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(Invisibility) In a busy time, we forget to see "the human and beautiful nature" forget to breathe ... We follow the "red arrows" ... and "the power of money" Live and die of stress and loneliness - It doesn't matter if it's day or night - No one sees you ... Like dust grains in dumbness Don't be afraid to go into taciturnity It will create depth in the relationship with yourself Hush, hush ... listen ... time of harmony Seek and allow for pearls of muteness Some brief moments of stillness Busy people and orchids still breathe Blessed pockets that provide power, strength and muscle relaxation When reusing the colors from the last sunset The eyes of the cube quietly closed No ransom requirement, or red arrows 13/10/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 10/15/2019 12:20:00 AM
Thank God, for poets like you Anne-Lise. after reading this, my thoughts were of today and how virtually, everyone walks around with a phone never to witness what is around them. Is this the future?? i wonder.
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Date: 10/15/2019 3:55:00 AM
- We are glued to this mobile phone, Harry ... super glue ... yes, this is the future ... try to put the mobile phone away ... 24 hours ... some had got servere anxiety attacks - Many thanks for visiting and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/14/2019 2:42:00 PM
pearls of muteness , I love that line, It speaks volumes, your poetry flares beauty from every corner, xo
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Date: 10/15/2019 3:40:00 AM
- Many thanks Pixie, for visiting and commenting :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/14/2019 1:06:00 PM
Hi Sunshine Smile, we don't have time to stop and smell the roses, how ridiculous, life is so short and all we do is try to keep up with it - we should practice as you so correctly say, taciturnity and begin to form a closer to nature attitude within ourselves. Hugs and blessings, Jenny.
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Date: 10/15/2019 3:48:00 AM
- Our mobile phone gets a lot of attention, dear Jenny ... we quickly pass "the people and the orchid" ... no smile ... no hello - Many thanks for visiting and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/14/2019 8:11:00 AM
Beautifully written Anne-Lise...enjoyed reading my friend...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 10/15/2019 3:39:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and commenting, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/14/2019 7:33:00 AM
I like your Poetry...it's words and depth. We all have fears...or uneasiness. We just show our fearless sides. We put on our big boy pants and flash our muscles. A great idea...for a poem? Panagiota
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Date: 10/15/2019 3:39:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and commenting, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/14/2019 3:46:00 AM
I'll always admire your pictures. Funny I overcame the frights of the middle of the night when a young boy. Loved your poem. HUgs.
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Date: 10/14/2019 4:07:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/13/2019 5:43:00 PM
I really love this, Sunshine. I think I'll just fav it! What is the story behind the picture?
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Date: 10/14/2019 4:05:00 AM
- It was a bad title for this poem, Sunlite ... I changed it and wrote a headline :) - Many thanks for visiting, commenting and fave :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/13/2019 3:32:00 PM
Peace my friend...live life in peace
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Date: 10/14/2019 4:06:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/13/2019 3:30:00 PM
I'm not afraid... Very deep..
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Date: 10/14/2019 4:07:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)