- Lion and Lioness -

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Moist drops evaporate The predator's focused gaze The throat quivers of thirst ... water of purity She knows everything about - the force of attraction A fragrant path, her bait - leads him into temptation Erotic blushing - an intimate moment Heartbeat and tingling in the stomach Sensitive and explosive - A pregnant lioness 06/10/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Sandra Adams

Date: 10/7/2019 9:09:00 PM

clever write my friend...the ending was perfect fit for this piece...love it :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/8/2019 8:42:00 AM

- Many thanks for the visits and comments, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/7/2019 5:13:00 AM

I love how you ended this poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/7/2019 8:34:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/7/2019 2:21:00 AM

My favourite animals, walked among them in Mauritius, they were only young cubs then, an amazing experience. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/7/2019 2:47:00 AM

- I did the same in Thailand Phuket, many years ago ... was with both the adults and the children ... walked with them like a dog in a leash :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)