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Blue moon covered by clouds too soon pearl eyes river of tears as cries time gone one last goodbye moves on 05/04/2021 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Musette 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May # 1 3rd place in the contest

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Date: 4/26/2021 1:09:00 PM
Nicely done, Anne-Lise! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/25/2021 12:01:00 PM
Hi Anne- Lise, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. PS, I haven't seen you posting in a while; I hope all is well:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/25/2021 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. It is sad to say goodbye with a hug and kiss. Have a blessed day...............
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Date: 4/24/2021 8:56:00 AM
Congrats, Anne-Lise. Beautifully done. Hugs...
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Date: 4/24/2021 6:13:00 AM
Congrats on your win Anne, Nicely done
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Date: 4/7/2021 3:45:00 PM
I think I like yours better than mine. It is so difficult to do these with limited number of syllables!!
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Date: 4/7/2021 3:26:00 PM
A perfectly depicted parting, Anne-Lise! Memorable! :) gw
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Date: 4/7/2021 2:43:00 PM
I wanna cry...have a beautiful Spring dear poet...much luv, james
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Date: 4/7/2021 12:48:00 PM
I'm just thinking about you. I'm sending this thought to you and I hope everything is well. Best Wishes Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/6/2021 11:10:00 PM
So sad the poem, and very moving.
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Date: 4/6/2021 5:28:00 PM
Wow! I thought this both sad and beautiful... A winner for sure.... Take care ...Shirley.
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Date: 5/13/2021 12:31:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Shirley :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/6/2021 1:31:00 PM
These are lovely...Hope you are well my friend..
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Date: 5/13/2021 12:30:00 PM
- Thank you very much, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/6/2021 8:57:00 AM
It's so hard to say goodbye to loved ones, especially when we don't know how soon we'll see them again. You captured this feeling beautifully, Sunshine! Winning wishes coming your way. Hugs, carolyn
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Date: 5/13/2021 12:30:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/6/2021 5:08:00 AM
Stunning, dearest Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx
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Date: 5/13/2021 12:29:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/6/2021 2:27:00 AM
Enjoyed. This is a wonder. God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/13/2021 12:29:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2021 8:25:00 PM
Lovely words that fit the picture perfectly Ann- Lise... Belle :-)
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Date: 5/13/2021 12:29:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Belle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2021 3:17:00 PM
its always hard saying goodbye especially when love is involved. Nicely done Sunshine, I hope you had a great Easter :)
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Date: 5/13/2021 12:28:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Vie Rose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2021 2:35:00 PM
Your poem speaks what they feel--eloquent words describe their parting thoughts. Superbly done, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 5/13/2021 12:28:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2021 2:07:00 PM
Great verse, Sunshine
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Date: 4/5/2021 2:10:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2021 12:52:00 PM
Visions that fleetingly disappear. A good bye kiss and let's hope he'll return.
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Date: 4/5/2021 1:45:00 PM
- Maybe ... maybe not ... who knows, Victor :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2021 12:49:00 PM
Your words go straight to the heart, and the picture is so vivid and meaningful; I should be a great winner, WARM HUGS AND BEST LUCK TO YOU ANNE-LISE
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Date: 4/5/2021 2:10:00 PM
- Thank you very much for your lovely comments and wishes, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2021 12:47:00 PM
WoW! Ann-Lise, Your chosen words work well with the photo. I found it to be so poetic. Best wishes in the contest . Have a wonderful day. PS, I chose the same photo:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/5/2021 1:43:00 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, Alexis .... I liked yours too :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2021 12:24:00 PM
anne-lise - your poem goes very well with the picture! best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 4/5/2021 1:42:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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