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Bad guys,
    I recognize the bad guys
    some hate to lose
    The big game
    cross into the shade
    A fast-paced ride
    success is not a highway
                                ... "the soul of America"
    Everything
    depends on who wins, I guess

    Bad guys,
    I recognize the bad guys
    gossiping and greed 
    Backstabbing
    evil be spoken
    Manipulation
    Triumph and torment
    prepare for the next level
                                 ... "the soul of America"
    ~ the worst loser ever







    10.11.2020
    Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/13/2020 10:45:00 AM

I LOVE this poem, Anne-Lise! Ghetto truth straight from the heart, my dear friend. Keep ink vibbing those beautiful thoughts. Love and more love always.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/10/2021 11:48:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Freddie :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan

Date: 11/13/2020 3:11:00 AM

You're not kidding about him being the worst loser ever. AND...he can't even take his ball and go home, because the White House belongs to the people, and he's being evicted on January 20th. I love sharing your thoughts about this loser.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/13/2020 4:36:00 AM

- He will be thrown out when the time comes, Jenna ... now he's "licking his wounds" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/12/2020 11:19:00 AM

A sad loser that is unwilling to admit defeat. A sad sight that election was and I am so glad it is over and so not have to listen to it anymore not to mention we need a new leader too. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/13/2020 4:30:00 AM

- Yes, a leader is not a clown Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 11/12/2020 5:54:00 AM

Anne-Lise, I like your poem, nothing is more pathetic than a vindictive loser _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/13/2020 4:29:00 AM

- Behaving like a small child ... a shame, Constance - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/11/2020 11:34:00 AM

It is so sad for all of us, especially as children are now learning that MIGHT makes RIGHT. When I teach character ed classes and talk about how bad bullying is, a fourth grader yells "what about Trump? What about Trump? What about Trump?" I feel that this is so crazy. Biden beat him by 5 MILLION votes. We need this electoral college gone. Hillary beat him by 3 MILLION votes last time. The electoral college is insanity.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/13/2020 4:27:00 AM

- "What about Trump?" ... he is a fat liar, deceiver and egoist ... a loser ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)