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If only you knew, I'm in love with you That you're happily married doesn't make me blue I have to use this rhythm to run through The secrets can be dangerous to my marriage too Hope my honesty gives rings in the water - a breakthrough Just let me kiss your lips once, soft and true I admit, sweetheart I've dreamed about you (... taboo) Of course, it can be seen as quite private, I know But your wife and my husband have no clue Forgive me for all my words and thoughts - I Love You 24/08/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved If only you knew Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One 3rd place in the contest

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L. J. Carber

Date: 9/2/2019 8:29:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Anne-Lise, with this most interesting poem that at first seems a bit 'naughty' but upon reflection, what I notice is the poet's great restraint.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2019 8:34:00 AM

- Love can seem 'naughty' sometimes, L.J. :) - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith

Date: 8/31/2019 3:32:00 PM

A lovely poem Anne-Lise, congrats. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2019 1:14:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2019 6:08:00 PM

Hmmm, taboo longings. That is a hard one to deal with for many people! I liked your poem. Congrats to you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2019 1:14:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 8/30/2019 12:42:00 PM

Lovely write ... Congratulations, Sunshine on your placement ...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2019 12:51:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 8/29/2019 4:17:00 PM

It is no longer a secret.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2019 12:50:00 PM

- The secret is no secret anymore ... what a shame :) - Many thanks for my place on your winning list, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/27/2019 6:08:00 AM

This is something common... sadly sometimes committed people finally meet their soulmate when it’s too late to act on it. Good write my friend. Nicely penned :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2019 8:33:00 AM

- Unfortunately, it happens Sandy - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/26/2019 6:56:00 AM

Happens often

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2019 8:32:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 8/26/2019 12:24:00 AM

Woooh a sensational forbidden love poem. It must get real hard for both. You depict it in a fine artsy way. Kudos!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2019 8:31:00 AM

- Thank you very much, S. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/25/2019 7:26:00 PM

A Fsb Breathtakingly beautiful. Wow Panagiota

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2019 8:31:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 8/25/2019 2:25:00 PM

Fine write Anne-Lise, a most interesting little story which could well be true. Very well penned, Blessings always,Gordon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2019 8:30:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Gordon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 8/25/2019 7:53:00 AM

Ha ha ... a lovely write of ground reality ... behind-curtain physicality !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/25/2019 12:33:00 PM

- A lot of weird things going on behind the curtains, Probir :) - Many thanks for the friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/25/2019 7:18:00 AM

Wow! This is honest, and for some, true. But the honesty is in the feelings; so well penned! Wow!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/25/2019 12:32:00 PM

- I had a neighbor a few years back ... when his wife fell asleep in the evening ... he visited the neighbor who was single ... - They got divorced and he remarried with another neighbor across the street - Many thanks for the friendly visit and lovely comments, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/24/2019 11:15:00 PM

Delicately expressed yet potent poetry of forbidden love, Anne-Lise. Captivating. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/25/2019 12:21:00 PM

- Many people think "the grass is greener on the other side of the fence", Susan :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)