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10.04.2025
Anne-Lise Andresen
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Fortune's wheel swell of emotion ecstatic burning zeal repairs the tangles of life - foolish idea

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/19/2025 12:10:00 PM

Anne-Lise, one could imagine the older woman is addicted to gambling. How to fix things on a phone is all rather sad....of course that is if she even has the ability to use it properly. What you've done here is very creative and makes us think!!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/13/2025 4:01:00 AM

I don't know this form either... but like your poem. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina

Ink Empress

Date: 4/11/2025 1:58:00 PM

Dear anne lise, i love the metaphorical nature of your poem and how youv presented it with also the picture which gives a resonating idea of illusions we live in today! Unfortunately! Pleasure reading your poem today! Sending you light always

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/11/2025 6:05:00 AM

Great one. I don't know this form either. Well done :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2025 6:07:00 AM

- I "discovered" it yesterday... easy to do :) - Thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Michael Tor

Date: 4/11/2025 4:37:00 AM

Love her expression and your words describing the picture perfectly Dear Anne-Lise...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2025 6:15:00 AM

- Repairing the tangles of life is not easy, Michael :) - Thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 4/11/2025 4:16:00 AM

To cherish positive moments while staying resilient during challenges.A beautiful poem on life

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2025 6:12:00 AM

- Simple solutions are not always the best, Akham :) - Thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/11/2025 3:52:00 AM

Anne-Lise, from the expression on her face she doesn't want to repair but destroy. LOL..Great interpretation of the picture or great picture to interpret your work. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2025 6:11:00 AM

- She tried, Sara ... but it didn't work :) - Thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/10/2025 5:00:00 PM

A little hard to do. Another fun photo!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2025 6:09:00 AM

- A bad loser :))) - Thanks for your comment, Kim :) - hugs

CayCay Jennings

Date: 4/10/2025 3:43:00 PM

I'll have to look this form up, I'm not familiar with it and your write has intrigued me. Very clever and right-on ... CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2025 6:08:00 AM

- New to me too... fun to try, CayCay :) - Thanks for your comment :) - hugs