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20.03.2025
Anne-Lise Andresen
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Hungry morning dew perpetual heavy haze icy embrace blood red rubies another victim in a dark alley beaten with chains Bruises Pulverizes the earthlings existence without hesitation A beast in human form crouched as a wildcat

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Duke Beaufort
Date: 3/25/2025 1:29:00 PM
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Anne-Lise, I'm reading this and thinking how similar our thought process may be. We do have a problem with beasts and it strikes us as cruel. You are very perceptive and talented. Smiles!!
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Margaret Foster
Date: 3/20/2025 9:07:00 PM
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As others have said, a dark and disturbing Poem. Your imagery is quite graphic. Well, written. Anne-lise.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2025 4:31:00 AM
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- Thank you very much for your comment, Margaret :) - hugs
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/20/2025 7:31:00 PM
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So sad when there is so much violence these days. Well said my friend. Have a great weekend. love phyl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2025 4:30:00 AM
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- No one can feel 100% safe in this world... blind violence... an innocent victim... - Have a lovely weekend too, dear Phyllis :) - hugs
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 3/20/2025 7:10:00 PM
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Powerful write with excellent imagery. Dark and sad Anne-Lise
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2025 4:28:00 AM
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- Dark and cruel... when "predators" go wild, Oliver - hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/20/2025 5:57:00 PM
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such dark chilling imagery Anne-Lise ' a beast in human form' strikes a chord to quite a few innocent people I'm afraid:-( hugs jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2025 4:26:00 AM
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- When the world is shown naked... the horrible will emerge... yes, truly terrifying Jan - hugs
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/20/2025 5:27:00 PM
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Yep, seen more violence than I would have liked to. Never makes sense.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2025 4:24:00 AM
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- We see or hear about it every day, Joe - hugs
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/20/2025 11:49:00 AM
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Some humans don't deserve to be called that, those inflicting violence on others. Tom
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2025 4:23:00 AM
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- Worse than a predator, Tom - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/20/2025 10:49:00 AM
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I enjoyed reading your powerful write. "Good Luck" Hugs... Have a fun/blessed day as you write away...........
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2025 4:22:00 AM
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- Thank you very much for your comment and good luck, Paula :) - hugs
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John Read
Date: 3/20/2025 9:51:00 AM
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Good luck in the contest Anne I've given up trying lol. xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2025 10:32:00 AM
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- I should have given up a long time ago in Brian Strand's contest ... N/A, N/A and N/A ... :))) - Thank you for your comment, John :) - hugs
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Jay Narain
Date: 3/20/2025 9:42:00 AM
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Nice poem
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2025 10:32:00 AM
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- Jay, thank you for your comment :) - hugs

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