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- My Brother Stole My Halloween Candy -

Listen this is no comedy
                                   - you stole all my candy
                          I know how much younger my brother is
                                      ... love and tolerance
                             Sometimes it requires confrontation,
                                  get out frustration and anger
                                         Forgiveness or not
                               Does he deserve to be forgiven?
                                         Right now I feel :
                                                angry,
                                        very disappointed,
                                          low blood sugar,
                                           and are tired
                                  Just wait ... until Saturday
                                            Payback time





16/10/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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If I were your brother Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Bobby May

1st place in the contest

Poem of the Week: 20/10/2019

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2019

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Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 11/2/2019 9:11:00 AM Double congrats on your winning poem Anne - Lise. Hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/2/2019 1:14:00 PM - Many thanks for congratulations, Cecilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Mcguire Date: 11/1/2019 4:57:00 PM Nice poem, nice win Sunshine! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/2/2019 1:14:00 PM - Many thanks, Timothy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ronald D Thompson Date: 10/31/2019 5:27:00 PM Yep that sure deserves a 1st in the competition. Excellent - CONGRATS on 1st place and POTW Anne-Lise. Best wishes...Ron x Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/1/2019 5:04:00 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Ron :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy Date: 10/31/2019 9:01:00 AM I'm back to say CONGRATS, Anne-Lise! Janice Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2019 9:03:00 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina Date: 10/31/2019 7:13:00 AM Wonderful Anna-Lise. Congrats on both POTW and 1st place.. Love this! hugs // Charlie Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2019 7:26:00 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 10/30/2019 5:57:00 PM POTW and a top spot, many congrats on your success Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2019 4:25:00 AM - A double "Bingo" :))) - Many thanks for congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 10/30/2019 2:39:00 PM Hey, hey, Anne-Lise! Congrats on your big winner in Bobby's contest. Way to go! Cheers, Gershon Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2019 4:26:00 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Gershon - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hello There Date: 10/30/2019 2:14:00 PM Back with a congrats on your win ~ Now, don't let that soften you up to much, my friend...He must still pay ;) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2019 4:28:00 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, H.T. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/30/2019 12:07:00 PM Congratulations on your 1st place win. So Cute. What a great picture to go with your poem. I still need to learn how to do the pictures. Enjoy your win.............. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2019 4:29:00 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Curtis Moorman Date: 10/30/2019 10:09:00 AM Anne-Lise, congrats on a super write. You could use Jan's remedy and give him exlax!!t8t lol Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2019 4:28:00 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Curtis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. Date: 10/30/2019 9:26:00 AM Hi Anne-Lise, I really enjoyed this. Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2019 4:27:00 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams Date: 10/30/2019 9:11:00 AM back for the third time...isn't it the third time's a charm?....anyway congratulations on your first place win my friend :) hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2019 4:30:00 AM - Always a pleasure to see you on my poems, Sandra :) - Many thanks for congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May Date: 10/30/2019 8:47:00 AM Congratulations on your win my sweet friend Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/30/2019 8:51:00 AM - Many thanks for my place on your winning list, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 10/29/2019 11:12:00 AM Haha, low blood sugar and high blood pressure! Congrats on your POTW Anne-Lise. Hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/29/2019 12:03:00 PM - Many thanks Cecilia, for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin Date: 10/27/2019 8:29:00 AM A fun poem Anne-Lise! :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/29/2019 12:02:00 PM - Many thanks, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams Date: 10/25/2019 9:51:00 PM congratulations on POTW my friend :) hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2019 1:57:00 PM - Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael Date: 10/25/2019 9:06:00 AM You need something SALTY to raise the PRESSURE...CONGRATULATIONS Anne-Lise ON POTW... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/25/2019 9:24:00 AM :))) - Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France Date: 10/24/2019 11:12:00 AM Sun, congratulations on POTW with this delightful poem. My younger brother was a pain too. My mom said share so I gave him all the candy I did not like and the apples ! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/24/2019 1:31:00 PM - Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One Date: 10/23/2019 2:40:00 PM Congrats on POTW.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/24/2019 1:31:00 PM - Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior Date: 10/21/2019 5:18:00 PM Congrats!! Anne-Lise on POTW!!...now time for some candy!...sending poetic love...^WW^ :o) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2019 1:28:00 PM - Many thanks W.W., for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/21/2019 1:05:00 PM This made me giggle Anne-Lise. My older brother used to steal our candy loot. He and mom would take the best pieces. Congratulations on having this fun poem honored with POTW! : )xxoo Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2019 1:28:00 PM - Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/21/2019 9:51:00 AM Back with Congrats Anne-Lise on potw Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2019 1:27:00 PM - Many thanks for a re- visit and congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin Date: 10/21/2019 4:50:00 AM A cute poem, congratulations on POTW Anne-Lise! :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2019 1:26:00 PM - Many thanks Tania, for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brandy Nicole Date: 10/20/2019 7:23:00 PM Oh my!!! It's payback time, is it?? Poor little brother. But, then again- he stole your Halloween Candy!! Yep!! Paybacks are rough. This is soooo cute, clever and creative. Made me smile. Congratulations Anne-Lise, on Poem of the Week. :) Brandy Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2019 2:54:00 AM - Many thanks Brandy, for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 10/20/2019 4:33:00 PM what a cute poem Anne-Lise many congrats on POTW and good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2019 2:53:00 AM - Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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