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El viejo piano.

Falling apart I’ve lost my heart Foggy blanket of death fall gasp its last breath Frost of my november Snow of my december Do I hear our song? ... ... no, it was wrong 10/11/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Eve Roper

Date: 11/11/2019 12:19:00 PM

a verse of sorrow and very well said. Thank you so much for your wonderful compliment it touched my heart this morning. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/13/2019 7:02:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and your comments, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 11/11/2019 8:39:00 AM

A song out of season, Very nicely done Anne...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/11/2019 8:54:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and your comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/11/2019 5:56:00 AM

Very romantic poem that touches the core of every heart that has been in love dearest, Anne-Lise! Much liked! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/11/2019 8:04:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and your comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

Date: 11/11/2019 4:59:00 AM

An emotional one, in short sharp bursts. It makes for a more dramatic impact. Love the last two lines Anne-Lise. Best of luck in the contest...Maria Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/11/2019 8:03:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and your comments, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/11/2019 3:53:00 AM

A wonderful write, dear friend, Love it. God bless you, Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/11/2019 8:03:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and your comments, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Foster

Date: 11/10/2019 4:51:00 PM

Wow. Heartbreak... truly beautiful. Ann

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/11/2019 3:21:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and your comments, Ann :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Gondolf

Date: 11/10/2019 2:32:00 PM

Much emotion felt in these few words, Anne-Lise, nicely written. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/11/2019 3:21:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and your comments, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/10/2019 1:23:00 PM

Well penned, my friend Love, Panagiota

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/10/2019 2:14:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and your comments, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/10/2019 1:18:00 PM

such sadness....as i suppose it is whenever love is lost and the song of the heart is no longer heard... good penning my friend... hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/10/2019 2:14:00 PM

- ... and later miss it, Sandra :) - Thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 11/10/2019 12:40:00 PM

Oooh... A relationship that didn't seem to last very long... Or am I incorrect?

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/10/2019 12:53:00 PM

- A relationship that died ... (short or long ... it doesn't matter) however, the "song" (love) he/she deeply miss :) - Thanks for visiting and your comments, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/10/2019 11:54:00 AM

Interesting piece. I like the picture of the old piano. We can produce music at any age. Hugs a Rick.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/10/2019 11:58:00 AM

- The very special music ... never gets old, Richard - Thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/10/2019 11:24:00 AM

Splendidly done--foggy blanket--frost of my November--brilliant blend of emotions, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/10/2019 12:04:00 PM

- When love dies, Vijay my friend ... it is an eternity until spring comes ... it becomes a lonely and long winter - Thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/10/2019 11:17:00 AM

Oh so sad and well written Anne-Lise! I hope you have a nice day :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/10/2019 12:00:00 PM

- When love dies ... "our song" will also die, Heidi - Thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)