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17.09.2023
Anne-Lise Andresen
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There will always be a last time Fragile web, I can't confirm strength threads spun together into the complex tapestry Existential thinkers of the abyss searching for light in the dark and attempts to stake out a way forward Phoenix bird, more than just an act Picture becomes incomplete the pieces scattered by the wind Don't lose track one question at a time, a wine glass half finished where stars explode Caught in this swirling undiluted power unfiltered heart that is deeply rooted The lighthouse must be lit Swallowed poisonous syllables the light from the computer screen stings the eyes long-term parking - accept your own limitations

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Ink Empress

Date: 9/19/2023 3:10:00 AM

“Swallowing poisonous syllables “ i really loved that line and also the depth of this very heartfelt poem.your wordplay is brilliant here and flow is seamless, and sometimes we all need a break from our own thoughts too. Loved this one dear Anne lise

Jan Allison

Date: 9/18/2023 5:31:00 PM

thought provoking piece Anne-Lise hugs jan xx

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/18/2023 4:09:00 PM

A captivating write Anne- Lise, intriguing from start to end… Belle

Jay Narain

Date: 9/18/2023 11:16:00 AM

Fabulous poem. Nice imagery. Life is a fragile web--way forward isn't always set for us. Great thought,

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/18/2023 6:18:00 AM

The notion that there will inevitably come a final occasion, Anne-Lise, resonates deeply within me. Life, like a delicate and intricate spider's web, does not always present a clear and predetermined path for us to follow. BOL with the contest

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/18/2023 4:48:00 AM

Wonderful word play, a vision in poetry. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/17/2023 8:41:00 PM

This poem has many evocative lines and eerie imageries.. True, life is most of the times like a tangled trap and the negative auras do become as poisonous manifestations in our present.. Such vivid and complex emotions you've described here "Swallowed poisonous syllables".. Wonderfully done, dear Anne-Lise..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2023 1:56:00 AM

- Every negative thought can have a negative impact on our lives, Hiya - Thank you for your comment :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2023 4:30:00 PM

Lots of marvelous imagery here, Anne Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2023 1:37:00 AM

- Thank you for your comment, Andrea :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/17/2023 3:09:00 PM

There will always be a last time--so true, Anne-Lise. Life is a fragile web--way forward isn't always set for us. Your thoughts here make me pause and think.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2023 1:37:00 AM

- No one knows when you will need long term parking...enjoy each day as it comes, Vijay :) - Thanks :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/17/2023 2:37:00 PM

"Swallowed poisonous syllables the light from the computer screen stings the eyes - long-term parking" Indeed, another place to park our minds -- for every positive a flip-side of negative the Devil will use to his advantage.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2023 1:34:00 AM

- Turn off all power ... park ... - Thank you for your comment, Joe :) - hugs

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/17/2023 1:34:00 PM

I'm going to be parked up..In bed soon Anne-Lise, a good one to wind down with.'

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2023 1:31:00 AM

- When the night comes it feels good to park in bed ... sleep well, Joe :) - hugs