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Siempre estaré aquí, incluso si mi cuerpo se va, mi Alma permancerá. Es un desastre, pero es tuya. Siempre será tuya

The joy of the sun is fleeting You know you slowly sucks the spark of life out of your victims You crush and step on my feelings The negativity is like drowning in quicksand Stinky socks make me nauseous A voice that asks questions Who, what, where, why, how, which and when The control mechanism and your uncertainty The support beam should be strong For a long time it has been a cold and shady fog been between us The air smells of jealousy I've had enough ... It sucks !!! 11/08/2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved It sucks Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann 3rd place in the contest

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L. J. Carber

Date: 8/23/2020 10:28:00 AM

Very powerful, very sad, but also very courageous --congrats on all, Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/27/2020 1:29:00 AM

- Many thanks for the visit, comments and congratulations L.J. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/22/2020 5:22:00 AM

Excellent composition. You have portrayed jealousy accurately. Big Congrats on your well deserved win. Love.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/27/2020 1:28:00 AM

- Many thanks for the visit, comments and congratulations Anisha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Watt

Date: 8/12/2020 11:32:00 AM

Sunshine, great entry for the contest. Jealousy really is a monster - you describe its effects so well. Awesome image, too! Best wishes and hugs ~ John

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2020 11:22:00 AM

- A real Frankenstein's monster, John ... you can feel trapped inside a nightmare with a monster :) - Thank you very much for your support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/12/2020 11:18:00 AM

Jealousy really can "suck" the joy out of life, Sunshine. Can relate to the feeling of "drowning in quicksand," and the constant, suspicious questions. Very well written. Best wishes in Kai's contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2020 11:11:00 AM

- Jealousy is the strongest poison I know, Carolyn ... it kills all love without hesitation - Thank you very much for your support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/12/2020 11:15:00 AM

Wonderfully played out, Sunshine, I could never understand why people have those feelings. One cannot change the feelings of another person. They should just walk a away and find someone that does care. Good luck in the contest. Blessing sweet lady

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2020 11:16:00 AM

- You're right, Eve ... "One cannot change the feelings of another person" ... but reality comes to light ... some do not love ... they want to own - Thank you very much for your support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/12/2020 6:33:00 AM

Hi my good friend Anne-Lise, creatively written with your golden pen- ugly when jealousy creeps into a relationship, it goes sour quickly.Well penned Sunshine Smile, Hugs and love, Jenny.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2020 11:06:00 AM

- Love breeds jealousy, and jealousy kills love my dear friend Jenni :) - Thank you very much for your support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/12/2020 5:20:00 AM

Masterfully writing that responds to the challenge very well dearest, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/12/2020 6:59:00 AM

- Thank you very much for your support and lovely comment, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/11/2020 7:29:00 PM

Ha, ha! Love those 'stinky socks.' They sure do suck!! Big-Time!! Thanks for the chuckle, and G.L. in the contest, Anne-Lise. :) gw

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/12/2020 6:58:00 AM

- A good rule of thumb: Always wear clean socks, Gordon :))) - Thank you very much for your support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/11/2020 12:32:00 PM

Jealousy erodes the foundations of a relationship, Anne-Lise, and you spell it out well in this striking poem. I like the mixture of serious-witty:) Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/12/2020 6:56:00 AM

- Jealousy kills a relationships slowly but surely, Paul - Thank you very much for your support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/11/2020 12:12:00 PM

Love your take on the theme, Anne-Lise. You painted that scene brilliantly.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/12/2020 6:54:00 AM

- Thank you very much dear Vijay, always a lovely support from you ... I really appreciate it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/11/2020 12:10:00 PM

Well expressed here...although you know it before you see it...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2020 12:40:00 PM

- Thank you very much for your comment, Arturo - Some people keep their cards well hidden - but, it will come to light one day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan

Date: 8/11/2020 11:32:00 AM

Lack of trust really sucks. Those stinky socks would've been more than enough for me. I hope it does well in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2020 11:36:00 AM

:))) ... had to have a little humor into all this misery, Jenna :) - Thank you very much for your support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)