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Numbness and cold as a shadow over me the hate flows through like crystal clear blood I hope you will wipe away the pain 06.06.2018 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved when three lines are so much better Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One howmanysyllables.com : 11-9-9 2nd place in the contest

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/14/2018 3:42:00 PM

BIG congratulations, dear Anne-Lise, on a well-deserved win! This piece is superb! Hugs. Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/15/2018 4:11:00 AM

- Many thanks Pandita, for your friendly congratulations and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/13/2018 2:27:00 PM

Congrats to you on your win. A good verse. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2018 2:58:00 PM

- Thank you a lot, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mansi Sharma

Date: 6/11/2018 4:07:00 AM

So deep! Congratulations on your win! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2018 4:26:00 AM

- Thank you very much for your kind congratulations, Mansi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/10/2018 11:51:00 PM

beautiful wings I might add

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2018 1:38:00 AM

- Pretty :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/10/2018 11:50:00 PM

Great luminous lines SS, congrats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2018 1:37:00 AM

- Thank you Pixie, for your words and friendly visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bartholomew Williams

Date: 6/8/2018 11:17:00 AM

Anne-Lise, I like how you contrast darkness with the hope of something better at the end - well done. Congratulations on your strong placement in the contest!! All my very best to you, my friend! :) Bartholomew

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2018 12:01:00 PM

- Thank you very much for your kind congratulations, Bartholomew :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/8/2018 8:16:00 AM

Many congrats on your well deserved win in the contest, you have said so much in just a few words, it is indeed a beauty,

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2018 8:19:00 AM

- Thank you very much for your kind congratulations, Faraz :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 6/8/2018 12:58:00 AM

Sorry for the typo. I meant Great

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2018 4:19:00 AM

/// :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 6/8/2018 12:57:00 AM

Congratulations, Anne-Lise on your win.eat

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2018 4:19:00 AM

- A big thank you, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/7/2018 8:58:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win :) . Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2018 4:18:00 AM

- Thank you a lot, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/7/2018 8:25:00 PM

Congrats on your win my friend!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2018 4:17:00 AM

- A big thank you, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2018 7:13:00 PM

Love the emotion in this one! Congrats on your fine win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2018 4:16:00 AM

- Thank you very much for your kind congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/7/2018 1:34:00 PM

I would fain wipe away the pain with this congratulatory note on your contest win! :) gw

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2018 1:38:00 PM

- That was nice, Gershon :) - Thank you so much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Natasha Turner

Date: 6/7/2018 1:18:00 PM

Congrats and sending sunny hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2018 1:22:00 PM

- Thank you very much for your kind congratulations, Natasha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/7/2018 1:16:00 PM

Congrats on your win Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2018 1:21:00 PM

- Thank you a lot, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/7/2018 12:54:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2018 1:19:00 PM

- A big thank you, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/7/2018 12:35:00 PM

Back with congratulations Sunshine. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2018 1:16:00 PM

- Thank you very much for your kind congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 6/7/2018 12:22:00 PM

We all need someone to wipe away the pain... congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2018 1:13:00 PM

- Many thanks for my 2nd place in your contest, S.O. ... and thanks for your congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/7/2018 11:33:00 AM

Reads like a winner Anne-Lise, well done...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2018 1:11:00 PM

- Many thanks Charlie, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/7/2018 10:20:00 AM

There has to be pain in everyone's heart at this time .. it seems every poem I read is about the darkness.. luck in the contest..hugs eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2018 1:11:00 PM

- Thank you so very much for kindly comment on my poem Eve, I truly appreciate your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/7/2018 7:08:00 AM

Excellent. Well written Anne-Lise. Good luck in the contest :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2018 7:10:00 AM

- Many thanks Heidi, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 6/7/2018 4:46:00 AM

Hate and pain, two words I'd like to delete from my vocabulary...Well Done Anne-Lise...Good Luck in the contest...Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2018 4:50:00 AM

- Yes, I wish it was so easy Charles :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/7/2018 1:48:00 AM

Powerful, poetical and romantic. Good luck my friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2018 4:23:00 AM

- Thank you, Demetrios ... for kindly comment on my poem, I truly appreciate your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 6/6/2018 7:48:00 PM

the longest minute is one of pain...good luck in the contest a very strong poem

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2018 4:21:00 AM

- Thank you so very much for kindly comment on my poem Frederic, I truly appreciate your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/6/2018 6:58:00 PM

I hope so too...cause pain is a faithful friend...All the best Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2018 4:20:00 AM

- Thank you so very much for kindly comment on my poem, I truly appreciate your visit Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)