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Fill my empty stomach Replace the cheese with vegetables, fruits, berries or nuts I eat healthy all year round Old dry cheese ~ NO THANKS You will find greater delicate cuisine in a dumpster o o o Luxus Mouse /\ /\ /\ /\ * (=• •=) * * (=• •=) * * > (*) < * > (*) < * 10.07.2016 - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/16/2016 3:53:00 PM

Cute mouse with artistic features. Loved it. phyl

Sunshine Smile
Date: 7/17/2016 7:43:00 AM

- Thanks for lovely comments and visits, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

JEAN MURRAY

Date: 7/13/2016 3:16:00 PM

My daughter is Vegan Anne-Lise. She certainly did not catch that from me! Great moral in this poem.

Sunshine Smile
Date: 7/15/2016 3:52:00 PM

- Thanks for comments and visits, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/13/2016 2:50:00 AM

Better to be a vegetarian. Beautiful poem and thoughts. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Sunshine Smile
Date: 7/13/2016 12:37:00 PM

- Thanks for comments and visits, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/12/2016 9:12:00 AM

Ahh!! My father said about two years before he died that if it was good(like food) it was not good for you and if it was fun it was morally wrong..We know though once a person starts to eat healthy fresh fruits and vegetables then the desire for unhealthy grows..Thanks for stopping by..I have never seen nor smell nor tasted Limburger cheese but only heard the jokes..Sara..I do like a little cheese in my life though..

Sunshine Smile
Date: 7/13/2016 12:36:00 PM

- Wise words from your father, Sara - Thanks for lovely comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

arthur vaso

Date: 7/11/2016 5:54:00 PM

oh nooo, and all these years I was sure cheese was a vegetable!!!! Yikes! :)

Sunshine Smile
Date: 7/13/2016 12:35:00 PM

- Sorry Arthur :))) - Thanks for lovely comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 7/11/2016 1:44:00 PM

Sunshine, this is so sweet and I am loving it 7 ~

Sunshine Smile
Date: 7/11/2016 1:48:00 PM

- Thanks for lovely comments a 7 and visits, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

BL DEVNATH

Date: 7/11/2016 12:44:00 PM

Mouse does this often and takes chance to eat. They prance here and there at night and searches food. Beautiful poem my lovely lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Sunshine Smile
Date: 7/11/2016 1:12:00 PM

- The moral of this small poem is that we throw too much food, my friend Bl - Thanks for comments and visits - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jo Daniel

Date: 7/11/2016 9:24:00 AM

Great write, Anne-lise:) love the pic:)

Sunshine Smile
Date: 7/11/2016 11:47:00 AM

- Thanks for comments and visits, Jo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/11/2016 5:32:00 AM

Charming theme, delightfully written dear Anne-Lise! Good luck! A seven!

Sunshine Smile
Date: 7/11/2016 7:08:00 AM

- Mice live in luxus ..... we throw too much food .....- (not written to any contest) - Thanks for comments a 7 and visits, dear Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/10/2016 8:44:00 PM

Great poem, Sunshine! just picked some heirloom long flat yellow pole beans from my garden! Yesterday, took Ma to Wisconsin Bluffs farm & picked Blueberries & Gooseberries! made organic pie & jam with raw honey from a buddy who is a beekeeper! love, jimbo

Sunshine Smile
Date: 7/11/2016 7:03:00 AM

- Sounds delicious, Jimbo ..... hope I can taste a bit :) - Thanks for comments and visits - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2016 5:30:00 PM

haha, great last line!!

Sunshine Smile
Date: 7/11/2016 7:01:00 AM

- Mice are wise animals .... they know where they can find delicacies..... old dry cheese ..... does not tempt :) - Thanks for comments and visits, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/10/2016 3:01:00 PM

Well I'm sure you have read my food poem. I'm really not that picky as long as it isn't moving. As a matter of fact, the only food I will eat moving is jello. LOL Love the humor Anne-Lise

Sunshine Smile
Date: 7/11/2016 6:56:00 AM

- I do not like wasting food ....... but, I have two dogs that helps me to eat up leftovers - Thanks for comments and visits, Daniel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

JAN ALLISON

Date: 7/10/2016 1:54:00 PM

LOL Anne Lise I could never be vegetarian love my meat too much lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Sunshine Smile
Date: 7/10/2016 2:31:00 PM

- Not me either :))) - Thanks for comments and visits, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

nette onclaud

Date: 7/10/2016 1:42:00 PM

splendid, anne..i'm semi-vegan but i like old cheese only during christmas... enjoyed this with huggs!

Sunshine Smile
Date: 7/10/2016 2:33:00 PM

- I'm very fond of cheese :) - Thanks for comments and visits, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)