/2019 3:39:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and commenting, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/14/2019 7:33:00 AM
I like your Poetry...it's words and depth. We all have fears...or uneasiness. We just show our fearless sides. We put on our big boy pants and flash our muscles. A great idea...for a poem? Panagiota
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Date: 10/15/2019 3:39:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and commenting, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/13/2019 5:43:00 PM
I really love this, Sunshine. I think I'll just fav it! What is the story behind the picture?
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/14/2019 4:05:00 AM
- It was a bad title for this poem, Sunlite ... I changed it and wrote a headline :) - Many thanks for visiting, commenting and fave :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/13/2019 3:32:00 PM
Peace my friend...live life in peace
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/14/2019 4:06:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/13/2019 3:30:00 PM
I'm not afraid... Very deep..
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/14/2019 4:07:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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