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Fill my empty stomach
Replace the cheese with vegetables, fruits, berries or nuts
I eat healthy all year round
Old dry cheese ~ NO THANKS
You will find greater delicate cuisine in a dumpster

o o o  
        Luxus Mouse
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  10.07.2016
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Date: 7/16/2016 3:53:00 PM
Cute mouse with artistic features. Loved it. phyl
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Date: 7/17/2016 7:43:00 AM
- Thanks for lovely comments and visits, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/13/2016 3:16:00 PM
My daughter is Vegan Anne-Lise. She certainly did not catch that from me! Great moral in this poem.
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Date: 7/15/2016 3:52:00 PM
- Thanks for comments and visits, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/13/2016 2:50:00 AM
Better to be a vegetarian. Beautiful poem and thoughts. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/13/2016 12:37:00 PM
- Thanks for comments and visits, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/12/2016 9:12:00 AM
Ahh!! My father said about two years before he died that if it was good(like food) it was not good for you and if it was fun it was morally wrong..We know though once a person starts to eat healthy fresh fruits and vegetables then the desire for unhealthy grows..Thanks for stopping by..I have never seen nor smell nor tasted Limburger cheese but only heard the jokes..Sara..I do like a little cheese in my life though..
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Date: 7/13/2016 12:36:00 PM
- Wise words from your father, Sara - Thanks for lovely comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/11/2016 5:54:00 PM
oh nooo, and all these years I was sure cheese was a vegetable!!!! Yikes! :)
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Date: 7/13/2016 12:35:00 PM
- Sorry Arthur :))) - Thanks for lovely comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/11/2016 1:44:00 PM
Sunshine, this is so sweet and I am loving it 7 ~
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Date: 7/11/2016 1:48:00 PM
- Thanks for lovely comments a 7 and visits, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/11/2016 12:44:00 PM
Mouse does this often and takes chance to eat. They prance here and there at night and searches food. Beautiful poem my lovely lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/11/2016 1:12:00 PM
- The moral of this small poem is that we throw too much food, my friend Bl - Thanks for comments and visits - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/11/2016 9:24:00 AM
Great write, Anne-lise:) love the pic:)
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Date: 7/11/2016 11:47:00 AM
- Thanks for comments and visits, Jo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/11/2016 5:32:00 AM
Charming theme, delightfully written dear Anne-Lise! Good luck! A seven!
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Date: 7/11/2016 7:08:00 AM
- Mice live in luxus ..... we throw too much food .....- (not written to any contest) - Thanks for comments a 7 and visits, dear Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/10/2016 8:44:00 PM
Great poem, Sunshine! just picked some heirloom long flat yellow pole beans from my garden! Yesterday, took Ma to Wisconsin Bluffs farm & picked Blueberries & Gooseberries! made organic pie & jam with raw honey from a buddy who is a beekeeper! love, jimbo
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Date: 7/11/2016 7:03:00 AM
- Sounds delicious, Jimbo ..... hope I can taste a bit :) - Thanks for comments and visits - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/10/2016 5:30:00 PM
haha, great last line!!
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Date: 7/11/2016 7:01:00 AM
- Mice are wise animals .... they know where they can find delicacies..... old dry cheese ..... does not tempt :) - Thanks for comments and visits, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/10/2016 3:01:00 PM
Well I'm sure you have read my food poem. I'm really not that picky as long as it isn't moving. As a matter of fact, the only food I will eat moving is jello. LOL Love the humor Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/11/2016 6:56:00 AM
- I do not like wasting food ....... but, I have two dogs that helps me to eat up leftovers - Thanks for comments and visits, Daniel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/10/2016 1:54:00 PM
LOL Anne Lise I could never be vegetarian love my meat too much lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/10/2016 2:31:00 PM
- Not me either :))) - Thanks for comments and visits, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/10/2016 1:42:00 PM
splendid, anne..i'm semi-vegan but i like old cheese only during christmas... enjoyed this with huggs!
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Date: 7/10/2016 2:33:00 PM
- I'm very fond of cheese :) - Thanks for comments and visits, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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