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A Piece of My Heart is in Heaven Angel Necklace

through a mother's tears where the sun shines forever - - hard to say goodbye 07/01/2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Senryu on Mother Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas howmanysyllables.com - 5-7-5 3rd place in the contest

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/22/2020 10:55:00 PM

Congratulations. What a beauty. Panagiota xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/23/2020 4:45:00 AM

- Many thanks Panagiota, for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2020 7:11:00 AM

Your work is very emotive. Thanks for stopping by. Sara..I have written a new short story if you care to read it. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/22/2020 8:16:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/16/2020 6:50:00 PM

such a moving piece Anne-Lise and i love the image you chose, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2020 12:54:00 PM

- Many thanks Jan, for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/15/2020 3:52:00 AM

Hi Sunshine Smile my dear soul sister - congratulations on your awesome win. It is the worst when a mother has to cry, for the loss of a child. Blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2020 12:53:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, sister Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 1/11/2020 7:09:00 AM

So hard indeed. Such warm sentiments so beautifully expressed. Congratulations and kind wishes, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2020 12:54:00 PM

- Many thanks Kai, for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2020 3:22:00 PM

sad and touching. Congrats for your win, Sunshine

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2020 12:52:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/9/2020 7:04:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win in Jenish' contest. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2020 12:51:00 PM

- Many thanks for your congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pashang Salehi

Date: 1/9/2020 2:36:00 PM

My dear Anne Lise, I wanted to see my mom once more to say goodbye the way I wanted. Then I realized if I got my wish how can I let her go and say goodbye?

Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/21/2020 1:50:00 AM

I wish you're able to... congratulations.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2020 12:49:00 PM

- It means a lot to say goodbye to those we love ... wish I could fulfill your wish, Pashang - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/9/2020 12:27:00 AM

It is hard to say goodbye.. So sweet and beautifully done.. Congrats on your win..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2020 12:46:00 PM

- I really appreciate my 3rd place in your contest, Jenish :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/8/2020 2:33:00 PM

This is the best entry I've seen, Anne-Lise. Gently worded and very moving. A fave for me. Hope you get a top win for this! Hugs, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2020 12:45:00 PM

- Many thanks for your fave and lovely comment, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/8/2020 4:44:00 AM

So beautiful yet sad Anne-Lise. I lost my youngest sister who only lived 25 minutes. I hope I meet her when I cross over. xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2020 6:51:00 AM

- So sad ... only 25 minutes :( - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/7/2020 1:58:00 PM

My mother lost her first born at birth. This one is touchingly sad but beautifully penned. Best wishes in the contest my friend ... hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2020 2:02:00 PM

- She never forgot that child, Sandra - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/7/2020 1:22:00 PM

Nicely done, Sunshine. Children a part of our soul since we had the nine months to love them before they arrived. Then the excitement to hold and protect when they arrived. When lost heart wrenching. good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2020 1:35:00 PM

- Yes, loved before birth and in the eternal future - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/7/2020 12:46:00 PM

Beautiful and full of mixed emotions, Anne-Lise! I am touched! Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2020 1:00:00 PM

- Losing a child can turn upside down on your life, feels like your whole life is collapsing, Paul - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/7/2020 12:30:00 PM

Now this brought tears when I think of the sadness. With that off for lunch. Hope all is well with you. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2020 12:58:00 PM

- A child who will always be missed, dear Phyllis ... the grief never goes away - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 1/7/2020 10:02:00 AM

The poem no other will ever wish to claim. We prayed so hard for more tomorrows, though glad for all those yesterdays. -Richard

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2020 12:53:00 PM

- Some yesterdays a mother will never forget, Richard - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/7/2020 8:14:00 AM

The bond is never broken Anne. Good luck. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2020 12:50:00 PM

- Many thanks Tom, for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/7/2020 8:07:00 AM

Beautifully expressed Harry.

Eve Roper
Date: 1/7/2020 1:18:00 PM

Has short-term memory have something to do with this. Reading your poem, Sunshine, but his mine on long term.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2020 12:45:00 PM

- ... Harry ....? .... where is Harry .... where ....? :))) - Glad you liked my poem, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/7/2020 8:02:00 AM

A mother’s tears are the most heart-wrenching at a grave, sometimes held back for other children. <3 Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2020 9:46:00 AM

One of the harder things to watch was a young boy holding his mom’s hand, reaching toward his sister’s coffin as they took her out the back and him and his mom had to walk the other way. So strong this mama had to be. I love this family, always hold them in my heart. (She died at 5)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2020 12:42:00 PM

- I think children can see their mother's tears at the grave ... it's okay to cry a little, Kim :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 1/7/2020 7:34:00 AM

A mother;s love is forever, a touching write Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2020 12:38:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/7/2020 6:56:00 AM

Moving poem that only a grieving mother could ever understand dearest, Anne-Lise! Marvelously done! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2020 12:37:00 PM

- It is true, only a mother who has lost her child knows this feeling dear Demetrios - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/7/2020 6:51:00 AM

A special poem your wrote Anne-Lise--it evokes eternal love of mother--a touching write. Best for a win at the TOP.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2020 12:35:00 PM

- Many thanks Vijay, for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)