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The body's balance ~ well - being ~ Changes provides joy 01.07.2018 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) 5-3-5 Syllable Lune Haiku is also known as the American Haiku

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Date: 7/18/2018 3:11:00 PM
The body is a work of art and so is your lovely Lune Haiku, Anne-Lise. Beautifully done! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/18/2018 3:12:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/7/2018 8:35:00 AM
They do!
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Date: 7/7/2018 8:38:00 AM
- Thank you Kim, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/6/2018 4:44:00 PM
..............................life's in the balance.................... ..........................lest we change our ways......................... ..............................find total perfection................................. hugs Mick
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Mick Talbot
Date: 7/8/2018 4:40:00 AM
Quote Anne-Lise “Lovely haiku, Mick :) - Thank you very much :) - Happy weeked :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)”, unquote. A senryu, I normally start such as a 'senryu comment', however, the effort in centralizing it caused me to forget, my apologies, and a big THANK YOU, for your kind words! With respect and a big summer HUG, Mick.
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Date: 7/7/2018 1:02:00 AM
- Lovely haiku, Mick :) - Thank you very much :) - Happy weeked :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/4/2018 5:12:00 PM
The art of body! That brings rest and joy! A smart and lovely write dear Anne-Lise.. A joy to read.. stay safe and blessed always.
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Date: 7/5/2018 6:50:00 AM
- Thank you Besma, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/4/2018 11:12:00 AM
I sort of remember when those sort of changes, brought me great joy... good one Anne-Lise...
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Date: 7/4/2018 12:05:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/3/2018 1:12:00 PM
Indeed...
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Date: 7/3/2018 1:31:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/2/2018 6:51:00 PM
Wonderful! Enjoyed this very much, Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/3/2018 1:30:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/2/2018 3:53:00 PM
Health and fitness provide a happy outlook on life, Anne-Lise! Your Lune Haiku delivers a good dose of common sense:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 7/3/2018 1:31:00 PM
- Thank you Paul, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/2/2018 5:41:00 AM
Well crafted Anne-Lise..I feel the balance in your words.
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Date: 7/2/2018 1:55:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/1/2018 5:44:00 PM
Just wow A-L
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Date: 7/2/2018 1:54:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/1/2018 1:47:00 PM
so uplifting Anne Lise- welcome back we have missed you!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/1/2018 2:48:00 PM
- Feels good to be missed, many thanks Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/1/2018 1:45:00 PM
A fit body will indeed bring a feeling of well being and joy, so often we eat the wrong food and do not exercise enough. Tom. Good luck Tom
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Date: 7/1/2018 2:07:00 PM
- I've been on vacation and only eaten "wrong" food for 10 days ... :))) - It's time for some exercise :))) - Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Tom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/1/2018 1:18:00 PM
the headstand pose so well defined in your verse, anne... wonderful!...huggs
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Date: 7/1/2018 2:08:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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