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- Men - Cars - Women -

If you see
   a man opens
     the car door 
       for a woman ....
         He certainly has
           a brand new car ...
            or a very young
             and beautiful mistress
               His pride ...
                a conquest ... 
                  the gleaming varnish
                    reminds him of
                     sensual red woman lips
                      Excite shining
                       in his eyes - 
                        you will always
                          be his number two




13.01.2014
A-L Andresen :))

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Farhana Akter Date: 5/16/2014 4:34:00 PM so true , dear Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/17/2014 6:03:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit, Farhana ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Darren Watson Date: 2/2/2014 12:57:00 PM I renew my BMW every 3 years. If I were married , Would I renew my wife similarly? A very enjoyable read though. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/2/2014 2:36:00 PM - I hope not :) - Thanks for the nice visit, Darren. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kathryn Collins Date: 2/1/2014 9:01:00 AM Anne Lise - How great those Ferrari's art! Absolutely enjoyable. Hit the spot. love, Kathy Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/1/2014 9:28:00 AM - Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Kathryn !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso Date: 1/31/2014 10:07:00 PM Another very creative write that has me smiling, sadly I have an old car, but I can say I open the door for others, just seems the right thing to do!!!! :) And my car is so old, opening the door for someone is the highlight, all down hill from there! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/1/2014 6:23:00 AM - Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Arthur !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joe Maverick Date: 1/30/2014 4:11:00 PM Hello Anne Lise, good reading here I haven't had a red car...or for that matter a 'scarlet woman' for many old years.. L O L, however enjoyed the write, and thank you for the remarks on the Lina-Marie poem I did.. Joe. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/30/2014 6:22:00 PM Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Joe !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

The Situation Date: 1/29/2014 3:54:00 AM If only the woman could be as faithful as the car. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/29/2014 4:03:00 AM - In true love they are :))) - Thanks for the nice visit, T.S. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Rogers Date: 1/28/2014 12:24:00 AM OUCH, Anne-Lise!-LOL Believe it or not sweetie, "there are a few "Real Gentlemen" Antiques, still around from the good ole' days! smile Hahahahaha,,,Very Nice Work! xoxoxoxo Robert OBTW,,,nice form and construct of this piece. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/28/2014 2:53:00 AM - Yes, men are different ..... as it is with women...:)) - Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Robert !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim B Date: 1/23/2014 2:43:00 PM Too many people who are like this, the ego and the selfish nature of man is often his undoing, or hers in many cases these days. Great poem Anne. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2014 2:46:00 PM - So true, Tim... well said :)) - Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -" !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Dom Date: 1/22/2014 3:23:00 AM ha, ha. yes, the male ego does take some casualties. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/22/2014 3:25:00 AM Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Michael !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman Date: 1/20/2014 9:20:00 AM Loved you poem... But for my Hubby it's a brand new computer and new hobby sites to go to... LOL Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2014 2:03:00 PM Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Carol !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Mason Date: 1/19/2014 4:32:00 PM Ha ha enjoyed your poem. Should I stop opening doors for women? Warm thoughts, Ralph Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2014 4:35:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comment Ralph. - your words are encouraging and supportive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dominique Johnson Date: 1/19/2014 3:31:00 PM Generally nothing beats a new car, but a woman will always give great competition! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2014 3:43:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit, Dominique. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 1/19/2014 1:47:00 PM Ha ha ha had me smiling with this poem. A man and his car is tough competition for a woman. Have a nice weekend. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2014 2:00:00 PM Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Phyllis !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kira Price Date: 1/19/2014 11:52:00 AM Men and their toys!! lol Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2014 12:06:00 PM Yes .... toys :)) - Thanks for the nice visit, Kira. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith Date: 1/19/2014 11:23:00 AM This piece so rings true of many men. If they only knew that their toys will lose luster but the woman will continue to shine. Tim Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2014 11:45:00 AM - So true, Tim... well said :)) - Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -" !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/17/2014 7:46:00 AM ohh, toys for the big boys--except women.. how's your day, anne?... huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/17/2014 7:50:00 AM - Thank you, Nette // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin Date: 1/16/2014 5:57:00 PM Anne-Lise I loved it but: You....sure ain't no number two! hugs, chuck Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/17/2014 2:32:00 AM Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Chuck !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne Date: 1/16/2014 4:12:00 PM lol,, witty write, my friend : ) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/17/2014 2:32:00 AM Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Jack !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Wilson Date: 1/16/2014 2:11:00 PM I like the way it is written Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/17/2014 2:31:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit, James. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Dome Date: 1/16/2014 12:54:00 PM There maybe a lot of truth in this unique write, But for me, It's the woman first. Although, we might have the car, but not always have the woman. I love the style and delivery. well done. best wishes. Pete. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/16/2014 1:03:00 PM Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Peter !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Bennett Date: 1/16/2014 8:38:00 AM Very very true! I enjoyed reading it. Thanks again for stopping by my page. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/16/2014 8:50:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comment Alexis - your words are encouraging and supportive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/15/2014 7:59:00 PM yes, again, anne... this kind of ride drives him crazy more than any woman could... hello, thursday!.. huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/16/2014 4:06:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comment Nette - your words are encouraging and supportive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Byte Date: 1/15/2014 5:08:00 PM Very cute poem I enjoyed it very much xoxo Michael Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/16/2014 4:05:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comment Michael - your words are encouraging and supportive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Austin Eseke Date: 1/15/2014 2:06:00 PM nice poem indeed,thanks for your visit,bye for now. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/15/2014 2:13:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit, Austin. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jancarl Campi Date: 1/15/2014 11:35:00 AM Quite a poem. We guys sure do some strange things don't we? Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Jancarl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/15/2014 11:39:00 AM - Fortunately, men are different ..... as it is with women...:)) - Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Jancarl !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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